SS-You Belong to me..Mr.Khan!!Part 9-p36(29/7)new

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SS - You Belong To Me..Mr.Khan

(A Sequel to my OS - Der ho Chuki Hai..Mr.Khan)

Link - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3636273/os-der-ho-chuki-hai-mr-khan

Note - I had written the OS about Zoya's wait at the altar and i didnt think i would continue..but i just caught up with FRiday's episode...and i just had to pen this down...itll be a short SS in which i definetly want to expose Tanveer the witch, in my style)

P.s - Please read the OS before reading this update!! Thanks a ton😊 Please let me know your feedback😊

SS - You Belong to Me...Mr.Khan - Index

Part 1- Back for you...Mr.Khan... - pg 1

Part 2 - Nikaah Mubarak Ho Mr.Khan...pg 7

Part 3 - We will be Together one day...Mr.Khan...pg 10

Part 4 - I will go the Distance...Mr.Khan - pg 16

Part 5 - My way Home..is through You..Mr.Khan - pg 19

Part 6 - I know ...it Hurts..Mr.Khan - pg 23

Part 7 - There are games that Play us...Mr.Khan - pg 29

Part 8 - You Call it Madness...But I call it Love...Mr.Khan - pg 32

Part 9 - Even Fairytale Characters would be Jealous...Mr.Khan - pg 36


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Part 1 - Back for You...Mr.Khan

Zoya's POV

I was hurt'I felt betrayed'it seemed like the world had ended'and I saw no purporse to even breathe'when I felt that the man I loved'was going to get married to'had ditched me at the altar 'and given his best friend the priority over me'I was tired'I was tired of being never his priority in the first place'and that was the reason I had left the city and seeked refuge for my broken self in the madrasa'where the only time I had felt peace when I was serving the others'..I wouldn't think of him during the day'I wouldn't id make myself busy'but in the nights his thoughts would come to haunt me'his face would'.the time spent with him would'the sweet memories'but then the bitterness of what I saw would wash away the sweetness of the love id held within me all this while.And then it was that day'after a month'when he found me'.and as much as my wrethched heart wanted to run back to his arms'I'd let my mind win again..and so I ran away'.to Ajmer.

But it was like his shadow wouldn't leave me'as he found me yet again'.and the broken look on his face'just made me want to stay and listen to what he had to say'and so I did'.and then finally he said it'.that he loved me'for a minute I felt as if a part of me had died totally because I should have felt like the happiest person on the planet to hear him say that he loves me'.but then I didn't'I ddnt feel a thing'I felt blank'and numb and so I said the only think I said to him the day I left him'on the day of my Nikaah- der ho chuki hai Mr.Khan'.and then yet again'I ran'because as much as I thought I could'I culdnt gather the strength within me to face all of this'and so I had deceided that I would leave back for home'to US..to where I belong and forget that any of this had ever happened to me'that I had never met Mr.Khan'in the first place'and although I could iterally feel my heart wrench at the thought and pain fill my being..i had deceided that I would go'.but then'I guess allah miyaan didn't want me to and that is why he showed me the way'as I heard those two women talking in the lobby..and I felt my blood freeze'as I put the two and two together and realized that I had fallen for her trap'Tanveer's trap'.and so I had searched for Mr.Khan'had called him frantically'and told him that it was a trap'.but sadly enough I guess the message didn't reach him'and yet again Tanveer managed to come in the way as she tried to kill me by pushing me off the cliff'.seriously that woman was pure evil'.but I wasn't going to let her win'never again'beause I had my allah miyaan with me'and hence I survived the fall'and I felt a shiver run down my spine as I recall the fear that had taken me over'for a minute when Id thought I wudnt make it'

I had known all along'she was evil'.pure evil'and I literally felt like kicking myself in the gut'and whack myself in the head'my allah miyaan knows'that this ws the first time ever I cursed myself for listening to my mind and not trusting my love'.Mr.Khan'.how could I ever think he would hurt me'how could I ever think he would do such a thing'he wudnt ever'he had been a victim just like I had been'and I knew that our separation was probably hurting him as much as it hurt me'I mean I loved him right? I should have given him a chance to explain'but I didn't'.for which I don't blame myself totally though'but it was better late than ever'and so I had deceided to come back to my family'to ammi'to najma'to Mr.Khan'.and give it all a chance again'.because Mr.Khan belonged to me..he was mine'I was going to have to fight for him'because for some reason he didn't seem as smart as he looked as he fell for Tanveer's tricks'but then I felt love rush through my heart as I realized that my love'was so innocent deep down at heart'he was strong on the outside'but deep inside'I was emotional, vulnerable'and innocent'and I cudnt blame him totally'I had fallen for her trick too'.and let her shake us'.but I wouldn't anymore'and I will expose her'although I know it would hurt Mr.Khan'but he needs to know'.and I couldn't let him live blind to the fact that is friend was his enemy'and so as I walked down the stairs with Fufi..dressed as his bride'.and saw him look at me'with only love shining in his eyes'his eyes reflecting'only happiness that he felt at seeing me there'I realized'.That the worse was Over.This was the man I Loved'I wasn't going to let him go'he belonged to me'and then my hear beat again'finally as I heard him say my name'Zoya..

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I told him exactly what I felt- That I had come back..for him'for myself'for our relationship'that I had lost myself'my happiness..but I have come to get it back..because it lies with him'.and only he can give it back to me..I told him that I had deceided to leave'but then a miracle in Ajmer had made me change my decision'I told him that I want to start afresh'to forget about what had happened'because I know he would never hurt me'.and now no one could ever come in between us'and I said that looking at Tanveer..who was standing there with a look as if shed seen a ghost'.

