FF-Torn by Hidden Desires#2 (ch16/pg29)20th July

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sherien81

@sherien81

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#121

You are a fantastic writer👏👏👏...amazing...loved it alot...⭐️

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Jassieg

@Jassieg

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Wat a romantic update...I have no words to explain how I felt reading this...I hope to read more romantic scenes between these two...and can't wait for the najma's track.

Hope u post soon.

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zoyamaniac

@zoyamaniac

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Awesome update dear👏 ,when will you unfold najma's secret i'm so looking forward to it,and i remind u again please don't use that Evil Bitch tanveer in this story,u have a great talent in writing 🤗so end this story as soon as possible and start a new one with your touch i'm sorry if i say anything wrong

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DiVirgo

@DiVirgo

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Awesome! I've been waiting too long! Loved this update as usual! Tooo short! Need to read more plZ! This is torture! PlZ plZ update soon plZ!

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sadia

@Cup-Of-Chai

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: ilovebieber

am I even alive after reading this☺️?
*at a loss of words*

old wali Zara don't let this Small Zara read your FF. She is only 14 dude. 🤣

Btw Zara Homie i unRaziad my comment yo! 😎

Edited by Cup-Of-Chai - 12 years ago

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ksen

@ksen

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

amazing.your writing is great.loved it.thanks for pm

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@shahala123

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Aree waaahhh... 👏 kyaa baath hainn... 🤗 let me give a hug... just loved it like smthng... u are amazing... asyaas each and every feelings u wrote... wooww... Asad romantic boy... and thanks a lot for ur pm 😊 😊

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Pori

@Pori

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Its definitely great to see Asad come out of his little bubble and express himself and his feelings more to Zoya. I never thought he'd be able to do so.

Loved it when he said that he couldn't let anyone see her like that and would never share her with anyone. Ahh!!

If I had to define this part of your ff- PURE HOTNESS

Oh, Thanks to Hamzah, lol!

Great update, thanks for the pm