New SS.. Revisit of Past...Last Part, page-31

Hey all.. here is my new SS... it will be only of six to seven parts... but i should tell in advance, it will be a bit sad one and moreover i don't own original concept. i had read it in some magazine a long ago, but story had touched my heart. remembered it till now. so thought to write on that basic concept but made some changes accordingly...the characters are same but CS totally different from QH... you will get to know, as you will read and they will enter in the story...here is part-1

Part-1

It was the very first day of First year MBA classes in the college..''..

Zoya Farukhi was sitting in the First table on center row''

Hey MSK'' Tanveer came wearing denim and kurta , hugged and wished Hello to Zoya'.. zoya too wished her with a smile'

So how were the holidays and how is this new college? Tune to puri research kar h li hogi ispe? Tanveer asked with a smile'..

Holidays were good. Enjoyed a lot''. Zoya said with a smile and about college, main to yhan scholarship pe ayi hun, you know better, after all your father is trusty here'''..

Yaar, yahi to problem hai, main to ye MBA karna hi nahi chahti. Main to fashion world mein jana chahti thi'. But dad never agrees for it'''. He said , nahi apna college hai, log to is mein admission ke liye din raat ek karte hain and you are ignoring it''. Tanveer said in a careless voice'''aur upar se ek tu hai na hum sab ki watt lagan eke liye? Yaar kya jarurat hoti hai tujhe itna padne ki aur har baar first ane ki? Upar se tu itni achi kyon hai? Agar mere Mom dad ka bas chale na to who tujhe apni beti bna lein''. Tanveer said teasing zoya, to which zoya just smiled a bit''

Hey don't tease my best frined''.. said Ayaan coming and sitting near zoya'..

Ayaan, you are not my best friend'''. Zoya said with a furious face''..

Yaar, I am not your best friend, but you are mine na, pta nahi best friend ke naam se itna chidti kyon hai'''. he said smiling'''.main to hamesha tumhe offer karta hun, be my girlfriend, I leave lal other girls' but all my trails fail'''.. Ayaan said with a puppy face''.

Yaar sach mein in last six years, Ayaan to try kar ke thak chukka hai, ab to maan ja'''' Tanveer added''. To which zoya kept just quite''.

Bus ho gyi iski bolti band? Tranveer said''''.

Ayaan and Tanveer could feel tension as well as sadness on zoya's face'.

Leave it Tanveer'. Ayaan said''. Anyways.. Finally our gang is again together in new class, new college''.. bus ab to koi achi si hasina aa jaye class mein''Ayaan said while looking around in the class for new faces'..

Bus ho gya fir se shuru? Koi ladki hogi puri Delhi mein, jise tujhe purpose nahi kiya aj tak? Zoya said''

Wahi to baat hai na, that's why, I am looking for new face''. Ayaan winked'..

When someone spoke from backside''' hey Tanveer''..

Tanveer turned back with surprise'''.. Asad? She ran and hugged him' he too hugged her back with a smile'.

Asad. What are you doing here? Tanveer asked him almost dragging him with her to the table where Ayaan and zoya were sitting''

I got admission here... Asad said'''.

But you didn't even tell me? Tanveer said'

Just wanted to surprise. he said''..

Hey guys, meet my friend'''.. Tanveer said with excitement''..Asad Ahmed Khan from Bhopal''.. He too got admission here'.this is Ayaan. She introduced Asad to Ayaan'' both wished a formal hello. And this is Zoya''.. aka MSK''

Hello Zoya''.. Asad wished zoya looking into her eyes'''..

Hello. Zoya held his hand hesitatingly''..

Can I sit here? He asked zoya''.

Hey this is my place'. Ayaan said suddenly''.. I always sit next to MSK''

Asad smiled to it sitting on the table next to zoya with Tanveer''.. MSK?

Miss Salwaar Kameez' Tanveer said'''.she always wear such clothes so we have named her MSK''. You know. But she is our besty'''..to which Asad smiled''' but zoya was lost in her own world as if listening nothing of their conversation'''.As soon a she got free, she left the class...

Zoya, wait''' I am coming'' Ayaan shouted'''.

But she didn't listen and went away'''

Are, ye zoya ko kya ho gya? Tanveer asked''.. she didin't even stopped for us''

Ya, don't know, why she became so serious suddenly'''.. Ayaan said , Tanveer lets go and check her''.

Lets go Asad''.. Tanveer asked Asad to come with them''..

Zoya was sitting on alone on a bench on a lonely place outside in the lawn with tears in her eyes'''.

How are you zoya''. Asad came and asked her sitting near her''

Zoya just shivered and made a small distance from him' Asad lowered his head on zoya's behavior''

I''. I am fine Asad'' how are you? She asked without looking towards him'.

