Originally posted by: RuchaMulay
Read all 7 parts at one go. nice story. It does resemble Jane tu ya Jane na movie a lot. But I read you do not know about the movie. So I do not wish to take your creative credit away.
Very nice!!!
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Originally posted by: RuchaMulay
Read all 7 parts at one go. nice story. It does resemble Jane tu ya Jane na movie a lot. But I read you do not know about the movie. So I do not wish to take your creative credit away.
Very nice!!!
I expect long replies..please friends ! I update for u guys so u should comment for me !! no single line comments please.!!
Please read replies for ur comments ! Ive commented on ur every comment !!
Last part summary: zoya warns asad that hell lose her friendship if he dont go for date with priya! asad complies, but thinks of zoya by comparing her own explanations abt priya !!
part8:
After getting confused coz of his own feelings whether he loves zoya or not,
He thinks to return home, but he couldnt return at the cost of zoes friendship..so, he went to priya !
Asad: calls priya waiting at their house gate.hello priya ! Im at ur gate, come hereIm waiting !
Priya couldnt believe wat she heard..she came out of balcony n saw asad at gate. She immediately wore overcoat of her night dress n went downstairs !
Priya: wat a surprise asad ! u.here..at my houseOMG! I dont know wat Im speaking !!
Asad: wont u take me inside ur house ?
Priya: oh sry ! come in please be seated.so, wat wil u have ?
Asad: relax priya ! I dont want anything ! I just came to talk with u..
Priya: talk with me.umm.yeah ! tel me asad ! her thoughts were smwhere elseshe couldnt control her smiles.!!
Asad: zoe told me that..that..u love me..!!
Priya: she blusheslowers her eyes..yes..iI love u !
Asad: then why didnt u tel me ? u told me so many things but couldnt tel this simple matter !
Priya: its like.that..i didnt know how to start or express my feelings as we were friends n I was specially afraid of ur reaction ! first u tel me if u love me or not.!
Asad: priya, lemme clarify u 1 thing! I never felt abt u like that, but wen zoe told me abt how much u love me, I thought to give our relation a different chance..well date ! zoe said that if well spend time together, Ill definitely fall for u..so, well try ! but if this wil not work , u should take it positively n no regrets later ! k ?
Priya: u r so open n matured asad ! I never expected that smthing like this can happen.n Im glad that its k for u to date me ! Im also sure that I can make u mine.ull also love me just like I love u !! i just love zoya ! shez so nice at heart !
Asad: so is she !! k, Ill go.bye !
Priya: bye.
Asad goes to zoyas room..
Asad: zoe.!! Where are u ?
Zoya: Im in balcony ! come here
Asad: oh! So, u r here ! I went to priya
Zoya: tel me wat happened ! Im really exited asad..!!
Asad was glaring zoyas beautiful n charming face... this way of looking zoya is so different...why is she appearing more prettier than ever.? Im feeling to just look at her n do nothing else, but why ? he thought to himself.
Zoya: where r u ? oh! Sry..might be dreaming of ur princess priya !! right ?
Asad: no..not dreaming but looking at my princess zoe ! oops ! wat did I spill out !! he thought
Zoya: why r u now praising me ? from now onwards, u go to priya for any favor. Got it ?
Asad: why wil I go to her ?...that lil word upset him so much that he became serious it was always u to whom I would come n no more arguments in this matter ! We need not change our equations to get a new relation ! Ive told priya that if dating doesnt work, she shouldnt feel bad abt it ! Im dating priya just for our friendshipstresses..just for our friendship!
Zoya: thanks asad.u r my bestest friend ! I love u..she hugs him !
Asad: love u too..now shall we go to clg ?
[ lemme give u clarity that neither asad nor zoya took this hug or felt this hug the other way ! both hugged as only friends ! ull understand later as to why Im mentioning like this !...its a surprise !!]
Zoya: yes! Lets go !
They go to clg..
That was sports day of clg !
As Asad n zoya went to clg, a bunch of their friends rushed to them asad n zoyau know, today is sports day n the events wil start within 2 hours. They asked all students to get ready n assemble in grounds after 2hrs !!
Asad: why after 2 hrs ?
Zoya: stupid ! coz they have to arrange for competition like drawing tracks, etc !!
Asad: oh k! but in which sports wil we participate ?
Zoya: wats that asad ? do we know all sports to participate in everything ? well go for our sports as usual !
Asad: I was just kidding !
Zoya: oh! U must have said that before only so that we would have atleast laughed !!
Asad: shut up!
Zoya: first u shut up !
Rahul: hello guys !
Rahul made a perfect wrong time entry ! zoya n asad got a joker to scold eachother !
Zoya: stupid rahul !
Asad: idiot rahul !
Rahul: stupid n idiot ? he was confused n didnt even know why they r scolding him ! poor rahul
Zoya: dont mind rahul, Im not scolding u..!! before he could smile n feel happy,..u pig ! zoya again started ! she was pointing asad whoz right behind rahul, but taking rahuls name !!
U r a mouse rahul !
Asad: u r a donkey rahul ! a monkey ! a dooog ! rahul.the dog !
Rahul : he thought to himself, who ? me .!! I myself dont know that Im an animal..no..not 1 animal, but many animals..!! wat the hell is going on ?
Zoya: dont worry rahul coz u r a dog n dogs r extremely faithful n loyal to their owners unlike mouses, cats n snakes ! u r a snake rahul !
Asads friend : wil u stop ur fight ! we have to list names for team sports.lets not waste time !!
Asad: yes zoe, lets goweve a lot of work !
Zoya: yeah ! lets go ! thanks n sry rahul ! byemeet u later !
Asad: u made a wrong entry my friend ! wen these many other friends around us didnt come in between, why did u dare to do it ? this was why no one interferes within mine n zoes fights or friendship ..coz atlast,..well be one n the rest wil be aside ! I think u got it now..hope ull never do this again.bye..!! have a gud day !
Zoya: come asad ! wil catch u later rahul..bye !
They go n leave rahul there !
Rahul : why is asad behaving like this with me ? he wasnt like this before !! he was 1 of my best friends ! may be Ive come really at wrong time, but they patched up coz of me.so thats fine !!
Precap: In the grounds.. This day wil take the story to next level ! wait for that twist in story !!
I dont know if clgs also have sports days! But my school has this day..so thought that itll be cool to use this day in story !
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