ASYA-Life Is Not Easy As It Seems To Be...

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Hello people,this is Ranya introducing my story to you all.Before posting its chapters,I just want your veiws regarding whether I should start it or not.So here goes the two lines introduction.


Introduction

"Life is not easy as it seems to be is about a girl who has all her life is trouble.She lost her everything at a young age.Her parents are gone forever,her grandparents are gone forever,and her everything has gone which she really owns.She is wondering what is her life is about when she gets trouble and failures at every step.And what would happen in her love life?Would she always be wondering about her surroundings?Would love make her life easy?"

Well this is it.In the starting you only need to know two characters Zoya and Asad.Rest will be revealed as soon the story passes.

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CHAPTER 1:ALONE
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice
plz pm me for next part
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Its interesting. Do continue soon.

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Really interesting Ranii di...eager to read moree :)

Continue soon! :)
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Sounds interesting... pm me, i sent you request...
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..Thank you for liking and commenting guys... Hope you will like first part...
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Chapter 1:Alone

She was walking across a street to her rented house in a blurry haze. It was dark and shadowy and she could barely make out where the front door was, and all she could think was"What to do next?".
She stepped on hermade it to the door and knocked. No one answered for a very long time.She decided to see if it was unlocked. It was, and she went in.

The house was a mess. Things had been thrown on the floor in haste and broken glass was scattered about the halls from a smashed window.She remembered what her landlady said about her house being broken into.She stepped inside and closed the door behind her and went off to look for her if she still could listen her.


"Khaala?"Her voice sounded eerie, not like it usually would and she slurred my words as if she was, not drunk but tired, "Is anyone here?"

A shuffling noise came from the living room. She walked toward it automatically, her feet just kept going but they stopped when she saw what was inside the room.

A man was holding something in his hands and was pointing the thing at a woman. Her eyesight was becoming too blurry to see what exactly was going on, but when the woman spoke I knew exactly who it was."Khaala!!"She shouted,"What the heck are you doing?"

"Shutup!The man sounded.She didn't know who was he.She never heard his sound but only thing she knew it was so terrible and terrible sounding.There was a bang,he kicked her down on the floor.Then there was another bang on her landlady's face.

She watched her fall to the floor and the man slowly turn to her. She could not tell who he was, but she knew he was not happy that she was there,and he was the one of forced my landlady to quit living in their house. He started to come after me with the thing he was holding in his hand and she ran out the door not knowing where she was going. Everything around her turned to shadowy objects that she could not make out. She was having a hard time trying to figure out what was going on and where she was as the whole house was mess like a fish market.Finally the man spoke,"Get out of this house.Pta nhi kahan kahan se chale aate hain muft ka khaane.Pockets are penniless and dreams are beyond expectations.Aap yahan par rhi humein bilkul acha nhi laga.Khuda Hafiz"
"Lekin main jaungi kahan?Please don't do this."

"Mazirat chahta hun.Jahan marzi jaakar rahiye.Bas yahan se jayiye."

She caught her bag and started moving on the long silent dark road wondering with tears."Now where would I go?"She saw a park and thereby moved in and sits on the bench.She takes out the only reminder of her father from her bag,"Abbu...Kyu kiya mere saath aisa.Kyun?What was my mistake?Kyun har gaye the apni zindagi se aap."

"I am Zoya Farooqi and I have been wondering what my life is
about? Well, practically I don't know who I am,
where I am, what I'm supposed to do because of
all the lies that the people sent me.
I mean all the people. My heavenly
family, the teachers, principals, secretaries, I
mean… what is going on?
Because of all my parents' lies, there're dead.
Gone. Forever. I have never remembered their
face.
Was my mother beautiful?But I somehow remember my father dieng but how my mother died?I don't know. I wanted to know those questions. But
I got a big Failure on those questions. The truth is: I
didn't ever know.And today my another landlady threw me out of her house.Now where will I go?I have my own house in London which my father has left for me.But I am here to seek for my sibling-I don't her name,look nothing about her just the fact she is two years younger to me and lived with my grandmother in India.But where are they I don't know."



Hey people this was a short update about Chapter 1-Alone,putting forward one character-Zoya Farooqi. Hope you all will like it and also hope for a response.Thanks guys.Love all. ❤️

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