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Originally posted by: NAVI55

Hi... Awesome update... thnx

Please pm me when you update if possible... ya sure
Looking forward to reading more of this story👍🏼 m glad
Please make sophia jump of a bridge🤣 You are the author after all🤣 hahaha no i will not let her die but but but ek slap to banta hai

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read all d parts in one go...
awesome piece of work...hats off...
continue soon...
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so here is the next part, i knw u r angry with me for posting it late but a big sorry


recap:-mohsin's entry as zoya closed friend and silent lover, it's asya's wedding anniversary and both asad and zoya are losted in there past memories and cursing eachother as they don't knw wht's reality, zeenat is tense due to zoya's condition and had decided something to bring someone in her life

Part 5:-

"what happen bhaijan why r u crying" ayaan said hugging him back..."ayaan i'm missing zoya very much" he said with a heavy voice. they break the hug and ayaan bring the water for him and after sometime he was feeling better they both settle down but asad was still sad...anyone can see his pain in those bloodshot eyes...ayaan tried to change the topic but failed bcz asad was'nt replying anything but after sometime he spoke up with full concern "ayaan...how's ami and najma?" "they r fine bhaijan don't worry for them" ayaan replied but he asked another question "did they miss me?" ayaan was silent "please tell me truth..." he added "they...they hate u bhaijan after what u did with zoya they..." ayaan stopped bcz asad start crying "everyone hates me ayaan...i don't knw why why they r doing this with me...after death of ur mom...ami shifted to ur house without thinking about me and then najma...i was broken and i accept it that i was rude to zoya...not rude very rude but just bcz of my behaiviour she left and never came back...my wedding with sofia is just bcz of zoya but everyone thinks tht i'm wrong and they hate me" asad said while crying...ayaan consoled him and after sometime he left as he got a call from home

ayaan is the only one who did'nt broke his relation with asad, he was the only one who come to meet him daily with whom asad share his pain...he refused when everyone said tht asad cheated zoya he tried to tell everyone tht asad loves zoya more than him but no one was ready to listen him he tried alot but was failed bcz he don't have any prove about it...everyone are just believing what they want to including asad.

newyork, 1 week later:-

it was party on mohsin's house...it was his birthday...party was in full swing evryone enjoyed alot espacially sidra, she was happy bcz she spend the whole day with mohsin her best friend "mady".. party was over only zoya and her family was left to say bye...when everyone were busy in talking zeenat moved to the kitchen signaling mohsin to come after her, he followed her and they both went to the kitchen "what is this mohsin? why did'nt u said anything to zoya?, i told u na to say it during the party" zeenat yelled "api, i'm afraid bcz i knw she will say no and then i will lose my best friend" mohsin replied without looking to zeenat "don't worry mohsin nothing will happen like that...i m with u just go and confess ur love" zeenat said with a smile to increase his confidence but he was'nt looking satisfied with make zeenat tense but she tried to build his confidence "i told u na mohsin nothing like that will happen and if zoya will get angry then i will took whole blame on me so plz relax and do what i'm saying, look i knw u love her and she will be lucky to have in her life" this time she succeded, mohsin nodded with a excited face and went to the hall while zeenat followed him.

