And the player fell in love...Ch 1 pg 5, 30/6/13 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsome intro.. loved it
though i read it already for the AR version :P
but plzzz cont soonn
would love to read it

P.s:- just wanted to know if ur continuing My perfect Hubby.. plzz do reply 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome start😊😊..waiting for the update..continue soon..and thanks for the pm😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yeah...continue plzzz and plzzz pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsome update and intro like the concept very much update nxt part asap and pm me when u update nxt part...😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The intro sounds really good ! And so does the title ! :)

Would love to see you continue soon !

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Posted: 12 years ago
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The story sounds nice...like a typical teen romantic novel...plz continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: anishaalluri

awsome intro.. loved it

though i read it already for the AR version :P
but plzzz cont soonn
would love to read it

P.s:- just wanted to know if ur continuing My perfect Hubby.. plzz do reply 😊

Hiii Anishaa IK its been a long time but how are you?
And its good to hear that you still want me to update that FF, and as of updating I wont promise you but I will definitely try to continue till then enjoy this?😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: TANVI_SEXY

awesome start😊😊..waiting for the update..continue soon..and thanks for the pm😃

Thankyou and thats okay 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 1 Coming up guys...
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Chapter 1


What exactly is a man who has no interest/ knowledge of what so ever in relationships, has never brought a single present in his life for someone. Other than his parents and sisters during Christmas and special occasions supposed to buy for his best friends first wedding anniversary?

I mean think about it..condoms? bubble wrap? Aayan always tells how they love playing dirty on top of bubble wrap.. Or maybe sexy lingerie for Humeria so that she can manipulate by best mate tonight? As she is the one who is nagging me for the present and Aayan wouldn't give a shit about the so called present that I am to get for them. But naa that wouldn't work coz Aayan would kill me. Dog is a little too possessive about his bitch!

I remember for their wedding present Rita no Lara oh wait wasn't she called Ella? Who helped me more like did everything and I just paid? Ohhoo now that I think of her.. was she hot in bed or what? But due to AAKs golden rule about 'never sleeping with same girl for more than one day no matter how good she is' .. I never got to see her again. I know I am a bas***d! But hey, before you sensitive pretty ladies start hating me there lemme tell you I don't ever give them any false hopes. Girls that I am with are the same.. even they want that one thing only.. Sex and I give them that! I am too kind hearted you see.

So yeah! I asked this girl for help and she did! But this time its Mrs Humeria Abbas's strict order that I get them something by myself and not take any s**ts help, as she likes to call them. Humzie always keeps nagging me how its high time I change now and stop acting like a sex addict. She thinks its time for me to start indulging with smart girls that I can take home, introduce to my parents and settle down. Like really? What does she take me for? I mean I am not a heartless bitch who is strongly against the whole settling down idea but that's just not me man! Never has the idea of ''Settling down'' with one girl attracted me. What if after a month I don't like her and start looking at others? Wouldn't that hurt her? And I don't like hurting people or making them upset. I know I am sweet ;)

Plus everyone cant be lucky like Aayan, can they now? Damn he really must have done some good deed in his past life to get a girl like Humzie. She really is hot and amazing at the same time. And I love them together.

Aayan and Humzie are the closets one to me. I have known Aayan since my school days.. He never had any problems with the way I was and my players label. However he wasn't like me or ever been influenced by me either, He always said ''there is that one girl made for him just like he was made for her, so he doesn't believe in wasting time with other girls just for sex''. Too clichd for a guy like me! He wasn't a prude either though nor was Humzie the first girl in his life' He just had few serious girlfriends before he met her.

Then 3 years before he met humzie in some local pub we were hanging at. Ever since then he is smitten her. And a year before they decided to tie a knot'. I don't get this whole marriage thing but I hope god blesses them and their marria''.

Beep Beep

Make sure you are on time, I don't want any late comers in my anniversary party, esp mine and my hubbys Best friend. 😛

P.S Don't forget out presents. I am excited to see them already. I hope they are by you and not some s**ts! Otherwise you will never get to eat what I cook. You know how much you love it 😉

P.S. S Don't flirt with any of my friends tonight! Otherwise I aint talking to you for a week nor letting Aayan talk with you.🤢 I still remember what you did with Sheela. Still so awkward! 😡 Xoxoxo


Oh shoot! I still have no f**king clue what am I giving them.. see this is the reason I hate relationships. Women are so demanding and bossy. Their list never stops. And the number of P.S and emoticons they use in their texts! Jesus Christ.

And her ''don't flirt with my friends'' I am sure she must have told me this like billion times till date. But have I ever listened? Naaa, not my fault though. You really can't blame me if I just wink at them and they are all over me. She should tell her friends more than me! Plus that Sheela was just dumb! I did the her beforehand I am just into one night stand so not my fault that she liked me soo much that she wanted to see me again and still asks Humzie about my whereabouts at times. I just hope she wont be there tonight.

What about the gift though?? I aint risking the food here coz trust me humzie is like the best cook ever. I never thought this would be so time consuming! Think think think Asad'

How about I sponsor them a week's trip to Vegas more like their honeymoon as their anniversary gift? Not like money has ever been an issue for me, plus anything for those love birds. Lee's gym pays me tight and I will soon start piloting in like a half a year's time! Its just I wanted to enjoy my life before I start what I have always wanted to do with my life. And man I am loving this gap.. However at the same time I can't wait to start flying.

So Vegas it is then! Oh dude Asad you are too good mate. Humzie will love you for this and maybe allow you to play some of her friends for tonight without getting angry ;) Gosh I am such a bas***d!

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So yeah this was it for today, all you Zoya lovers will have to wait for next chapter to know how she is! Mysterious girl she is ;) Till then love Asad😳

Edited by Jahapana6packs - 12 years ago

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