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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh my God! OMG! OMG! 😭😭 You gave me goosebumps when Asad was describing how much pain he had endured 😭

Pulling out nails 😭...and hanged him...
Gosh the descriptions were so violent...kudos to you my baby for coming up with such an awesome idea...

❤️❤️ Sorry for the late comment dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Fimmy

Firstly about the code...meri masum se dimag pe zor dal dal k dimag ka dahi bana dala...but junooni atma ka code break nehi hua

now about the part...OMG!!! Asad had to suffer sooo much!!! mera toh dill hi tut geya!!! kamino ne kya halat kar di thi bechare Asad ki! Unn kamino ki toh mei And what the hell!!! that harami Gafur...uss ney apni beti ka aisa video karwaya Gafur k bachche tu bas aa mere samne ek bar
tujhe toh mei chote chote tukre kar dungi poor Asad...he was suffering so much for zoya and bechare ka toh dill hi tut geya! he was shattered after watching that thing but zoya ki bhi toh galti nehi hai...fir bhi she has to endure all the pain
plz plzz plzzz koi inn dono ko sara sachchai batao...i can't see them in sooo much pain
par ye kambakht phn wala n chigar wala hai kaun???
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Miliii...tu mujhe pehle ye bata tere dimag mei aise ideas ate kaha se hai??? kaunsi movies dekhti hai tu? every tym meri bolti hi band kar deti hai but sachchi bolu...this was the bestest part of nightmare u rock yaar...
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ye le mili...kar diya unres and break kar diya apna record...ab toh happy na??? ab jaldi se next part post kar...

😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲
haaannn
mein koi sapna dekh ri hun??😲😆😆😆
partner tera 2 liner se 20 liner bhii cross ho gaya...😲😆
supperb comment yaaar suuuperrrbb👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
milllu unres karne ka plan ni hai kya??
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LuvUAsYa

milllu unres karne ka plan ni hai kya??

MERE POST KE NEECHE SPAM KYU KIYA😡😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

part 11

A fight for freedom

she felt a pain in her chest coz of the knife digging dip and the next thing she knows it was all black out...

"asad.." a very charming women spoke as she entered the door..
"hi .i am zoya.. zoya farooki.." she spoke as she pushed the door other way and entered seductively in to asad's cabin..

asad was just stunned to see her..moreover her body language were arousing all wrong feelings in him.

he stood in a second and walked to her.he showed his hand and said..
"hi am asad ahmed khan.." he said giving a bright employee..

"i know that..she smiled as she pointed the name plate on the cabin door..
asad blushed a bit and shook his hand as she joined him...

"am new employee here ..under your guidance.." she said in most seductive tone walking close to him almost fanning her breathe over his face..
asad liked it..could clearly be seen..
"you are welcome in dilshad work " he said with a glimpse of naughtiness in his eyes.."i am all yours !" he murmured under his breathe as she turned to occupy her seat..

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zoya wake up!! wake up zoya!!! her body was shaking vigorously in all direction
zoya could feel hands on her shoulder and jerk in her body.. what was happening here?? she could feel few drops of warm water on her hand and face..and a concerned voice too..

open your eyes..damn it!!! she again heard someone saying..a cold touch on her forehead slipping to cheeks and then brushing her hair..
she felt a warm sensation as she sensed something hot on lips again and again..she said to her eyes to open but they denied..she said her hands and legs to move..but they dint..
helpless she was there could feel evey single thing happening around but could not do anything...whats happening?? she thought again!!


she tried hard she could just to take a glimse of what going around but her body ached as she felt her breathing got stuck in throat for a while coz of friction between her torso and something hard and warm..she was breathing against it...she felt good after a while but still she was helpless..

"zoya ..get up!!" get up zoya.." she heard again the same voice above her head and a cold touch on side of her face were shaking her to get in to conscious..
she felt more warm water droplet on her forehead and cheeks...

she felt a cold sense as something warm and comfy was getting over her,..she felt her wounds burn getting half to none..
but still could not feel what was happening...!!

after what seems hour she finally thought again to push herself to steal a glimse of things around she tried hard and order eye lids to open up for her..and as if like a miracle finally those stubbon orbs gave up and she could see a vague pitcher around her..

she moved a bit in order to see something when asad ran in to her in her arm..

