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Originally posted by: LuvUAsYa

yipppeee im first...

milluuu u gave me a heart attack i swear...

I LOVED THIS UPDATE...

MY PHAIBRIT TILL NOW...

oh man asad this much tender

i was longing to see this side of him...

d whole asya scene was worth reading...

why is ayaan befooling humera??

and Nikhat man kuch to reham karo bechari pe ...

zoya is gone?? 😲

i don think asad will let him go...

willl she be able to escape!!!

gosh !!!!

thaaanx 4 d updt millu!!

waiting 4 2morrows update EAAAGERLY...

really??? pagal maine proof reading nai ki thi jaise update kiya check karne se pehle mummy le laptop band karwa diya..isliye bahot mistake hui hai..i read somewhere jaha maine hug ko huaga likha hai..i was like huga??? ye ki honda hai!!😆

Originally posted by: maha2012

loved it😉

shukriya yaar😆

Originally posted by: LuvUAsYa1

res

phir se shift kar di🤣

unres..

MES I LOVE YOU frm deep inside my heart 4 giving this part.. ❤️

last to last part PERFECT last part MORE THAN PERFECT

n this part EXCELLENT SPLENDID...

ye waali bhii meri favourite hai.. 😳😆

asad's care... his tension

fear of loosing zoya.. 😭

TEARS?? 😲😭 he was crying , crying 4 zoya...

he is surely obssessd 4 her

that line

NO 1 CAN TAKE U AWAY FROM ME NOT EVEN DEATH

showed d depth of his love olthough hidden under d devilish revenge but still..

milli I cant take enough of this update...

especially asya part

I don even how manyyy times iv re read it...

loving this asad...

I was dieng to see asad regret n this part give a tinge of it..

he was crying 4 her.. CRYING... im amaaazed...

ooo noo will zoya be able to escape this time??

or shel again be caught by asad???

nooo ... wait... if she escaped(im not sure) then nikhat might get her...

n she will nooo

vn will ayaan stop lieng to humera?? n y is he doing so??

n u said rose is gonna give me d hint????

flawless update MES!!! 👏👏👏👏

update soon please...

eri mistake nai hai jaise main update karti hu...neeche sare bandar party spam kar dete hai..😆

Originally posted by: Chipmunks.

wer did she go?? she must be at house only, in kitchen? Loved it
Happy Independence Day 🤗

she cant leave him..he wont let that happen!!😃

Originally posted by: Linsie

please keep it going now...is much more clear ...
thanks for the update...

finally you said it..*such a relief*

Originally posted by: Fimmy

Milliii!!!! Phir se cliff pe tang diya? Tu nehi sudhregi na???

OMG! Itna caring Asad! 😲 Iske liye 1 kissi toh banta hai! .

Par all of a sudden Asad itna caring kaise ban geya??? 😕

Zoya gayab ho geyi??! Iss halat mei??!! 😲

Mei gafur ko mar du plssshhh???? .

Updt karne k liye bara wala huggy ...

Ab don't make us wait for long jaldi se next part post kar ...😃

mine sadiyo baad update main ciffy diya hai...

Originally posted by: ksen

great part

shukriya😃

Originally posted by: princess555

Nice update

shukriya😆

Originally posted by: LoveAsYa222

Lovely updates 😳 But omg...what happened at the end of Part 11!! 😳 Update soon 😲

shukriya dear..i know this part sucked ..the thing is that i dint get time to make anycorrection here. i just posted and momma was like lappy band karo abhi ke abhi...so bhagna pada😆

Originally posted by: cutiesanya

i always complained of zoe misery

in this stry but this update shut them all..

how asad forgot everything and relived her

it was amazing ... this was just perfect

really?? did u like it???