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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting.. I love Moments in time.. I am sure I am gonna love it too.. Unique beauty.. Love the title.. Do continue asap.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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This story sounds different! Is Zoya the spy in this one??? She is protecting him from the bad guys... He is in trouble???? And he falls in love with her!!!! I love your stories!!!!!! You are an amazing writer!!!!!! Can't wait to read more... What moments in time is going to end soon????!!!!!! THAT CAN'T BE!!!!!! Just kidding... I love your story!!!! Again... Please start this one right after you finish Moments in Time... Did I say that you are a wonderful writer???? Ohhh... I did... Hehehehe... Wonderful concept!!!!!!!!! Continue soon
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Very interesting :) I wonder what they need protection from? Or is it just in general? Please PM me! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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plz continue and pm me
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Nice start cont soon and pm me
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Would love to read this story..
Update soonish...
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nice start do continue soon.thanks for pm
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Lovely xx wud luv 2 read dis xx plzz do continue soon xx
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Chapter 1: The Intro.

As day gave it was to night, peace prevailed in the city wiping away the tiredness due to hustle and bustle at day time. While everyone was spending their free time calmly, Khan Mansion was witnessing a commotion. Shouting, shrieking, giggling, yelling and everything could be hear from in there.

Khan mansion was nothing less than a palace. Why wouldn't it be? After all it belongs to the most successful business man in the country, Rashid Ahmed Khan. He along with his wife Dilshad and kids Asad, Ayaan, Najma and Nikhat and their cousins Humeira and Imraan lives there. It's usually told that successful businessmen tend to forget their family, but it was not the same with Rashid. He was a perfect husband, perfect dad & a perfect uncle.

So what's behind the commotion, you might be wondering… lets go and have a look…

"You cannot do this to us Dad…"

Yelled a frustrated Asad while his siblings and cousins stood by his side. Rashid looked at Dilshad pleadingly. Seeing her husband defeated in front of kids, she stepped in to help him.

"Asad Beta, just listen to what you father has to say…"

"Mom… you too… what Asad Bhaijan telling is correct. We support him. Tell Dad to take back his decision."

Ayaan cut her across and came forward to support his brother. Sighing Dilshad stepped back and looked at Rashid. He rolled his eyes and breathes deeply.

"Well, this is my decision. If you want to go for the vacation, you have to agree to my condition…"

"Dad, we are not kids anymore. And for God's sake, we are going to a foreign land where no one knows us… besides, me, Ayaan and Imraan is there to take care of the girls. So what's the need of some body guards?"

Retorted Asad.

"Exactly. You are going to a foreign land and I don't want you to go unprotected. I trust you guys' ability. But you know na, how many enemies Dad is having… they knows I love you all soo much. So they may try to hurt you… Please… Please agree to this for me…"

And Rashid knew, this time he will succeed. Like they were his weak point, he was their weak point. His kids love him too much to let him be sad.

Asad groaned mentally as he saw his father pleading with them. That was the one look for which he couldn't say no to. He agreed reluctantly very much to the disagreements of his siblings.

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Khan siblings were packing their bags while Asad came into the room. everyone was glaring at him.

Asad: "Guys, what could I do? Haven't you all seen how dad was pleading with us? How can I say no to him?"

Ayaan: "Yeah right… And now because of that the guards will be babysitting us for the next 2 weeks in Brazil…"

Ayaan stomped his legs and walked towards sofa pouting. Asad chuckled seeing his expression.

Ayaan: "laugh… how much you want laugh… because of those stupid guards I won't even get a chance to be with any hot chicks… Bhai… all this is your fault…"

Asad looked at his baby sister Najma for aid, but was turned down by the angry glares. He looked at Nikhat, Humeira and Imraan while all of them refused to meet his gaze. Sighing, he walked towards sofa and sat near Ayaan.

"Well…. I can't say 'No' to Dad now…. What if we go to Brazil and lost track of those body guards? We can tell dad that they had left us alone while in truth we would be the ones who would be ditching them. What say you?"

Asad asked hopefully. Ayaan lifted his head and looked at him. Within seconds Asad found himself choking due to the weight of his slings as they engaged in a group hug.

And what they didn't know at that time was everything won't go as they planned. Their trip was bound to be a rollercoaster one, a one which will either make them or break them.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yippeee!!!!!!! I am the first one to comment!!!!! Well, what can i say...that was awesome!!!!
Asad loves his dad so much!!!! Hmmm... They are all going to Brazil!!!!!! I wonder how Asad and Zoya are going to meet...

Edited by Nandini0910 - 12 years ago

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