"zoya ...zoya ..u r ok!! thank god you are ok!! ya allah shukriya!!" asad said while hugging her from top as she laid down on bed motion less ..

asad touched her face he softly and in caring way kissed her forehead he picked her up in his arms possesively and brushed his hands in her hair...
she again felt a warm water dripping on her face ..but she was sure it was not what she thought it was his love his caring his tears showering on her..

" i thought i lost you!" he said in chocked voice breaking the hug bit and then looking at her face..
asad nodded his head in no and again pulled her in hug this time a tight one!
zoya was getting on her senses slowly as the vague pitcher were getting bright with every passing minute asad's hand were wandering over her caressing ehr pulling in to hug again and again..kissing lightly on lips and then back to forehead..she lost the count on time as how long they shared such intimacy..


she was about to say something when a pain in her back made her scream ..the voice was not loud infact it was almost mute kind off but asad could feel it...the pain..her pain!

he panicked and saw on her face which had few tear drop collected in her eyes...

"zoya ...you will be fine.." he said as he touched her sides lightly as if soothing it...healing it..

again the cold touch.. she looked down and found nothing but same white blanket wrapped her body..no stain of blood! clean fresh and white..


she felt this sticky feel near her chest...she looked down to see ointment wrapped band aid..

she was feeling immense pain about the whole episode which took place an hour before she closed her eyes tight to stop the images to haunt her again..
with lot of effort she pushed asad to get off her..but her body lacked energy and so asad dint felt anything just a mild touch around his chest struggling a bit...

she pushed him again but it gave the same effect on him..he looked slowly towards her hand which were moving bit..his eyes darted on her hands to her face which has this wierd irritated expression dipped in pain..

words exchange through eyes ..for a while and then..

"No..m not leaving you..ever.." he said as taking her hand in his..and kissing the back of her hand..

she opened her lips and struggled with her words but it seems voice got diappeared long back...

she looked at him and turned her face away when he was about to kiss her lips again..
"zoya ...dont!! i said i m never leaving you..." he placed a finger below her chin and raised her face ..looking at her lips for a while he gave in giving her a most gentle loving and sentious kisses..


"asad.." he thought he heard her saying against his lips..he moved a bit whereaes the tears still making their way down..
"sshhh.." he said as he laid her back on bed slowly and he himself sat next to her on bed leaning a bit on her face ..his face was just parallel to her..while his hands were caressing her forehead..
he was there the whole night..no more bother of file, the orders and the past...right now all that was running through him was zoya and zoya..her betrayed seems to be very small in front of her life for him..his anger could wait ...everything could wait for tonite...he gently slipped his hand between her palm and the bed and holded her up lightly..
tears never left her eyes as he never let her hand go off hers..he placed few kisses in between while his eyes were soothing her body...and there she was in his bed..sleeping ever so calm ...her body with the marks and wrapped in ointment and her eyes a bit swollen cause of tears...
"no one can ever take you away from me...NO ONE !! not even death..." he said as he sighed, drawing circles on her chest where he had stabbed her ..the room echoed their breathing ...evr so quite so calm which made him close his eyes and put to rest for tonite...

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"hello! nikhat kaha pohuchi tum..?" asked gaffur bewildered
"abu...ek problem ho gai hai!" she said in fear
"kya hua meri bacchi?" he asked concerned..

"abu police ko pata chal chuka hai..they would get them in ny minute..." she said as her voice were shaky due to fear..

"kya ?? nai...malik ka hukum hai zoya ke liye...tum he pura karogi...ab jao isse pehle police waha pohche..."

"ji abu.." she said as she disconnected..he inhaled few sharp breathes before calling out for a taxi...

"bhai old town ..bunglow 4" she said and hopped in the back seat ...a wierd evil smile fluttering all over her lips...

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"ayaan ...subah hone wali hai...hum kab pohchenge.." humera asked concered standing a bit worry..

