AsYa OS:ThE StRaNger iN tHe RaIN part2 updated pg7

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luvd it...

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awesome story.. loved it..

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dis was really cute..loved it..!!

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Wow

This was beautiful

I love reading it

P.s. i love rains

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This was beautiful

I love reading it

P.s. i love rains

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niharika

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#27

"Why do you keep running away from me, Zoya?"

"So that you can catch me and pull me towards you."

Loved these lines!!
it was so cute
and some how reminded me of aashiqui 2

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Nitika

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Originally posted by: nihamrm

"Why do you keep running away from me, Zoya?"

"So that you can catch me and pull me towards you."

Loved these lines!!
it was so cute
and some how reminded me of aashiqui 2

thanks😊

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SOSOSOSOSOSOSOSO CUTEEE!!!! ❤️ Very, very adorable and beautiful! 😳 Superb job! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 TOTALLY LOVED IT. 😃 😉

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Nitika

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Part 2:

Asad and zoya reached home it was quite late and ammi and najma were asleep...

zoya went to their room

She was removing the bangles while Asad was observing how beautiful her gesture was even while she was removing her bangles.She removed her silver earring. it was still raining. Zoya looked at the rain with a smile through the window.and she moved her hand to close the window.

Suddenly Asad held her hand. Zoyalooked at him.
A:No need of closing the window. Let it be open.
Z:We are completely drenched and if I don't close it we will catch cold.

A:Let it be so.
Zoya could'nt believe it:But you don't like rain.Right?
A:I did'nt like rain before.But you made me love rain.
She smiled.
A:I wanted to see this smile in your face.When you smile dimples appear like a blooming flower. and you can kill anyone with your dimpeled smile...

(they both remembered the bhang rainy night)
She blushed.
Z:Let us go out again and feel the rain asad.
She grabbed his hand and went out.Asad stood at the verandah while Zoya stood in the rain.
Z:Come Mr khan.

Imagine that this rain is your Zoya and hug rain.
He smiled.Slowly he came towards her and held her hand.
A:Now you look as if you are made of rain drops.So instead of hugging the rain i can hug you.Right?

Zoya became shy.

His hands moved through her face while Zoya drowned in his passionate eyes.
They noticed the rain drops falling on them.

Zoya stretched her hands to touch the rain drops and feel it more.

Z:Asad...listen to the rain drops.

Look at the rain drops.It has some silent desire.It is expressing it silently.

yeh saazish hai buundon kii
koii khwaahish hai chup chup sii
yeh saazish hai buundon kii
koii khwaahish hai chup chup sii
dekho na...

A:Even the cold wind is talking to us about the silent desire of rain.The rain desires to see us together without any space between us.

Zoya smiled.

A:hawaa kuchh haule haule
zubaan se kya kuchh bole bole
kyon duurii hai ab darmiyaan
dekho na...

A:These rain drops hide a lot of romantic secrets from us.

She blushed.

A:phir na hawaa'en hongii itnii besharam
phir na Dagmag Dagmag ho.nge ye qadam
haay
phir na hawaa'en hongii itnii besharam
phir na dag-mag dag-mag honge ye qadam

Z:You are right Asad

These rain drops are saying something while pouring down
Even the wind is saying something quietly

She was shy to look at Asad's eyes and so she covered her eyes with her hands.

Z:saawan yeh siidha nahii.n khufiyaa bara
kuchh to baraste hu'e kah rahaa

Asad removed her hands from her eyes with his hands softly and looked at her magical eyes...

A:samjho na...

Geet caressed his face passionately looking deeply at him:
hawaa kuchh haule haule
zubaan se kya kuchh bole bole
kyo.n duurii hai ab darmiyaan
dekho na...

A:dekho na...
They both smiled at each other.
Her saree's pallu started blowing in the rain.
Asad felt the instrumental music of 'Kuch kuch hota hai' in the back ground.

He put her saree properly on her shoulder and danced holding her hands.

It was a passionate sensuous dance.

Asad carried Zoya to the dark room.

There were fireflies.(jugnu)

They were amazed to see it.
Z:Asad,our love twinkles like fireflies.

Asad smiled.
A:Your eyes also twinkle like fireflies.

Z:jugnuu jaisii chaahat dekho jale bujhe
miithii sii mushkil hai koii kya kare
jugnuu jaisii chaahat dekho jale bujhe
miithii sii mushkil hai koii kya kare

Asad placed her on the bed.

He went closer to her.She was so shy that she ran out.

Asad ran after her.

She was standing in the rain and blushing.
He went near her.

His lips were wet because of the falling rain drops.

Zoya found his cold wet lips sensuous.
His lips went close to her longing to touch her.

She moved away due to shyness.He caught her wet saree's pallu.

His lips shivered:Zoya,please don't reject the request of lips like this.The rain will be upset.
She looked at him blushing.

He pulled her saree towards him slowly to get her closer to him.

Zoya was very much nearer to him now without leaving any space between them.

He saw burning passion in her sparkling eyes.

She moved away from him with an attractive smile and lay down where rain drops were still falling.
Zoya said in a sweet intoxicating voice:Touch me Asad...and feel the sweetness of rain.
chhuu lo na...
chhuu lo na...
chhuu lo na...
chhuu lo na...

He went close to her.She closed her eyes.
His hands covered her with passionate love.

A:hawaa kuchh haule haule
zubaan se kya kuchh bole bole
kyon duurii hai ab darmiyaan

They could hear the rain whispering something witnessing their love.
A: I love you Zoya from the day I meet you

Z:i love you to Asad

A:dekho na...
Z:dekho na...
She hummed:dekho na...
The rain covered them as if it was protecting them from the evil eyes.

The rain showered blessings on them by pouring water drops upon them.

I updated it after so much time but hope you like it😊

do share your views😉

P.s: I love the song dekho na because of ksg as it was picturised on karan and Jennifer in dmg...

and the end should be more exagratted i.e yhey wake up in the morning and had 102 fever😆😆