AsYa FF ~ Mere Jazbaat ~ T#2 ~ NOTE PG. 123 - Page 43

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: saida.m

Okay! I am finally commenting on this story!


I have been reading this for the past few days and finally am up to speed! And can I just say that it is AWESOME!

OMG! I love this!
I have always wanted to see Asad begging for all the hatred and venom he has spouted at Zoya! but show wali Zoya is way too forgiving!

I LOVE that she went back! - You go girl! And Asad had to trapeze across the globe to get to her!
I really want to see Zoya introducing Asad to her haunts in NYC, but we all know its so not going to happen on the show, so you, my dear are doing a FANTASTIC job at portraying that in your story!

I love Zoya's friends and how Asad bonded with them! And the date and scar revelation and teh confession!! I loved that bit!

And the KISS!!!

Its a great story and I am loving every single part of it!
Please keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

👏

Much love,
Simi!


OH MY GOD! YAY! I'm so happy you've been reading it! I'm so glad you liked it so much 😳

I am actually updating this weekend so you're lucky 😆

Thank you so much for the lovely comment! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
I hope you're talking about today.. Which is already Sunday here in London 😃

P.S - I hope you saw the essay I wrote for you after reading chapter 25 😆
Edited by x_Mishti_x - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chap25 unresd at pg65
Edited by -HoneyBunch- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey forgot to mention!
Loved Zoya's dress! Nice choice Monica and Annie :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x

I hope you're talking about today.. Which is already Sunday here in London 😃


P.S - I hope you saw the essay I wrote for you after reading chapter 25 😆


I am writing it now, but I don't know if it'll be done tonight. (Saturday night here) BUT tomorrow night for sure. 😃

I DID! I will reply soon! I hope you saw my reply to your other comment for Ch. 24 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

Hey forgot to mention!

Loved Zoya's dress! Nice choice Monica and Annie :)


YAY! Thanks 😃

*runs to read unres*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

Res Chap25

Will Unres soon 😃

Unresd!!

I just can't stop drooling

Loved it to the power of infinity..It was dreamy, it was beautiful, it was so heart-touching, it was ... ... ...I have no words to express how much I loved this!!

Back to my AsYa-land, Dream-land, Wonder-land, lala-land


Hayeee Now that is a HUGE compliment. I don't think I've ever rendered someone speechless and resorting to emoji's to speak for them 😆


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mochhug


I am writing it now, but I don't know if it'll be done tonight. (Saturday night here) BUT tomorrow night for sure. 😃

I DID! I will reply soon! I hope you saw my reply to your other comment for Ch. 24 😳


Yes I did 😳

It's currently 04:45am here and I'm online 🤣

I'll be waiting for the update .. I'm pretty sure it means Monday morning for me if you're planning to post it Sunday night your time 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
monica u promised u ll update in weekend ...update karo ..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x

Unres comment on page 43 🤣


Res for this update and I will read and comment now 🤣

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OMGGG!! THE DRESS FINALLY!!! SERIOUSLY THAT IT ONE HELL OF A SEXY DRESS. ELEGANT AND ALLURING AS WELL.. I LOVE IT!!!! IF ONLY SHE COULD WEAR SOMETHING LIKE THAT IN THE SHOW.. I SWEAR I STARED AT IT FOR LIKE 2 MINUTES .. IT IS JUST THE RIGHT THING. NOT TOO MUCH SKIN ON SHOW AND HUGS THE BODY JUST AT THE RIGHT PLACES.. ASAD YOU BETTER CARRY HER TO BED AS SOON AS SHE WALKS IN FRONT OF YOU IN THAT DRESS 🤣 I SCROLLED DOWN TO SEE THE DRESS AND I LOVE IT .. NOW I'M GOING TO READ THE ENTIRE UPDATE 😆


I have no words. I was hoping you'd like it. But THIS!? 😳

Yeahh Zoya.. You're so right! All he wants is friendship 😳

🤣 Give the poor girl a break. The note said that didn't it? 😆

Don't worry Asad, I'm silently praying for you here that she wears the dress for you 😆

Pleaseee send me envelopes with that printed on them and I will treasure them for the rest of my life. Guarding them with my life 🤣

I thought you'd like that 😉

Wow Zoya, I swear you better do whatever he says after this night. He's you gulam?! I have an idea 😃 Let's trade places. You sit here and read Asad planning a date for me 🤣 and oh yeah.. Do me a favor and send me a Dilshaad in my house as well. She could come in quite handy at time 🤣

I'm still in awe of how much people liked this set up 😆 This was just one of my own fantasies. I guess it's not just mine

A limousine?! 😲 Zoyaaa!! I'm so jealous .. If only I could get someone to do all this for me 😭 I know it'll never happen but everyone has a right to dream 🤣 Yeah I've been into a limousine while going to a few weddings and also both proms that were held by my high school but never had someone like Asad send me a limousine to go to him 🤣

Awww babes! I'm sure you'll get your own fairytale! I know how you feel. I'm writing my own fantasies through Asya I guess it's true. Write what you know. And you'll be sucessful. Not that I'm a proper writer 😆 But people seem to appreciate it 😃

