{Don't Go Away} ||An AsYa Three Shot|| pg 13 updat - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

104

Views

21.3k

Users

53

Likes

353

Frequent Posters

sasir thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#31
nice.how i wish the same happen in the serial too. but alas its not happening. but u made it. thnx. update soon
VindhyaMounika thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Really really good one...thanks for the update waiting for next update
aashiqua thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Mashallah !
It was fab loved it
LuvUAsYa thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#34
UNRES ON PG 5 N pleease pleease continuee sooonn!! 😃
zoas91 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#35
brilliant👏 continue soon
rutu83 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#36
go away tanveer 😡

don't go away zoya 😭🤗
AsYa_fan thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#37

In Ajmer

Zoya was in the Ajmer dargh, praying that Dilshad and Najma were fine. She prayed that her life would be better even though there is no hope left.

She was praying in tears. One tear after another prayer.

After she finished she left the dargh and sat outside it.

When Zoya reached Ajmer she found a hotel and decided to find a job and start life anew, but before that she wanted to go to the dargh and pray.

It was not easy forgetting everything and coming to Ajmer, but she had allah with her.

Asad was trying to find Zoya in Ajmer. He was driving like crazy and checking all the hotels. He even checked the dargh where some people saw the girl in the picture which Asad was showing them. Before leaving he went inside the dargh, coincidently the same spot Zoya was praying in. He prayed to allah that he found his Zoya soon.

After praying, he searched every place possible. He even called her knowing that she wouldn't pick up. There were even some moments when Asad lost some hope and started yelling, "ZOYA!"

and breaking down. He would hug the picture of Zoya with him and cry. Memories came in his head of Zoya. (Kabira)

Zoya would sometimes cry thinking of Asad like he did, she would even just sit down to cry. "Asad.." She would say while crying.

After some moments Zoya got a phone call she picked it up and wiped away her tears.

"Hello?" she said a little quiet

"Is this Zoya Faroqqui?" It was a girl

"Yes." she answered

"Well there is this girl who is looking for you, she said that you are her bhabi and she is crying terribly."

Najma. Zoya thought and then asked immediately

"Where is she?"

"Meet me in Ajmer top." The girl said

Zoya immediately hung up and took a rickshaw to Ajmer Top, but she didn't know that something else would happen.

Asad was busy looking for Zoya when he saw a rickshaw and saw a glimpse of the passenger. It was a girl wearing a pink kurti with jeans. Asad immediately knew who it was. "Zoya!"

He found a rickshaw and asked the driver to follow the rickshaw.

"Zoya mein aa raha hoon" he whispered determinedly.

When Zoya reached the mountain she paid the rickshaw driver and he drove off leaving Zoya alone, but not for long.

She was looking around to find where Najma was.

"Najma?

She heard someone clapping and turned around slowly to see who it was. It was none other than Tanveer

"Tum?"

"Haha! You are so innocent Zoya." she said evilly

Tanveer came to Zoya and pushed her.

Zoya was in the edge of the cliff and spoke scared,

"Wh-what d-do you want?"

"I want you to get out of this world!" she said with an evil grin

"Bye bye Zoya!"

She pushed her and Zoya fell screaming loudly

Tanveer quickly ran away not noticing the rickshaw coming and Asad running towards the cliff

"ZOYA!!!" yelling as he knelt down to see if Zoya was still there.

