{Don't Go Away} ||An AsYa Three Shot|| pg 13 updat

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Jassieg

@Jassieg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Loved it...post the next part soon.

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Awesome! Loved it👏 Please pm me when you update.😊

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Afsha

@iLuvYellow

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Heres ur long comment

Thank you sooo much!

Really cant explain how happy i am that u wrote this!

Really needed to get my mind off todays epi!

Wow! Loved the ts so far!

Im just speechless

I really want u to continue soon!

The nikaah happened, yay!

But zoya runs away :(

I hope asad finds her!

Ugh!!!! Hate tanveer, hope nothing happens to zoya!

Actually i take that back, i want zoya to get hurt and asad to take care of her!

I really hate tanveer and this track, i hope this happens or that precap of asad saying "mujhe yeh nikaah...qubool" would make no sense!

I loved this part!

Do continue plz!

Will loveee to read more!

Thanks for the ts again!!!

A hug from me 🤗

😊❤️😊

Edited by iLuvYellow - 12 years ago

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Sharandeep

@Sharandeep

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Can you please pm when you continue

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Barayah

@irock321

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Loved this !!!! Today's episode really upset me ...more like pissed me off! It is the WORST misunderstanding ever...also the most common! Ughhh still pissed! Tomorrow's episode will just piss me off even more! WHAT IS WRONG WITH THE CV'S?!? ...Ughhh anyways back to this OS!!!

LOL Loved this! I wonder if this will actually happen or not?!? I doubt Zoya is gonna do the Nikaah right now ...I actually thought in this OS that she will say no ...even in the show that she has to understand that Tanveer wasn't there as well ...Tanveer will do something to ruin her wedding. She should have been on her feet and ready to strike! Amazing! Can't wait for the next part to this OS!! Thanks for the PM :)))

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

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In exams!

Got a little time so I'll leave short comment and come back to gush after exams 😆

I LOVED this. I really hope this happens. I mean I know Zoya will leave, but I hope that Asad realizes Tanveer's true colors in Ajmer. Thats what a couple spoilers said, but as we've seen, they aren't ALL reliable.

I loved the beginning with Zoya memorizing everything about the house and the people in it. So well described. Apt and perfect.

All I can do for now.. but will finish this comment in a day or two! 😃

Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago

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Puneet

@AsYa_fan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: iLuvYellow
Heres ur long comment

Thank you sooo much!
Really cant explain how happy i am that u wrote this!
Really needed to get my mind off todays epi!
Wow! Loved the ts so far!
Im just speechless
I really want u to continue soon!
The nikaah happened, yay!
But zoya runs away :(
I hope asad finds her!
Ugh!!!! Hate tanveer, hope nothing happens to zoya!
Actually i take that back, i want zoya to get hurt and asad to take care of her!
I really hate tanveer and this track, i hope this happens or that precap of asad saying "mujhe yeh nikaah...qubool" would make no sense!
I loved this part!
Do continue plz!
Will loveee to read more!
Thanks for the ts again!!!
A hug from me 🤗

😊❤️😊

Thanks for the long comment!!

Your wish is my command! In the next update I will have some Tanu getting tortured and some guilty Asad with angry Zoya and some caring Asad with romance!!!

Thanks for the hug!!🤗

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Puneet

@AsYa_fan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: irock321
Loved this !!!! Today's episode really upset me ...more like pissed me off! It is the WORST misunderstanding ever...also the most common! Ughhh still pissed! Tomorrow's episode will just piss me off even more! WHAT IS WRONG WITH THE CV'S?!? ...Ughhh anyways back to this OS!!!

LOL Loved this! I wonder if this will actually happen or not?!? I doubt Zoya is gonna do the Nikaah right now ...I actually thought in this OS that she will say no ...even in the show that she has to understand that Tanveer wasn't there as well ...Tanveer will do something to ruin her wedding. She should have been on her feet and ready to strike! Amazing! Can't wait for the next part to this OS!! Thanks for the PM :)))

I agree I did not like today's episode!!! But I am sure the misunderstandings will be cleared! That's why I made this TS

Well for this TS Zoya said yes for Dilshad not for Asad. And Zoya hasn't accepted Asad as a husband yet. But I am sure you will like the next update!