And now a horse carriage?! 😲 I've forever wanted to get on one of those and travel to a beautiful place with my beloved, linking arms.. *sigh* Keep on dreaming Annie 🤣 but seriously?! Asad, in this sort of avatar?! I would love it if Gul Khan actually read this and stole some ideas 🤣 would definitely be something worth watching as it is a treat reading it 😆

Sigh. I wish Gul would show this. 😭 Trust me Annie, I know how you feel! It's my dream too. But sadly that won't happen to me. I just know it 😆

The little notes int he envelopes

😳 Again I thought you'd like that 😃

I wonder why Asad keeps getting butterflies. Everyone who is asked out on a date with him should be getting butterflies and their stomachs should be doing somersaults and kick boxing in there! 😆

Cut him some slack girl! He's telling his Shezadi how he feels 😆

I want something like this to be done for me 😭 😭 roses and notes and horse rides and limousines

Awww. Lets make a deal. The minute, I mean the MINUTE, you find a beau, or a guy, who likes you, and I do the same (yeah fat chance hahaha) we will both advise each other's boys on what to do to impress the other 😃 Deal?

"Before she could complete her thoughts, she felt a warm hand encircle her waist, and pull her back" ☺️ ☺️ I have no words to describe this.. Sensuous maybe? ☺️

Hahahaha I thought of you when I wrote that, as well as goingreen. You guys make me blush with your writing.

"Asad watched her as she came closer, and felt his heart stop. Time slowed, and the wind blew through her silky hair. It was just like the first time he had seen her. All dressed in red. Except this time, it didn't make his heart ache to watch her. It made it soar. He smiled broadly, as he drank in how beautiful she looked in the dress. A deep red hue, the dress hung effortlessly on her every curve, highlighting them, and hugging her dainty figure. The rhinestones on the haltered neckline sparkled along with her dimpled smile, and the small earrings she'd chosen to compliment the dress."

The way you described the dress, I could literally picture Zoya standing in front of me in that dress and Asad's expression is definitely something to watch. Asad's description of what he felt couldn't have been described any better. Reminded me of when Zoya chose the dupatta Dilshaad had chosen for her daughter in law and when Asad saw her walk in the hall, his expression was amazing! And your description made me picture that 👏

AWW I'm glad! I was actually going for a combo of that moment, and the one from the Jashn-E-Saugat, and the first time he ever saw her

THE DRESS AGAIN I can't help but just ogle at it. Amazing! Such a beautiful dress 😆 Asad surely lost his senses .. Yeah I'm kind of trying to not picture the shawl in the whole imagination 😆

Omg 🤣 I swear your excitement for the dress has made me blush, laugh and smile like a blithering idiot! 🤪

"He unconsciously drew circles on her stomach with his hands" *cough* Are you trying to kill me? 😳 anyone would turn into fire when he touches 😳

INDEED

The way Asad made Zoya feel special just made me smile.. Literally.. They way you set out the scene and the descriptions .. A heart warming scene.. Finally! He knows about the scene.. I was very calm from the beginning because somewhere in my head a little voice was shouting that Asad would have nothing volatile to say about the scar and I was right .. Asad can never be so demeaning 😃

YAY! I'm glad! 😳 I was worried about how to do it, but I wanted it to be at beginning, so that her reaction to his words, has nothing to do with the scar, but rather show her that he loves, with it, and for it too.

Ohh so kachorian was what he trying to find 😆 I had no idea .. I was literally trying to guess after reading the update before but all my attempts of thinking of something were futile 🤣

😆 I wasn't sure a lot of people would guess, but surprisingly they did. Don't feel too bad 😛

A WINK FROM ASAD?! HIS WINKS HAVE ALWAYS BEEN SOMETHING APPEALING.. I JUST FIND HIS WINKS SO EFFING SEXY!!!! ☺️ ☺️

I was trying to recreate the wink he gave Ansh in Mangalpur, and pretend it was meant for Zoya ☺️

And Zoya is definitely right about that! Asad is definitely dekhne layak cheez hai!! Anyone would fall flat after seeing him 😆

Isn't he though But I want his short hair again 😭

May you have this dance? Damn! you may have each and every dance 😆 Dancing under the stars with Asad .. Zoya you better feel like an effing queen 😭 😭 I get he's trying to make up for the mistake he made and the hurt he caused but all this?! I would for one night shove it into one corner and appreciate all of this and actually forgive him 😆

LMAO. Isn't that what she's doing? Haha. I mean she's being cheeky, and teasing him. 😆 But I love you for talking to Zoya. And can I mention how much I LOVE that you're like talking to Zoya throughout this "essay" 🤣

That kiss left me like ☺️ .. literally 😆

I'm glad ☺️ I still feel I could have described their reaction a little better after they kissed, like when their foreheads are touching an all. Maybe I'll do a drabble.

And finally!!! Something we've all been waiting for Asad to say 😳

Only took him 25 chapters 🤣

Monica! You have risen the expectations of what I want from a man 🤣

I am glad to hear that 🤣

I loved the update!! I think you can tell from the essay I wrote for you 🤣

I CAN TELL!!! I LOVE YOU FOR THIS ESSAY! I'm sooo glad you like it 🤗



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