He couldn't see her and started crying, but kept on yelling her name

"ZOYA!!! ZOYA!!!" He yelled
"Zoya you can't leave me like this!" "I-I love you Zoya! I love you!!"
He broke down and was crying that he lost his love, but he didn't notice the person climbing up.
"Asad?" she whispered painfully.
He looked up, his eyes red from the tears and saw her.
"Zoya." he whispered back
He looked at her. Zoya was covered with dust and dirt. Her hair was messed up and she was coughing painfully.
Asad helped her up and when she was on the ground he helped her up, but she removed her hand from his and said, "I can help myself."
She was still angry at him and Asad knew that.
When he touched her arm she removed it and slapped him
Asad was shocked at this gesture and was pleading,"Zoya please I didn't do anything! I swear."
"I am not mad at you for that I am mad at you because you let me live!"
She yelled.
"Why didn't you just leave and let me die? After all I am dead for you!" She spat, but before she could say anything else Asad hugged her.
"Don't you EVER say that again" He threatened.
Zoya broke the hug and pushed him
"Shut up! This is all your fault!" "Why do you care for me?"
He went up to her and held her arm and shook her roughly and yelled, "DO YOU KNOW WHY I CARE SO MUCH FOR YOU? WHY I CAN'T SEE YOU HURT OR UPSET? BECAUSE I LOVE YOU!! I LOVE YOU ZOYA FARIOQUI!!!!"
He cupped her face and whispered, "I love you."
She then spoke gently, but painfully, "Then why did you hurt me so much?"
"I didn't do that intentionally. I was forced to and drugged."
He closed his eyes and said, "I am sorry Zoya for not believing you about Tanveer. I guess I deserve this."
He then said sadly, "Zoya I think I should leave your life forever. I have cause you to much pain."
He took a look at Zoya who was looking at him sympathetically with unshed tears. He walked away taking his last glimpse of her.
He walked away until he heard her yell
"No!"
He turned around and saw her running to him.
She ran straight into his arms and then spoke between tears
"How can you leave me? I love you Asad, I love you!"
They both hugged till their heart content and then Asad broke the hug and cupped Zoya's face. He kissed her forehead.
Then he spoke, "Lets go home."
Asad started walking and then Zoya stopped him and said,"Asad my legs hurt."
Asad smiled at her complaint and went to her and took her into his arms.
They started walking away together as the sun set.
Allah granted their wish and united the couple forever...
I hope you guys liked this update! I know the ending is kind of cheesy, but I just felt like writing this.
So please post a (long) comment and like!!!!
iLuvYellow thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#38
First of all, YAY im first!!!! 🥳

Second of all, the ts was AMAZING!
Loved every bit of it!
Ur an awesome writer!!
Are u gonna continue and tell about what happened to tanu, asya nikaah, and stuff?
Im getting greedy arent i? 😆
Im just sad it ended! 😭
If u do write something else pm me!

Third of all, Thanks for the PM!!! 😊

PS the ending was sweet not cheezy. :)
Edited by iLuvYellow - 12 years ago
amri123 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#39
hey
great update
that was a very nice ending
glad that Zoya's safe and that they're back together
also that Asad finally saw the true face of Tanveer
great job👏
and that ending you think is cheezy made me smile
so thank you😊
thanks for the PM😊
Sharandeep thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Not cheesey at all it was beautiful hope this really did happen in show

Related Topics

Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: Coloursoflove

2 years ago

*New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor *New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor

Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor Asad Ahmed Khan is the prodigal son. All the tabloids say so. Coming from an affluent family in Bhopal, he's done...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

1 years ago

AsYa FF ~ Broken Ties (chapter 5 updated)

[NOCOPY] Hello everyone! Happy to be here. I was searching for an opportunity to be here with all of you as a member after a long time as writer...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: ExoticDisaster

6 months ago

AsYa OS - Unfolding Yesterday

Writer - ExoticDisaster | Graphicer - Oh_nakhrewaali | Theme - Bag Unfolding Yesterday Zoya coughed, pulling the scarf higher over her nose and...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69

6 months ago

AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts. AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts.

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's day contest - A Bag full of love. cover : oh_nakhrewaali | writer : missFiesty_69 |...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69

6 months ago

AsYa OS - Love, Lies and a Spilled Latte AsYa OS - Love, Lies and a Spilled Latte

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's Day contest - A bag full of love . cover : ExoticDisaster aka Shiri | writer :...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".