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Posted: 12 years ago
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Helllooo everybodyyy-

Thanks a ton for such a great response to this SS😊 Thanks to each one of you for taking out the time to read and give your feedback to - You belong to me..Mr.Khan!!

Here is the update for Part 4 - will also send PMS in a while😊


Part 4 – I will go The Distance…Mr.Khan

Dilshad's POV

AS soon as I put the phone down listening to what Zoya just told me…I sat down dazzed…on my bed for I don't know how long…because I was shocked to actually know about all the evilness that had been trapped around my family , my son, my daughter in law to be.I felt like crying…and so I did…I had seen so much happen to me in my Life…but now I wouldn't…I would be strong…I was going to go with our plan…and save my family.I had let my sunk a long time ago…and now that I I could see my son fall into this trap in front of my eyes…somewhere deep down my gut feeling told me that all those years ago…my husband had been trapped too.I didn't know the truth about that…and I know this was not the time to think about that right now…I had save my son here first…and then maybe as soon as things would be back to normal…I would question the man I had loved and hated at the same time…and make him tell me the truth…that I know he had been hiding all this while…I got up from my bed….and made my way to my sons room ready to do some drama…and recalled my Zoya's plan…the girl was my daughter…I loved her to bits…and I was so proud of her to fight for her love the way she was….and I knew she will win….her courage and strength gave me mine…that I had deceided that one fine day down the lane in life in time..I would fight for my love too

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Asad's POV

I got ready…and strangely I had slept better than I had expected…ofcourse zoya's face didn't leave my mind for a minute…but somehow I felt better…coz I knew I was going to get to the bottom of this…

Just when I was going to make my way to my room and talk to Tanveer…I saw Ammi enter my room..

I looked at her to read her…coz I knew she would be mad at me again..but what she did surprised me totally…she made me lie down on her lap and patted my head…just like she always would…when she knew I was in pain and she said – Asad…I know…whatever has happened…has pained you so much…as much hurt and angry I was…I could still see and read u …and I know we cant undo the past…but we can take care of what needs to be done…your father left his responsibility a long time ago…and I know u will not run away from yours…if Tanveer is pregnant with your child….then…I think you should marry her…asad…Zoya was right…

I got up immediately from her lap…with shock on my face as I heard myself exclaim – Ammi…no you cant think like that..ammi please…trust me…I dnt even remember what happened that day…infact I was just gng to talk to Tanveer and take her for a check up…to see how old the baby is…coz that will give me all the answers I need…and then I will be free…Ammi please…you know..I love Zoya…I know I broke her heart too many times already…but I cannot imagine Life without her….

I saw her eyebrows twich for a minute in thought and I almost saw some sadness…and then love and then determination reflect in her eyes as she said – Come with me Asad….i know you love Zoya..but I will not let you back out on this….imagine what must be going on in the mind of Tanveer…the poor girl…come with me…and she held my hand and took me out the house…as much as I tried to get her to listen to me…to let me talk to tanveer…she didn't…

The driver drove us to the mall…and I couldn't help but wonder what had gotten into Ammi…until yesterday she wanted me to marry Zoya….and today Tannnu was all she spoke about….

She took me to the jewelry store…and instructed me to pick up a wedding ring for Tanveer…and I was shocked yet again…and then I heard her say – Asad…u need to give her a ring atleast…pick one…please….you have to marry her Asad…I will not watch my son run away from his responisibilties like his father had…,'

I looked at her seriously …and I could read that there was something which was amiss here…ammi was just talking…I couldn't read any emotions in her voice like I always did…and so I don't know why I remembered my fathers words from yesterday ' That I have learnt from the lessons of Life…that there is always more than what meets the eye..' and it struck me in that moment..what if there was something else in here tooo….something was cooking here…and I had a gut feeling that ammi was hiding something big time…and then I felt my heart flutter at the thought – what if Zoya had something to do in here too?? And I felt a sudden ray of hope…my ammi…my love….maybe they were doing something here they knew about and I didn't….and so in that moment I did the only thing that my mind told me…was best suitable in that moment….I deceided to play along..and I nodded silently and picked out a ring for the girl..who was just a friend…the one I knew I would never marry- Tannu.

