i know guys last update was a short one so i have kept this update a longer one
and i thought that the story is going very slow so i cut the some scenes of mumbai airport
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chapter 3
asad: zoya get ready we have to leave for mumbai in an hour from there we will be going through our flight
zoya nodded and went to get ready asad too got ready and went to living room with all the bags zoya too came she was looking dam preety in that red kurti and jeans
asad admired her soon they left
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IN CAR
zoya: mr. khan itna lamba safar hai esse khamoshi se bethe rahenge to boar ho jayenge
asad: so what do you want mein aapke entertainment ke liye dance karun
zoya: agar aapka dance karna hi chahte hain to aapki marzi par agar aap dance karenge to drive kon karega so aap rehne dijiye
asad: not funny zoya please let me concentrate on my driving
zoya: issi baat pe ek sher arz hai
letter bhejne se pehle us par lagani padti hai mohar
letter bhejne se pehle us par lagani padti hai mohar
allah miyan kitne boring hai mere shohar
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AIRPORT
asad hold all the bags except a small bag
zoya saw that asad was struggling to hold all bags
zoya (teasing asad): mr khan aap please ye bag bhi utha lenge
asad took bag
asad mumbled: pichle janam mein coolie tha mein
zoya listened it but still asked: kuch kaha
asad: nahi
a girl named elina living in paris asked asad: you are
asad: asad ahmed khan
elina: i have seen you earlier in business tycoons magazine anyway u look too hot
asad: thanks for your comliment
zoya was getting jealous
elina's husband named james too joined them
elina: meet my husband james
asad shaked his hand with james
james: nice too meet you
zoya glared at asad and asad understood that she do not want any more moments with them
asad: we have to leave now
they left they were going to take taxi
zoya: elina ko sharm nahi ati khud ka husband hote hue bhi dusron ke husband par doore dal ti hai (doore dalna means to flirt)
asad: what doore dalna
zoya: haan dekha nahi kaise keh rahi thi u look so hot
they have took taxi now it was geeting dark now
asad: jealous
zoya: yes i am jealous only i have right to flirt with you koi bhi aise kaise aapke sath flirt kar le ga
asad smirked at her innocense while she rested her head on asad's shoulder
they reached hotel
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IN THEIR ROOM
asad: zoya tum thak gayi hogi tum fresh ho jao tab tak mein hamare liye dinner order kar aata huin
zoya nodded a yes
they took dinner and slept as it was already too late
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next day they went to beach
zoya saw some kids making their sand castle
zoya: mr khan chaliye na hum bhi apna ek sand castle banate hain
asad agreed they made a beautiful sand castle together
and named it asad aur zoya ka ashiyana
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precap-asya and their paper dance
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for those who think this update is short it is of 1024 words
i have worked hard to type it so i expect long comments from you guys😆
note in first comment after this post
previous part - pg 9 (last)
next part- pg -27
Edited by hottytotty - 12 years ago
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