The stranger in the cafe ~ AsYa Drabble ~

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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: s120
Short and sweet! 😃 A good read

I think your teacher is mean 🤔 😆

Aww S you are so sweet 😃🤗

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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: risingsea101
Nice one
Love at first sight wala feelings 😆
I'm sure inside your teacher was like "Does she like AsYa too!!" 🤣

hahaha that's highly possible 🤣

yeah love at first smile wala feeling it is 😆😆

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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Enchantress
Oh I love this!!!

thanks dee 😃

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Livingfree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

Aww S you are so sweet 😃🤗

🤗

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anushreemishra

@anushreemishra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

This was really really sweet...i guess your teacher was lost in the beauty of this story so couldn't say anything😆but this was short and sweet😊

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SANYA

@cutiesanya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

sweet short concised

even it wasshort but it was gud

luved asad , got hooked to zoya

pehli nazar wala pyar haan... filmy

i luved it keep writing

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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: anushreemishra
This was really really sweet...i guess your teacher was lost in the beauty of this story so couldn't say anything😆but this was short and sweet😊

thank you so much 😃

the teacher didn't comment on anyone's fiction! 🤔

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Sadie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: cutiesanya
sweet short concised
even it wasshort but it was gud
luved asad , got hooked to zoya
pehli nazar wala pyar haan... filmy
i luved it keep writing

thanks i'm glad you liked it! yeah a pehli nazar wala pyaar, totally UN-ASAD i know 😆