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Zoya's POV

I saw Mr.Khan and Ammi walk back towards there car..silently from a distance and I could see that Ammi had done what I had asked her too…because I so needed tanveer to believe that Mr.Khan was ready to marry her…and I knew that I couldn't afford it even for a minute that Mr.Khan should question Tanveer anything at all…and remain as cluless and helpless…or she would definetly suspect that something was up…

I could see some pain on the face of the man I loved….as he got in…but he did seem that he was deep in thought….like thinking something…and just then I thought he almost would have seen me..just as I hid in time…and I felt myself calm my nerves…the pain was unbearable….this was harder than I thought…what was I doing..planning a Nikaah of the man I loved???...Allah MIyaan…..pls give me the strength to go on….as I saw the car drive away…and I sent out a silent message to me love yet again – I am Still here..Mr.Khan…don't worry…your Zoya is still here…

But then I realized this was the only way out to expose the cat eyed-witch Billo rani…It was her payback time…it was…I was going to let her dream…that she was getting married to mr.Khan..I wanted her to hope….and just as shed done with mine…I would Break her…on the day of her dreamed wedding I would…I wasn't feeling guilty at all…that I would be doing that to some girl because-

1. She wasn't a girl…she was the devil….a witch in disguise…

2. She desereved the worst….shed asked for it…she tried to kill me for heavens sake…

3. And I was just helping karma here to get back at her sooner…like u know help with the address of where it would hit the worst…

4. And lastly….didnt they always say…All is fair in Love and War…and this was definetly a War!!

I suddenly felt emotional….I needed someone to talk to…and get out all this pain too…ammi was on a mission with Mr.Khan..i couldn't go to her…nor to najma..yet…I felt alone for a second and then and so I don't know why…a gut feeling told me that I wasn't..i may not have anybody physically present…but I knew of one place I could go to…and so..I took the taxi…to seek the blessings of my abbu…

I walked in near the kabr of my Abbu with the flowers in my hand….i thought I would spend some time there…but then right there..as I walked closer…what I saw shocked me to the core…some men were digging his kabr…

I ran up to them and exclaimed angrily- Allah Miyaan whts wrong with u all? Cant u see…its my abbu's kabr..why are u digging it..to which I heard the man reply – No it isnt..cant u see there isnt any name or any writings here…,' and I looked around to see that there wasn't the engraving which I had seen earlier with Mr.Khan..the one that held the name of my abbu…' and I was confused…just as they continued digging it and I watched them do it ….and a few minutes later what I saw and heard shook the ground underneath my feet as the man spoke – ' see we told you its emptyyy'

I looked on to the grave with shock….and maybe relief and happiness as well….coz it meant…that my Abbu was still alive…out there somewhere…Mr.Khan had misunderstood it here back then…

And just then it dawned on me…that like it had been happening to me since a while….that in life..everything could turn around in a day..in a minute..or even in a second at times…just like mine did in that second…with the knowledge that my abbu was still alive. I had come to India for him hadn't I in the first place?? But Then Mr.Khan had become my reason to stay…and now Life had given me another reason to fight for……and I would…I would go this distance too…I would win my love back first…and then I would find my father…it may seem like a lifetime towards an unknown road…but I would walk this path too…

I knew My Destinations…..

Stop 1- Was my love…Mr.Khan…

Stop 2 – My abbu….

And now I just had to make it there…as I realized that this maybe Allah Miyaa's sign too…that I had come here today all of a sudden and found this truth… …and now that I had a signal…I wouldn't loose hope… till I go this distance..and….My journey is Complete!!


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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
Nice part
plz pm me for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
this part was great!!! thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very good update! Awesome one and thankx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update...atleast now asad is using some brains...zoya is one smart girl...dilshad just stole the show...plz continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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dishads pov too..and she too is in zoyas plan of action..
ring for a friend whom he will never marry..
has a feeling ammi is upto something..
zoya gas made a decision..love then father..
made a lovely read in this weather. .
thanxs
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing! Loved it! Tks! Update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great job on this part!! Loved it!!! Continue again soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Likesss!!! šŸ‘šŸ¼

Cont soon:-)

Thnx for pm :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome loved zoya n dilshad planning n also loved asad figured it out

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