AsYa OS: One Look - Page 2

Thank u thank u thank u this was what the cvs should have shown how could zoya forget what asad us like and what tanveer is like anyways a beautiful update please continue soon and thnx for the pm please pm wen updating 👏

Loved this OS!!!! Please continue it! I want to see what Tanveer's reaction will be when she finds out that nothing happened to their relationship! She needs to be punished and/or killed!

sigh...if only this had happened!

hey

Ahhh...that was so so so beautiful...😊

You succeeded in cheering everyone up! You are an amazing writer! Love love love this! The trust Zoya had in Asad in this OS is what I actually thought would happen. Zoya knows Tanu's challenge and the moments between her and Assd all week would have led to something like this!

CONTINUE PLEASE? This is really good, I can actually fool my brain into thinking that this happened, atleast until Monday :)

Can I have a hug? Please? *cries*

Omg this made me cry so much, the beginning I could feel their pain, his plead for her to hear him out and her in disbelief. I just wished he caught her words 'akhir ussine mujhe galat sabit kar hi liya'
I loved the way you described their emotions, although I was annoyed with him for not thinking it could be Tannu's fault, I was screaming for her to look up.
Her hesitation to look up to see what there was in his and finally seeing love and care for her BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN, damn how could she even think that he loves Tanveer? Anyhoo, the hug was too adorable for words, I teared up because finally they were together, they were holding each other, she trusts him, he loves her. I'm glad she told him about Tanveer and he believed her. It's going to be hard but he trusts her, finally. Everything was perfect, this OS is too beautiful for words. I loved it, that's all i'm going to say. I love this ending, my heart is at rest finally after crying all day. Thank you so much for writing this lovely, you certainly do have your way with words and you have totally melted my heart away. Thanks for the PM and cheering us up! That is all my heart can write for now, me will come back and read again...

P.S. can i have a Tannu bashing OS? Continued from this, how her plans fail and how she should just commit suicide? How she gets bitch slapped by everyone? Please pretty please. I'll be waiting with my chocolate and tissues for the happy ending!

Much lovess xoxo

Ahhh if only this happened in the show as well!! ): Unfortunately Asad and Zoya in the show don't trust each other as much as Asad and Zoya in your story. Love how you described their emotions, I felt like I was on an emotional roller coaster along with them!! Beautiful read (:

Awww so sweet!!! I really liked it!!

it works. Thnx for making me
smile through tears