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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
nice update.nice to see possessive asad.please continue soon.thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Thanks for the update and PM...

Asad jealous track...nice

waiting for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
awww...asad is so cute...totally possessive...loved him totally!!!
let them realize their love soon...
p.s...this story is awesome...dont be disheartened at lack of likes or comments...
continue soon...Im waitin 4 ur pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
superb.
wen r u going 2 update next ? and wen u do can u plz pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
hey,lovely update😊...update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

Wow

I loved this part

AsYa were amazing

I guess Asad is becomming really possesive

I like it

I loved AsYa a lot



Try giving longer updates though

u liked it !! thanks...!
i'll try to give longer updates from next time...😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
wen r u gng 2 update next?? plz send me a pm.
really excited 2 see jealous n possesive asad.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89

thanks to every one who had liked or commented on my story !!

many have given their important suggestions...i'll try to implement all of them, but for this part, i've given a long update !!

read n enjoy !!😃

Part6:

Asad: so, I got angry n brought her home !

asad's dad: did u atleast ask her if she's k with him calling her zoe ? he said it n u believed ?

Zoya: but wat he said is right uncle ! I don't have any objection with rahul calling me zoe as he has also become a gud friend of mine'.!

Asad: see dad! Wat she'z telling!

Zoya's dad: wats this zoya? How can u compare asad n rahul, as u both r best friends since childhood n rahul is just friend from 1 day !

Zoya: where am I comparing both of them dad? I didn't know wat happened between rahul n asad! As I came from washroom, asad brought me here without even telling me anything ! if asad don't like anyone to cal me zoe then I'll tel rahul not to cal me like that ! why so much scene ? I really don't know that he's so possessive of my name! n dad, friendship doesn't need ages to build, it just requires two people understanding eachother in a minute or over years !

Asad: yes! I'm possessive of that name coz til now nobody called u with that name except me n from now also, nobody else should cal u by that name! that's all

Zoya: k. I'll tel rahul! Now is it k for u ?

Asad: smiles'..yes! dad n uncle''..u both go as we have lots of work to do !

Asad's dad: wen they fight, they need us, but wen they patch up, they don't need us''!

Zoya: yes uncle! Now please''.u both go !

After they both go''..

Asad: now tel me, did u like pub? Did u enjoy pub n dance ? wil u come with me again ?

Zoya: hold on asad! Lemme answer them first, before u ask more questions!

Asad: how much more time zoe? I've been holding these questions from the time we came out of pub !

Zoya: I understood it, but so much angry that u brought me without even telling me! If I've known that, I would never let rahul cal me like that asad !

Asad: leave that! Now answer me zoe!

Zoya: I really liked pub. Infact I loved it n enjoyed a lot dancing!! I'll come with u everytime !

Asad: I told u no !! now, how r ur new friends ?

Zoya: I didn't make many friends, but rahul is very nice''.n dances wel alos

Asad: yes, I know! He'z really gud!

Zoya: so, why don't we go to pub daily ? we thought to enjoy these few months''right ?

Asad: if u want, we can go ! but wat wil mom, dad, uncle n aunty tel, if we'll go daily to pub n all those late night parties ?

Zoya: u convince my mom n dad n I'll convince ur's !!

Asad: grt !

They go n ask permission n yippee'''!! They got it !

day1 in pub [ as night1 wil sound weird..!!]:

asad n zoya go in'''.

gfriend: hey! Did u patch up ?

asad: its very common with us''don't mind !

suddenly a new girl comes n hugs asad n asks him'''" how r u asad ? after so long'''did u forget me ? "

asad: no priya'..how can I ? I was just busy to come !

priya: who's this asad ?

asad: she's my bestie, zoya''..n zoe, she's priya, my first friend in this pub !

priya: come asad! Lets dance'...

then rahul comes and asad n rahul share angry glances''..asad goes to dance floor with riya n rahul comes to zoya

rahul: hi zoe !

zoya: not zoe rahul, zoya ! please don't cal me zoe coz asad doesn't like anybody calling me like that !

rahul: its fine, zoya ! so, shall we dance ? looks at asad angrily n asad smirks''.

Zoya n rahul dance''that is'..learning dance n asad n priya dance ! everybody is completely engrossed in the dance n happy ! later, asad n zoya go home n sleep''..!

Next day''asad goes to zoya's room

Asad: how was ur second day in pub ?

