FF: Through The Monsoon #1 - Link to #2 on pg 1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#371

Originally posted by: mochhug

I know what you mean. He didn't even take her away. He said it in front of everyone. Even that stupid cat. Ugh. I'm seriously not even in the mood to finish my OS. Can't think happy thoughts with all this negativity.

I feel totally uninspired to continue myself ):

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Posted: 12 years ago

#372

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan
ur imagination n ideas r sooo freaking good babes!

Thank you! Haha I do what I can.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: zoas91
she was on his lap and he did not let her go... the sight!! precious!!
only wish to see this playful side of asad in the show!
woman you make me dream...beautiful dreams about them with your descriptions!!! love it ^_^

I hope the show doesn't shatter your dreams by getting Tanveer and Asad married haha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#374

Originally posted by: Azriya
Where did that apple go? ;)

Love your update. Hope the next one is a bit longer. Your story is so entertaining.

The apple is still sitting comfortably on top of the other fruits in the fruit basket on the dining table (: Glad you liked it!! (:

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-
Nice update..Why did it thunder? and where is the next part??? it has to come soon...and what about the apple???..lol too many questions :D

Monsoon season, there will be lots more thunder after this too :p The apple will make an appearance when it's needed haha don't worry.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#376

Originally posted by: webuser7
Ha! Ha! Zoya's portrait signified Independent! Brilliant! Love your writing style. Story is also amazing!

👏 👏

Very captivating! Leaves me wanting for more and more!! The tainted apple hasn't even made an appearance yet and you have left the readers hyperventilating! Your story has a lot to offer.

Thank you!! (: Yeah I'd planned out my whole story before I even started on the first part haha, so yes lots more to come!

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: rutu83
not liking that thunder😡
lol - that was such a wonderful mitwa moment especially the enveloped hand on the chest

There's a thunderstorm outside! You have to expect thunder :p Glad you liked the mitwa moment (:

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: braich_gal
arrey yaar...yeh saala thunder lightning kaha se aa gaye...i was getting into the scene and poof...😡 jaldi update karo varna...

aur haan...what about the apple? is tanveer going to be the one to eat it finally?

Thunder lightning kahi nahi jaa rahi haha there is a monsoon going on you know :p About who eats the apple (or whether it even gets eaten at all), wait for the next few parts hahaha.

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