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Posted: 12 years ago
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so here part 3!!! i know u want to kill me for such a late update and so sorry 4 tat!!but seriously it feels so great to post the 3rd part of my first writing !! no more tme wasting here the part 3!!

He got up and opened the door. There stood a guy slim, cute looking, tall but a bit tensed….

"Is zoya with u" he enquired asad while entering the house…

He closed the door behind him asked in an irritated tone about his introduction, what came next was more surprising…

"hi I m kabir, zoya's frnd over here… I know her jiju an as I got the news of her coming I became her caretaker and btw who r u and how dare u took her with u…. "

"hello, I m asad zoya's….."

"Oh I know u… she told me about u actually how good u r.."

'So she lied even after all this she praised me…. How and why…'Asad thought..

"btw where is she….."

"first u tell me that u were her caretaker right then how come u left her there in that desert when she was barely conscious….."

"do u have any idea what exactly happened there…."

Asad felt ashamed…..

"hws she?"

"who"

"Obliviously zoya…."

"she's better"

"GOOD"

They both got seated on the sofa set and an awkward silence took over them….

~~~~~~~~~~~~after a while~~~~~~~~~~

"So u were there when this accident took place…." Said asad breaking the silence

"not exactly…. I was standing far away from their when she was being attacked "

Rage overtook asad for this guy. How could he say that like this that he was seeing all this from a distance when HIS ZOYA was being attacked….

"I know what u r thinking but I m going to tell everything in detail"

~~~~~~~~~~~~FLASHBACK STARTS~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

She was walking on the hot sand. Her feet were burning but the pain which was caused but the burning of the heart was hundred times more than this.

Suddenly she felt something sharp on her back which made her to turn around

"YOU" zoya shouted in disbelief

"kyun hame dekh kar harani ho rahi hai kya "

"tum yahan kya kar rahi ho"

"humne socha kit um akele itne dukh kaise jheloge to isliye hum tumhare dard ka ant karn ke liye yahan aye hai" said tanveer having a wicked smile on her face.

She put the knife's point on zoya's temple and traced it down towards her neck and pressing it a bit which made zoya to moan in pain

"tanveer tum mujhse sab kuch to cheen hi chuki ho to now what u want I have nthing that I can give u"

"acha…. Tum sahi keh rhi ho ki humne tumse tumhara sab kuch cheen liya hai lekin abhi tak hume use apna nhi bana paye hai"

"what u mean??"

"tum uss din asad ki zindagi se to chali gyi lekin tumhari yaadon ne aaj bhi use gher kar rakha hai… kitni baar humne unke kareeb jane ki koshish ki par nhi tum nhi to tumhari yaadon ne hume rok diya…. Aur phir achanak se ek din tum unhe mil gyi aur wo tumhare piche piche yahan tak bhi aa gye"

"maine to pehle hi kaha tha tanveer…"she said pushing tanveer's hand away from her neck

"maine to pehle hi kaha tha tanveer ki yeh duniya gol hai jahan se shuru hoti hai wahi par khatm bhi hoti hai…. Jaise tumhari….. tum tab bhi tanha aur akeli thi aur tum aaj bhi tanha aur akeli hi ho"

"bas ek aur lafz tumhari zubaan se chuta aur tumhari ruh(aatma,soul) ne tumhare sharer ko chuda….."

"ab in baton se mujhe koi farak nhi padta hai" said zoya with a little smile on her lips.

This made tanveer more irritated an she shouted "TUM.." AND SHE STABBED ZOYA…

"ek aur baat tanveer mr. khan chahe mujhse jitni bhi bewafayi kar le vo mere the mere hai aur mere hi rahenge.." said zoya with her voice breaking down at every word but still with a smile playing on her lips..

This made tanveer's anger to reach its heights and she mercilessly stabbed zoya once again….

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~FLASHBACK ENDS~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Listening to all this asad felt like killing himself for not believing her when he should be… but at the same time a lone tear escaped from his eye in respond to his zoya's last words before drifting in the world of darkness…

"And then I went to make arrangements of taking her to the nearest hospital but luckily u found her and took her here and I found u.. " continued kabir in a relaxing mode.

"I think now I should leave… since she needs rest and I m sure u won't allow me to meet her so may I leave …"

"Yeah sure and now it's also getting dark outside"

"I'll catch u guys tomorrow morning"

"allah hafiz"

"khuda hafiz"

To be continued….

P.S: I m sorry 4 such a late update but this is 4 u guys only .

Princeegoyal: im soory 4 taking so long to update this.

Guys h.w is left and vacations are getting overso didn't got time and then the computer broke down

Btw hws this one and no biili on the door…

Pls do cment and like. Jootha chaapals accepted.

shishi

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey shishi..i jst loved it...spcly zoya's last words...so pure..full of love...thnks 4 d update..waiting 4 d next update...& thnks 4 d pm dear

update soon plsss

pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice dear... Thanks for the pM

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