an asya story:part 3 updated on pg5!!pls read

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Posted: 12 years ago
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He saw someone lying there in the desert. Thinking who this person could be lying like this in so hot weather. His heart which was already broken melted by seeing the condition and his step started moving towards that alien body. When he reached to the spot his eyes sprang out of the sockets and his mouth was left opened like a big O''..

Shuld I continue this story

It is all based on the spoiler pics I m getting

shishi


index

prologue:pg 1

part 1:pg2

part 2:pg3

part 3:pg5


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Posted: 12 years ago
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I have already written the first part will update asap. ... thanks 4 the replies
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start. please continue. and will u pm me if possible😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice yr...pls continue...& update soon...can i make a small req...pls update on continue basis..& larger one...updates wd jst 50-100 words..after a week...it just spoil d taste of story...i guess u already ploted a story based on pics so pls update soon & continue soon , make index page & pm me...

sorry if my words heart u...

pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
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He saw someone lying there in the desert. Thinking who this person could be lying like this in so hot weather. His heart which was already broken melted by seeing the condition and his step started moving towards that alien body. He saw a lady wearing a black anarkali suit with face covered through the dupatta. He knelt down in order to have a proper view of the face,his hand reached the dupatta and slightly he started to remove it. He felt a million daggers just passing through his heart after seeing the face. He took the futile body in his strong arms and embrace it through a body crushing hug with his voice box shouting only one thing

"ZOYA…."

Yes this was his zoya, ASAD AHMED KHAN'S ZOYA, the girl which came into his life like an angel who is always sent by Allah in order to withdraw all the darkness.

He backed her out in order to see her pale face.

Suddenly he felt something liquid on his hand which was around her waist. When he took away the hand from her waist he saw something red in colour which was making his hand wet.

'BLOOD' his mind reacted.

His body became lifeless as if someone has snatched the soul away from it.

He came out of the trance as he heard the sweet low voice of zoya addressing him

"Mr. Khan…."

He started patting her cheek in order to wake her up… but instead in return what he got was more heart breaking for him…

"I hate you Mr. Khan….aapne mujhe dokha diya hai,mai aapse kabhi baat nhi karungi….aapne mera dil toda hai…. I hate u Mr. Khan…"

"No zoya…. Pls don't do this to me…. U r everything 4 me…. I'm so sorry…. Par jaisa tum soch rhi ho waisa kuch nhi hai….mai aur tannu…"

But his mind struck him in the middle of the convo realizing that every passing second is just pushing her more far away from her as it is costing her life….

He lifted her up in his arms and started walking towards his car. {In Ajmer he is having his private villa and cars too.}

Carefully he placed her on the back seat of the car and closed the door.


i m sorry 4 this small update but will surely be updating on regular basis.

all the joota chappals accepted...

and if u liked it then pls do cmment 4 this newbie...
Posted: 12 years ago
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continue plzzz it seemz interesting

maggie
Posted: 12 years ago
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the 1st part is quite good

update soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey i really like it yr..good one...pls pm me whnevr u update..

pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Carefully he placed her on the back seat of the car, closed the door and proceeded towards the driving seat . driving like a maniac he reached the villa in no time.

He entered the house with a bang…. Making zoya awake.

He laid her on his bed covering her with a blanket and called a doctor.

--------After the doctor came--------

Asad was pacing in the living room while doctor was checking zoya inside the room.

Eventually the doctor came outside and asad started throwing the balls of his questions on him.

"Doctor, hws she?

Is she fine?

Is the wound deep?

When will she regain her consciousness?

Do we need to hospitalize her?"

"Calm down Mr. Khan….. She is out of danger and there's no need of hospitalizing her but yes the wound is deep…. I have prescribed her few medicines so just get them"

"And ONE more thing….."

" she is on the verge of entering the state of depression……. It seems like she is undergoing an emotional turmoil which is leading her mind towards depression. ''

Saying this the doctor left .

Asad just broke down…. His mind started cursing him that whatever pain zoya is suffering today is just because of him…. It is he who should be blamed. Her thoughts occupied him so much that he didn't even notice that the door bell is ringing…

He got up and opened the door. There stood……

To be continued….

P.S: I heard that many of u love cliffy so I hope I gave u one. Well till the next update keep guessing who is on the door of Asad Ahmed khan. I m really sorry 4 such a small post but thought of keeping a suspense.so if u liked it pls cment and like the post.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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kahi tanveer billi toh nhi...

hate her


thnks 4 d pm dear

pari

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