AsYa OS: One Look

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rads73937

@rads73937

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Ya it does work.

Coming to OS it was beautifully written.

Thanx for the pm. Take care

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braich_gal

@braich_gal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

oh!!! thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you!!!

i love this!!!

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Monica

@mochhug

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: braich_gal
oh!!! thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you!!!

i love this!!!

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OMG! haha You're very welcome 😳😳😳

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647704

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

its good but

i want zoya to throw her out of the house😊

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Very nice! If you do write a second part then pls bring Tanveer's truth out. I want to see Asad, Dilshad and Zoya all slapping her!!!

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malini

@malini96

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

wow

it made me show all my 32 teeths together

it made my day

love u

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Gudduluvs

@Gudduluvs

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Its aersumm...it was so well writgn...hope smth.g vud comes up in d show too...thmkz 4 pm..

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sheet_leher

@sheet_leher

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Hi, Thank you so much for this one shot...it was so well written and actually helped me calm down and strengthened my belief in the fact that no matter what happens...AsYa will fight those barriers and be together. Her tears...Asad's pain...their love...it was beautifully depicted and all I can say is thank you...thank you for this.

thanks for the pm too...

lots of AsYa love...

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xxDaydreameRxx

@xxDaydreameRxx

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Oh My God.

This was SOOO beautiful that its making me mad that it didn't happen in the show! You wrote the emotions so well Mochu! 🤗 The OS was really about "one look" and OMG you described the intensity so aptly! And the hug...*faints* ..no really I LOVED IT!

Ugh now I really really cant wait for an intense AsYa hug - for such a romantic pair, they have too few dont u think? Always when her life is in danger..like that day when he saw her burn marks... okay admit it, that day, a hug was NEEDED! Okay I know Im going off topic but this OS of yours has just made me more greedy 😳

Beautiful job! 👏 It did cheer me up :)