mohsin came outside and without wasting time he moved to zoya who was sitting on the couch after anwar, hold her hand and brought her in the centre of the room...everyone were looking with a confused expression but zeenat was the only one who seemed happy ...he sat on his knees took out a ring from his pocket and look at zoya "zoya will u marry me?" he said with full confidence while zoya looked him with a confused and shocked expression she did'nt understand tht what was the need of it? but she replied not a yes, it was something else "but why mohsin...was this needed, we are just friend and i dn't want to give it another name." "but why zoya? u have to answere today...look at asad he had married to someoe else he had moved forward in his life so y not u?" zeenat said taking some steps towards zoya "he can api...but i can't marry to someone else, i'm still his wife" zoya said with a loud voice "and y u are bringing asad in all this? it's not tht he had moved forward and not me, the thing is mohsin is my friend, best friend but not more than that...and i also can't marry to anyone since i'm someone's wife" she added "u can zoya...u can ask for divorce" zeenat said "api plz i never thought for divorce" zoya yelled...sidra was looking everything with a confused look she moved to mohsin who was looking on his laps with tears in his eyes "what happen mady? y r u crying mady? plz don't cry i don't like this" sidra said wiping his tears and zeenat took it as a advantage. zeenat moved to sidra and sat after her "sidra tell me onething...do u want mady to be ur papa?" zeenat asked to sidra and sidra looked happy hearing this "really? mdy my papa? this means mady can came with me to my school as my papa?" sidra said with excitedment "yes he can" zeenat replied "wow, mady will be my papa...yeaa" sidra was very happy and she hugged zeenat, after broken the hug zeenat moved to zoya "did u see this zoya? sidra needs a father.. a mothers love is not all.. a child always needs a father and sidra has no problem with mohsin as her father...even she is happy?" "but api how can i? i''m still his..." zoya did'nt continue but zeenat replied "divorce" "he will never divorce me api, never" zoya said with a confidence "bcz if he wants to do this so he can do it before, in these six years" she added "so we all will go to india and demand for divorce" zeenat was also confident...zoya looked at her with unbelievable look "do u want me to go back to india in tht country where i lost everything api" "u lost everything there but believe me zoya u will win all ur happiness back in the same country...so if he will divorce u then will u marry mohsin?" zeenat asked and zoya looked at amwar and he blink his eyes which shows tht he had approve it so she nodded her head in approval too and without saying anything else she left from there zeenat was happy the most and then mohsin first zeenat hugged mohsin he hugged her back and then she moved to anwar "anwar plz book our tickets of india...we all will go back to india" anwar nodded

they all left for india in next two days they reached their...dilshaad along with rashid had came there to pick them...dilshaad knws everything what happened in the party and she was happy that finally zoya decided to move forward...rashid had arranged a guest house bcz they refused to live in there house...everyone were taking rest in there rooms but mohsin and sidra went to park to enjoy they both were sitting on the bench of park...sidra was enjoying her ice-cream and mohsin was cracking jokes "ballons" sidra yelled "mady mady plz bring those ballons for me plz" sidra added "ohkay my princess...u sit here i'll back" mohsin moved to tht guy who was selling it but guy moved on the other side so mohsin followed her forgotting tht sidra is alone in the park...

at guest house:-

zoya was in her room lying on the bed "ya ALLAH why this happened to me? mohsin is just my friend. accepting this proposal is just bcz of sidra... i knw tht sidra is close to mohsin and he will always take care of her...but can i forget asad? even the worst thing is i have to face him again.. tears were pouring down her cheeks but zoya she was losted in her thought and may be in his memories, six years had passed she can't understand tht y she remember him? y her heart is still connected to him after he betrayed her "may be i will forget him after getting divorce...i hope i can...i hope it's possible and nw i have to be ready to meet him anytime, to face him again"

at park:-
sidra was sitting on the bench when she saw a beautifull butterfly infront of her, she was going to touch her when itflew away so sidra start running after it and she did'nt realized tht when reached in the centre of the road, that fly flew far away and when sidra realized tht she had losted she stopped and turned to go back but in a same time a car hitted her, a guy saved her but her leg start bleeding so without wasting time he took her to the hospital on the same time in the park when mohsin reacked there he did'nt found sidra there so he get tense and start searching her.

precap:-sidra was brought to the hospital by tht guy, they introduced eachother...sidra gave her mother's number to him so he called her...sidra talked to zoya and told tht she is in hospital...zoya inform this to mohsin and they both reached the hospital and there she meet him...

well i finished it here, and i hope tht u like it, it's sad i knw but plz look at the topic name and then think tht it have to be sad and u knw wht 1 thing i love to read,write and watch sad scenes and also i always like sad songs, i don't knw y but it's true and due to this reason this story is my most favourite story bcz it is wht i actually want but don't worry i will not give u a sad ending😃

P.S:-this update is espacially for aman93, Maliaa and aish-au


Edited by asyaarshilover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww thats sooo sad I feel really bad for Asad at least they get to see each other now thanx for the PM and update soon :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice..even this time also it was very sad..
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this is fabulous
please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Still its zoya's mistake did not confront asad... about the issue
and about sidra... unacceptable


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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it 😃
Plsss continue ...

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