As I saw him nod..after ammi and najma spoke..i felt happiness'burst through me..something which I had never thought I would feel again'and I saw him go upto his room to get ready for our Nikhaah..i didn't care if there would be no one except our family to witness our union'all I cared was'that I wanted to belong to him in every way possible'.the distance the separation had made me realize that he was my reason to live..to breathe'he was my oxygen'and I cudnt live without him'

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I walked upto Tanveer'and I smiled ' You are so pale..dont worry'im not a ghost'and didn't I tell u'I would come back'.and make this even'u may have had the last one..but this time'I wont let u get away'If I wanted I would have told Mr.Khan straight away, but I didn't because I ddnt want to hurt him more'(I said hiding my intention of exposing her).And so before Mr.Khan kicks you out'why don't you leave'.pack your bags and get out'!! She walked away'.and I grew suspicious of the look she gave me'and my mind told me that she wasn't going to let this go so easily'but she ddnt know'that neither was I'the battle was on'.and I was prepared for anything and everything that would come in my way'

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A Half hour later I saw Mr.Khan walk down to me with a worried expression on my face..and that worried me ofcourse as I saw tanveer walk down with a evil smirk behind me'and then he said that he wanted to talk to me separately'and so I followed him into the room silently'waiting for another bomb to explode'

He said in a voice so grave- Zoya'I don't know how to say this'uv come back and given me a chance and I can never tell express how much it means to me'.but I cannot go ahead with this Nikaah as much as I love you..and want to'.

I felt tears brim up my eyes as I heard what he had to say'and I fet anger surface up'yet again'.but then when I saw tears and pain in his eyes..i realized that I wouldn't let history repeat and so I walked upto him and held his hand and asked ' Why..mr.Khan? Kya huaaa'.talk to me..tell me'you love me right??

He looked into my eyes and nodded and said ' I do Zoya'but'that night..and tannu'she might be'I mean I just saw some stuff fall of from her bag'she was knitting a kids sock'..shes pregnant zoya',' he said with pain in his voice'

Seriously???? Pregnant?? Just when I thought this woman cudnt stoop lower'she just amazed me with her cheapness'and I felt that similar love and protectiveness rush for my love as I saw how vulnerable he felt in that moment and so guilty and I wanted to slap Tanveer a million times for taking advantage of his innocence'.and so I clutched his hand and made him look at me and said ' are you sure Asad? That the child is urs?? U said u don't even remember what happened that day?? You think u saw me there'.how could anything happen'when you weren't even in a clear state of mind'I mean'seriously'allah miyaan whats wrong with you'she is ur friend'and I know u believe everything she says..because ofcourse she means no harm to us'.but'u do know..like that she was married'what if' I mean isn't there a possibility?? Don't you want to see the odds here'Mr.Khan?

I saw various expressions dawn on his face as he heard what I said'and I could see that It made some sense to him as he spoke ' You are right'zoya'u have a point'

I said ' Exactly'look why don't we handle this carefully ..afterall its us who is at stake here'.i think we should get tanveer's check up done to see..how old the baby is'that will help us figure things out right???

I saw him nod silently as he pulled me into a hug and kissed my forhead- Thanks Zoya'for everything'.after everything I put u through'..thank you so..much for giving me this chance'lets see where this goes now'but what ever happens'.u know'I love you'and only you'right???

I looked up at him and I could see that he was as emotional as I was and I replied ' yes I know'and whatever this is we wil get throught his together'ok Mr.Khan? now lets go out and talk to everybody else'

He nodded and held my hand and walked me out the door ' and I mentally patted my brains for giving me all the help in that moment'.allah miyaan..what had the world come too''..This was my happily ever after ..i know it was'but'if my prince charming refused to come easily'well I just had to take the matter in my own hands'i thought as I smiled to myself thinking Tanveer's reaction to this one. We reached the lobby to see everyone waiting for us'and my eyes went on to the way Mr.Khan held my hand'and felt content..and happy'our love was pure'it would win'and then when all this over'.we will be together'..i can see its meant to be'.because I knew I belonged to him'and I looked at him and added silently in my heart' and'You belong to me'Mr.Khan!!

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I just hope even in the show Zoya knocks some sense into Asad and this issue is not dragged!!!

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hey tis is really amazing...totally luv it...superb...
it really beautifully witten...luv the way zoya deal wit the matter n convince asad to ask tanveer to take the check up...
the love between asad n zoya is so pure n beautifully...hope they will work together n get tanveer truth out...
thx f rthe pm n please pm me for the next part...please continue soon n eagerly waiting for the next part...
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Originally posted by: Enchantress

I just hope even in the show Zoya knocks some sense into Asad and this issue is not dragged!!!


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Originally posted by: jazsidhu

hey tis is really amazing...totally luv it...superb...

it really beautifully witten...luv the way zoya deal wit the matter n convince asad to ask tanveer to take the check up...
the love between asad n zoya is so pure n beautifully...hope they will work together n get tanveer truth out...
thx f rthe pm n please pm me for the next part...please continue soon n eagerly waiting for the next part...


thankksss a tonnn...yeah i really want zoya to do this...u know...to be strong this time and fight back like a lioness for her lion😉

yesss...i knowww sighhh its time asya gt back together isnt it?😊

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