Why did you left zoya? You could wait for me to come back, we could talk'' Asad to had tears in his eyes'

Were you in the condition to talk Asad? Or were you responsible enough to talk? She looked towards him..

I''..I am sorry zoya'''.he said in a lower voice''.

Zoya didn't reply, just nodded her head in yes''..

Can we be friends again? He said''. Best frineds like before?

Zoya looked in a shock towards him'.. Without replying, she was about to leave'''. Asad held her hand'' zoya was shocked'''..

Zoya, please. I have come here just for you''' he said with teary eyes''. Zoya looked into his eyes'..

Hey zoya..she listened form Ayaan''. She shrugged Asad's hand''.

Ayaan was running towards them, Tanveer was too following him'''. Everything fine? He asked with concern''.

Ya'. All zoya said''..

Then why these tears?

n. nothing' zoya said''. Eyes mein kuch chala gya tha''..

rona bad karo zoya'.. I hate tears zoya'''' Ayaan said in Rajesh Khanna style making zoya smile''

Ayaan, you are a nautanki'''' zoya punched him''.

Asad you here you left for some work na? Tanveer asked''

Ya, my job was done, just saw zoya sitting alone here, so came to her'.. Asad said''.

Chalo, naye college ki canteen to explore karien'''.maybe I get some new girls there''.. Ayaan said with naughty smile'..

Ye Ayaan na pagal hai, har week nayi girlfriend'' pta nahi kab sudhrega''. Tanveer said in irritation.

Zoya was sitting alone on the stair of her home thinking about the day and Asad with teary eyes''when Zainab came''

Zoya, tu thik to hai na meri beti? Jab se college se ayi hai, udaas hai? Is everything fine with new college?

Zoya looked towards her mother with teary eyes''.. Ammi, he is back'''

What? Zainab was surprised'''. Asad?

Zoya nodded in yes'' he is in my class now'''and tannu's friend''.

He talked to you?

He said sorry''.

Did you?

I didn't reply''.

And did you told him about.? Zainab left her sentence incomplete in worry''

No ammi. Never in my worst dreams'''''Zoya shouted''. I will never'' and she hugged her ammi crying'.while zainab consoled her''

Zoya chod de ye college. Khin aur admission lelo'..

Nahi ammi. I can't''.. yhan to scholarship mili hai'' we can't afford fee of any other college''.

But how will you handle zoya? He will be there around you all the time'.

Ammi. Wo zoya to kab ki mar chuki hai, jo use janti thi''. And this one is quite practical and hard'' don't worry, I will manage'. Zoya said wiping her tears''Ehsaan so gya?

Ya, he just slept now'''.. was crying for you. I thought you are a bit upset, so didn't disturb you'lets go inside, its cool here'.. Zainab said'''

Ya ammi, you go, I will just come''.. zoya said still lost in thoughts'..

Part-2 Page-8

Part-3 Page-12

Part-4 Page-16

Part-5 Page-22

Part-6 Page-26

Last Part Page-31

WoW!!! its beautiful. Asad and Zoya know each other😲 i guess they were best frnds before. no wonder she didnt wanted to be best frnd with Ayaan. i wonder what happened between Asad and Zoya awe... my cutie pies are in pain😭 its really sad to see them in pain. by the way, are you gonna give it a sad ending?😭

Originally posted by: rosamale

WoW!!! its beautiful. Asad and Zoya know each other😲 i guess they were best frnds before. no wonder she didnt wanted to be best frnd with Ayaan. i wonder what happened between Asad and Zoya awe... my cutie pies are in pain😭 its really sad to see them in pain. by the way, are you gonna give it a sad ending?😭

Continue soonish and pls pm me if possible😳

Thanks a lot dear.. for beatuiful comment. yup, they are in pain. but why, yo will know later...
and i never give sad endings. i myself hate sad endings. even in original story, it was ad infect very sad one, but i have already decided to change it...so for that i assure you...

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Thanks a lot dear.. for beatuiful comment. yup, they are in pain. but why, yo will know later...
and i never give sad endings. i myself hate sad endings. even in original story, it was ad infect very sad one, but i have already decided to change it...so for that i assure you...

nice start. who is this Ehsaan? Sound interesting.

Originally posted by: spn2013

nice start. who is this Ehsaan? Sound interesting.

Continue Soon...

you will know soon... thanks a lot dear...

Originally posted by: rosamale

really?😃 you are not giving it a sad ending🥳thank you sooo much🤗now i am waiting for your next part when will you update?

may be tomorrow...

nice start n i feel ehsaan is asya son sy if iam wrong

it is really a nice story..

Beautiful yr. Plz cnt soon nd PM me