The Irresistible Force of Destiny A/N Pg 1

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#481

A very beautiful ending. Loved how you described the birth. The hug between Asad and Rashid was the surprise package!! 👏 👏

I only wish you had added a part on Asad cutting the umbilical cord, then the midwife cleaning up the baby and then the wrapped up baby handed to Zoya! That would make it perfect for me! 😊

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sweetnandu

@sweetnandu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#482

just came across this story ..

started reading it..

it was beautiful..

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#483

Wow.. I read the entire FF withing 24hrs.. I couldn't stop.. Honestly, you have a way with words. Its as if I can see the story unfolding in front of me.

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#484

Wow...This was a fabulous story👏

Very well written👍🏼

I started this today morning and just had to finish reading all the parts...This was just so addictive...I wish it did not have to end

It's wonder i actually got some work done today😆

Thank you for an awesome story...I just loved your asad and zoya❤️ Infact i loved all your characters.

This was just a superb read...

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#485

amazing story read it in one go couldn't put it do
do o me if u write and epilouge

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-RM-

@-RM-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#486

When i need distraction, i just read your stories :-)

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Tamara27

@Tamara27

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#487

Originally posted by: -RM-
When i need distraction, i just read your stories :-)

Aww, you're so sweet Riddhi!
Love and hugs!

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Tamara27

@Tamara27

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#488

Originally posted by: anopama
amazing story read it in one go couldn't put it do
do o me if u write and epilouge

Thanks! Will do!

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Tamara27

@Tamara27

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#489

Originally posted by: NAVI55
Wow...This was a fabulous story👏

Very well written👍🏼

I started this today morning and just had to finish reading all the parts...This was just so addictive...I wish it did not have to end

It's wonder i actually got some work done today😆

Thank you for an awesome story...I just loved your asad and zoya❤️Infact i loved all your characters.

This was just a superb read...

Haha! Hope you got some work done, at least!
Thanks so much for your wonderful compliments - I really appreciate it!