Zoya: awesome !

Asad: rahul's face was must to see wen u asked him not to cal him zoe''.hahaha !!

Zoya: must say, his face was like burnt bread ! hahaha''.. see'..we r stupids ! stops laughing''.. shutup asad! He must have felt really bad''..n we r laughing abt him !!

Asad: why r u getting concerned zoe..? wats the matter ?

Zoya: nothing ! but first u tel me abt that most concerned lady in pub ?

Asad: wat ?

Zoya: that priya!

Asad: nothing zoe ! she'z just my friend n we met after long'..so, she asked me like that !

They get ready, go to clg, come back n'''.day 2 in pub :

Priya: shouts at asad who's still at the entrance'''.asad !! I'm here, come !!

Asad n zoya go there'''

Priya: soo late'''.i've been waiting for u since half an hour !

Asad: wat to do? This zoe took soo much time to get ready ! zoya beats on his head''.

Priya: why ? can't zoya come on her own ? r u her driver asad ?

Zoya: no, I can't come alone. we r bestie's n come or go anywhere together only ! if u have any problem, u better stay away from us !

Priya angrily drags asad to dance floor n asad laughs at smiling zoya''.as he knew her reaction would be the same''soo hot n happening'''.if anyone dare to say such things n calling me a driver'..OMG''completely intolerable for her !!

Rahul: wats the need to interfere in their matter zoya ?

Zoya: their matter ? it's not their, but our matter ! n I can't leave anyone insulting asad''.!

rahul: yes, it's their matter coz priya n asad love eachother n so, wateva happens btw them is their personal !

zoya: r u joking rahul''.haha ? asad doesn't love her ! who told u this ?

rahul: if he doesn't love her, why does he still dance with her even wen she called him a driver'''? Did u see'.he was not at all angry on her, instead, he's laughing ! n also''..earlier, wen he used to come to pub, he used to bring priya along with him n used to dance only with her. wen she didn't come a day or two, either he would also not come, or just sit n have drinks, but never danced with anyone else !! why was he like that if he didn't love her ?

zoya was dumbstuck hearing all these abt asad ! but still, she knew him'..so, she thought abt it for a while n then they also went to dance''...eventhough zoya was litrally dancing with rahul, her eyes were on asad n priya. This didn't go unnoticed by rahul coz he was seeing zoya only''''.

she saw priya going for drinks, so she excused herself from rahul n went to priya. Rahul got angry at this, but didn't express it ! priya just turned her face angrily as soon as she saw zoya approaching her!

zoya: wait priya ! I'm sry ! I overreacted''n I'm realy sry for that !

priya: serious tone'''it's k, I need to go !

zoya: please'''for few mins'''I wanna talk with u

priya: but I don't' need to talk to u '..

zoya: its abt asad !

priya: stays back''.u need not tel me anything abt virn, as I know him better than u''..but still I'm here to listen to u coz I wanna see ur take on asad !

zoya: lemme clarify u 1 thing ! I've not come here to qurrel with u. as far as viuren is concerned, he's my bestie n no one knows him better than me, is that clear ?

priya: hahaha !! u know asad better than me ? lets see''.she immediately calls asad n he comes !

asad's pov: something interesting is going to happen as these both are here at same place n I can enjoy it !

priya: see asad ! this girl thinks that she knows u better than me''.how funny ! asad tries to tel her that zoya is right, but''.priya starts asking questions abt asad's likes n dislikes to zoya. Zoya answers them all correctly n asad smiles at this, but priya is shocked !!

zoya: since ur all questions are completed, can I ask u just 1 ques abt asad n if u'll answer it, I'll accept that u know abt asad very well than me !!

priya: c'mmon''.ask me !

zoya: where does asad go everyday, first in morning from his house ?

priya: he's not a guy who'll go to temple''' so, he might go to gym.

Zoya: no'..he comes to my room !! I've told u that I know him better !

Priya looks at asad n he tells''.' wat can I do priya? She's my bestie since childhood ! '

Zoya: that's k. asad now u go from here.

Asad: but why should I ?

Zoya: just go'. I need to talk with priya !

Asad: oh! Wanna sort out differences ? k !

He goes''.

reyna

u'll come to know abt wat zoya wanna talk with priya...😉 !

Edited by reyna. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Nice update continue soon plz 😊 but i think you put jeevika and viren in some bits 😊
Edited by princess555 - 12 years ago

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