"do min baby...tum gadi main baitho main bus abhi theek kar dunga.. fir chalte hai.."he said while giving her a sweet smile

"baby...its more than 3 hours now..we got stuck her in this dark place...y dont you use phone and call some one for help.." humera said knocking some brain in to his head

"haan..haan...ek minute.." he said flat...he took his phone out pressed few buttons and returned a pleasant look to her..

"hummy baby...network problem..bus do minute ..or sab theek ho jayega...tum baitho gadi me.." he gestured her to sit in the car where he again digged his head in to bonet!

humera sat inside tired lost and sad cause of delay ..she banged th dashboard in frustration when the file kept above slippen and fell down on her feet..

she picked it up...and with a cry baby face...she whispered..

"aapa...i wanna meet you...kitna kuch kehna hai!! dil bhi ghabra raha hai..allah sab theek ho kal!" she said as she sent a silent pryer to the sky..

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early morning hit the ray on asad face making him awake..he moved his hand across the bed in wave lazily still with eyes closed..his eyes open up wide as he dint felt the touch he wished for..
zoya was no where close by his side ..where was she???he thought when a clicked at door grabbed his attention..."No .." he screamed as he ran towards the hall ...

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hey frends ...first of all HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY YAARA!!
and second thank you all ...omg omg..i cant believe i have crossed 100 page in 10 updates...


thanks a lot everyone for all your support and comment...

hey those who want help in breaking the code feel free to ask in post or through pm's waise hint to de diya maine last update me...so if you havent than do check!!


shukriya yaar!!!

MILLI

PART 12

Edited by MILII_BAKSHI - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yipppeee im first...

milluuu u gave me a heart attack i swear...

I LOVED THIS UPDATE...

MY PHAIBRIT TILL NOW...

oh man asad this much tender

i was longing to see this side of him...

d whole asya scene was worth reading...

why is ayaan befooling humera??

and Nikhat man kuch to reham karo bechari pe ...

zoya is gone?? 😲

i don think asad will let him go...

willl she be able to escape!!!

gosh !!!!

thaaanx 4 d updt millu!!

waiting 4 2morrows update EAAAGERLY...


Edited by LuvUAsYa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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phir se shift kar di🤣
unres..
MES I LOVE YOU frm deep inside my heart 4 giving this part.. ❤️
last to last part PERFECT last part MORE THAN PERFECT
n this part EXCELLENT SPLENDID...
ye waali bhii meri favourite hai.. 😳😆
asad's care... his tension
fear of loosing zoya.. 😭
TEARS?? 😲😭 he was crying , crying 4 zoya...
he is surely obssessd 4 her
that line
NO 1 CAN TAKE U AWAY FROM ME NOT EVEN DEATH
showed d depth of his love olthough hidden under d devilish revenge but still..
milli I cant take enough of this update...
especially asya part
I don even how manyyy times iv re read it...
loving this asad...
I was dieng to see asad regret n this part give a tinge of it..
he was crying 4 her.. CRYING... im amaaazed...
ooo noo will zoya be able to escape this time??
or shel again be caught by asad???
nooo ... wait... if she escaped(im not sure) then nikhat might get her...
n she will nooo
vn will ayaan stop lieng to humera?? n y is he doing so??
n u said rose is gonna give me d hint????
flawless update MES!!! 👏👏👏👏
update soon please...
Edited by LuvUAsYa1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wer did she go?? she must be at house only, in kitchen? Loved it
Happy Independence Day 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
please keep it going now...is much more clear ...
thanks for the update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Milliii!!!! Phir se cliff pe tang diya? Tu nehi sudhregi na???


OMG! Itna caring Asad! 😲 Iske liye 1 kissi toh banta hai! .


Par all of a sudden Asad itna caring kaise ban geya??? 😕

Zoya gayab ho geyi??! Iss halat mei??!! 😲

Mei gafur ko mar du plssshhh???? .

Updt karne k liye bara wala huggy ...


Ab don't make us wait for long jaldi se next part post kar ...😃

Edited by Fimmy - 12 years ago

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