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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#661

oh absolutely wonderful. I never thought Zoe would have reached Asad's room, searching for him, hopefully the nassha gets on to them and they stay together for more time.

love.

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#662

Is this the first time I am sending a comment?

If so then SHAME ON ME! How could I have not commented before???

I have read all the parts and I love your story. Your writing is very easy and pleasant to read. Those chote chote moments between Mr.Khan and AsYa makes your story come alive.

Well done and keep it up! 👍🏼

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Maryam Hassan

@mariam1368

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#663

Jst like always Super Awesome Update
Keep it up

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#664

Originally posted by: goingreen

Or maybe longer! Because they're still awake yknow, the night isn't exactly over :p

Ha! Ha! I like how your brain works!! Have I mentioned today I love your writing style?!
😆

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#665

Ahh, That was a very lovely up-date...Cutee Asya...a helpless Asad and Zoya saying him that It's ok to let go sometimes...😳 Haha, love the way after every up-date you say "raat abhi baki hai...😉 just wait for next up-date..." 🤪LOL so thats why, Cant wait for the next up-date...😊

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Hafizakhan

@Hafizakhan

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#666

Wonderful.

I wish we could get scenes like this in the real show!

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goingreen

@goingreen

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#667

Originally posted by: Curiousmind
Can we have dilshad discover them like this in bed together please?

Won't it be more exciting if Tanveer caught them hehehe.

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goingreen

@goingreen

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#668

Originally posted by: me2you
Is this the first time I am sending a comment?
If so then SHAME ON ME! How could I have not commented before???
I have read all the parts and I love your story. Your writing is very easy and pleasant to read. Those chote chote moments between Mr.Khan and AsYa makes your story come alive.
Well done and keep it up! 👍🏼

Is it?? Haha it's okay I don't really mind. But I'm glad that you decided to leave a comment anyway, and I'm really glad that you're enjoying the story (: Yup, lighthearted is my style for sure (:

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goingreen

@goingreen

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#669

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal
Ahh, That was a very lovely up-date...Cutee Asya...a helpless Asad and Zoya saying him that It's ok to let go sometimes...😳 Haha, love the way after every up-date you say "raat abhi baki hai...😉 just wait for next up-date..." 🤪LOL so thats why, Cant wait for the next up-date...😊

But it's true! They're both still awake, raat toh baaki hi hogi (: Glad you liked the letting go part! Was trying to bring across a larger point, not sure if I succeeded haha.