asya : best friends to best life partners [ upd. thread 2 ] - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
Nice update..:-)
What was the reason..??
Plzz don't introduce another 2 characters..:-)
Thanks for the pm..:-)
Plzz do continue..:-)
Want to knw your surprises..:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
awesome update!!!!
In India some of the clgs n schools promote this gender discrimination...it's unfortunate...but still I love this part as u clarified this mistake
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
Nice update plz continue 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
thnks 4 d pm..its gud...wht happen at pub...pm me whn u update...continue dear

pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ziya117

eyy "jaane tu ya jaane naa" is a hindi movie abt teenagers being really close frds.. every one thought that they were in love wiz each other but were really great/close frds.. n at the end the realised that they love each other,...



nice update!! girls side n boys side!! hahah!! 😆😆

poor lecturer!! he got hearings from the dean!!LOL

thanks ziya!
love u ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey loved their frndship and it was really awesome👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiru2992

Nice update..:-)
What was the reason..??
Plzz don't introduce another 2 characters..:-)
Thanks for the pm..:-)
Plzz do continue..:-)
Want to knw your surprises..:-)

u'll get to know the reason in next parts
n as of now, i don't know wat i gonna do with this story as i didn't think !
i'll continue soon...!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
hi guys n gals...!!
thanks to everyone who has commented n liked my post !
some people liked the prof suspense n felt it funny...n others were a bit disappionted !
its fine coz everyone doesn't react the same way!!
here's my next part !

Part5:

So, asad takes the chance n starts from the beginning………

Uncle, we went to pub n as we entered………

Bfriend1: hai asad! After long time dude……..who's this new babe asad?

Asad: don't cal her babe as she totally hates it !

Bfriend2: she hates it or u hate it wen we cal her babe?

Zoya didn't' like their conversations but waited for asad's reaction

Asad: if u wanna know, just cal her n see…

Asad's friend approaches zoya n both asad n zoya didn't like it !!

Bfriend2: hai babe wats ur name?

Zoya: just shut ur mouth ! if u utter it again, I'll have to use my hand to make u understand this small thing !!

Bfriend3: wat do u think of urself?

Asad: don't get involved n just stop it guys !! don't scare her!

Gfriend1: k. first tel us who she is.

Bfriend2: sry. It was just a prank ! we actually tease new people like this…….

Zoya: a prank? I thought it's real n sry. Wat if I've slapped u ?

Asad: I'm there to stop u

Zoya: it's u who started it. Idiot !

Gfriend1: sure, must be ur girlfriend, that's……lover ?, coz she'z scolding n u r listening quietly !!

Asad: don't insult me in public zoya…..no friends, she's my best friend n definitely not my lover!

Gfriend2: ur bestie….hahaha !! stop joking asad. U can't get a bestie in 1 week

Asad: she's my childhood friend n we r bestie's since childhood.

Gfriend3: if that's so, why didn't u bring her even once ?

Asad: coz she don't' like pubs. It's simple as it is guys !

Zoya: don't know y, today everyone is behind us that we r lovers !!

Asad: guys, this is zoya, n he introduces all his friends to her.

Zoya: u never said that u've so many friends here

Asad: wenever I wanna tel anything abt here, it's u who'l not at all be interested, so wat can I do?

Gfriend1: we'll be chatting all night or we'l dance also?

Asad: lets go…….n takes zoya along with him.

Zoya: asad! Wat happened to u today? U know that I don't know how to dance

Bfriend1: no probs, I'll teach u..

Asad: u don't need to know dance to dance in a disco…..as nobody really exhibit their dancing skills but just enjoy the music n time ! but if u still don't wanna come, then learn few steps from him n dance !!

Zoya: why don't u teach me…? It's just a matter of few steps no !

Asad: I myself don't dance wel. Then wat wil I tel u ? he's gud n can teach u better !

Zoya obliges as she has no other way …

Zoya: sry, can u tel me ur name? I forgot! M a bit weak in memorizing names !! lol (this is my prob also..)

Bfriend1: nevermind! I'm rahul. So, shall we start now ?

Zoya: k

Rahul: which form of dance do u feel comfortable in ?

Zoya: I don't even know the "d" of dance. So, u tel me which ever u r comfortable in. anything is k for me.

Rahul: I like salsa a lot n m really gud at it !

Zoya: teach me, dance with me n then, I'll tel whether u r gud at it or not !!

Rahul: whao!! Lets go to dance floor…….

He teaches her few steps n they both enjoy eachother's company

Rahul: u r a very fast learner n I'm impressed zoe !!

Rahul wanted to cal zoya with a nick name n he zeroed in on nick name…….zoe. he stressed loudly " zoe" to see her reaction. He expected her to react negatively as he already saw her reaction just for calling her commonly "babe" !! but to his surprise, she was k with it.

After a while, She excused herself to go to washroom……. Wen she was going, rahul shouted

Rahul: zoe………washroom is this side ! but she couldn't hear it

But another person had heard it

Then, shocking rather than surprising reaction came from asad……!!

Asad: wat did u cal her?

Rahul: zoe…n why r u looking serious?

Asad: don't dare to cal her zoe! It's my whole n sole rights to cal her like that. (asad rarely calls zoya as zoe to compliment her or wen she has done anything pleasing him ...)

Rahul: wen she' z k with it, why r u overreacting asad ?

Asad: she'z k with it? shocked 😲😆

he sees zoya who's coming from washroom n looks at her quizzingly...n immediately grabs her hand n takes her home !!
reyna

friends, i'm really getting less likes n responses coz after sending 126 pm's, i'm not getting even 30 likes...!!
for all those who write as well...: please promote my story if u r interested in my story really !
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Wow

I loved this part

AsYa were amazing

I guess Asad is becomming really possesive

I like it

I loved AsYa a lot



Try giving longer updates though
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
possessive guy! love the way he is abt zoya! his right 😉

nice update! 😃

❤️

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