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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

tension de diya, check. Ab aagey??

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Mahi Singh

@Kaya13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

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amri123

@amri123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

ooohhh that was amazing

i can't wait to read the whole thing😃

very dramatic Rukho btw😆😆

thanks for the PM😊

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

OMG how can you stop there?!!!

continue soon pleaseee 😳

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Shabana0786

@Shabana0786

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Aww is dat all??...now I can't wait for da continuation!!...lol

Interesting preview!!..

Thanks for the pm..

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: -Jazzy-
Res!

FIRST OF ALL, I WOULD LIKE TO TAKE A MOMENT TO DO A HAPPY DANCE! My comment is on the same page as your writing and that's no small feat!

And what are you doing stopping there! It was so dramatic so intense and then BAM! No no, that is not okay! Please continue! I loved every word of it and a special shout out to you for making Zoe so brainy! It was great... Her despair, her confusion, her resolve, and then ultimately, her determination! Kudos to you for portraying these emotions so brilliantly!

So, meherbani farmakar, aagey ki kahani...?

haha yes! even I was soo proud of you 😆 same page pe kya second comment bhi! 😲😆

Haha had to make it dramatic. Best way to hook people. I'm evil that way. But don't worry. I'll be writing that part tomorrow or Monday at the latest. Have several IF things to catch up on lol. Slowly getting to it all. Focusing on the FF cause if I don't update this weekend, I'm sure to get major chappals, tomatoes, etc. 🤣

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Jazlyn Lodhi

@Nutella.

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

I am proud of me too! Please excuse me while I go put my shades on... feeling extremely cool right now! 😆

Haha, as if you need to do anything "special" to garner more readers or capture attention. Just write whatever comes to your mind and that's good enough for us creatively-deprived souls. Yeahh, focus on Mere Jasbaat. I am excited for that update, but also excited for this because it goes with the current track and I have a feeling that we have disappointment lined up for ourselves in the show. But take your time... no pressure! 😃

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: -Jazzy-
I am proud of me too! Please excuse me while I go put my shades on... feeling extremely cool right now! 😆

Haha, as if you need to do anything "special" to garner more readers or capture attention. Just write whatever comes to your mind and that's good enough for us creatively-deprived souls. Yeahh, focus on Mere Jasbaat. I am excited for that update, but also excited for this because it goes with the current track and I have a feeling that we have disappointment lined up for ourselves in the show. But take your time... no pressure! 😃

Soo I know I was supposed to update last night LOL. But tonight if I'm not too dead I shall try 😆

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SakeenaSidd

@SakeenaSidd

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Oh you! I haven't had the time or energy yet for Meri Jasbaat n now I've started on this. Do continue...sounds promising...ek laaambhi chapter coming up right ;)

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: SakeenaSidd
Oh you! I haven't had the time or energy yet for Meri Jasbaat n now I've started on this. Do continue...sounds promising...ek laaambhi chapter coming up right ;)

Haha well this is just a one shot, but yes i tend to overload my self 😆
Btwww have you read mere jasbhaat yet 😛