SS: Ek tu hi tu hain part 2 updated

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The new spoiler pics gave me an idea to write a SS. This is my first one, please excuse for the grammatical errors..ENJOY!!

Ek tu hi tu hain
Part 1

Zoya froze on her feet. She was shocked and hurt to the core. The screen in front of her eyes was showing her worst fears. She thought how did this happened? How can asad do this to her?
Her thoughts was interrupted by tanveer, " you still don't believe me? After seeing these? "
Zoya turned her eyes to asad , he was feeling guilty. He don't know how he fell in to this trap. He looked in to zoya's eyes. They only show a great grief, a tremendous amount of pain. Her tears were like knifes stabling through his heart. He wanted to wash all her pain and console her, but he knew he was the reason for her tears. He himself don't have an explanation for what has happened.

FLASHBACK
Asad was getting ready for his Nikaah when tanveer came to his room with a cup of coffee.
T: jammy yeh ap keliye
A: sukriya

Asad takes the cup and have a few sips. Tanveer leaves his room but, was watching him through the window. Asad was day dreaming about zoya.
Asad smiles thinking about how she will be Mrs . Asad Ahmed Khan from today onwards, she will be his and only his.
Thinking about her made him smile.
but when he thought about how he will confess his love for her tonight he became nervous .
To calm him down he gulped down the coffee quickly.
The moment Tanveer saw that asad had drunk the whole cup, she came in to action 😡
A moment later asad received a call, it was tanveer's. asad wondered why she was calling. He picked up the call
T: jammy jammy please save me, he will kill me jammy please help
A: what? Who? Who is going to kill you? What happen tannu?
T: jammy, my husband he is here, he has kidnapped me, I'm in a factory
A: factory?which factory? What are you saying tannu?
T: this place is on bopal highway
A:Ok calm down ok? I'm coming
Asad ran out of the wedding venue, on the rush he forgot his phone in his room
He rushed in to the car and raced towards the highway.
He reached the factory only to find tanveer safe and sound at the entrance .
He was shocked and asked her where is your husband ?
T: he is inside, he is searching for me , I some how managed to escape to the entrance
He saw a dark figure coming towards him at that exact moment Asad started feeling dizzy, his head was spinning and his vision started to blur. In a few moments he blacked out collapsed on the ground.

Asad can't remember what had happened afterwards,
When he came to his senses he was on a table in the factory, half naked.
Tanveer was next to him, asad's hands where on tanveer's waist.
Zoya was there in bridal wear standing in front of him, she asked him what is going on?
He had no answer,
His head was heavy
Tanveer gave the evil smile for the situation she had created
She got up from the table and gave said : I'm very sorry zoya , I didn't mean to, it just happened , I'm sorry but me and asad ...
Zoya shouted at tanveer cutting her sentence : I don't believe you, asad will never cheat on me, I bet you had trapped him
Asad got the shock of his life: cheat? Trap? Me? What's going on? What happened ? He thought
But soon by judging the condition of himself and tanveer, asad realised
He thought:Ya allah, But how? I don't remember anything? OMG what hav I done? I have cheated on zoya with my best friend? I have destroyed both zoya and tannu's life. He was brought back into reality by tanveer's voice
Tanveer: you think so zoya? Here have a look at these pictures then
Asad thought :what pictures?what is tanveer talking about?
Tanveer gave zoya a camera with pics of her and asad sharing close moments

*FLASHBACK OVER*

I will post the next part soon
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Here is part 2 , I know it's short but I will update the next part soon
Please excuse all the grammatical errors.

A few hours ago When had asad fainted tanveer ordered her men to come and take asad inside the factory
When the men had done their work, she ordered them to leave and she had unbuttoned his sherwani , made his and her conditions as if they had been getting intimate she took a few pics of her and asad in intimate positions

AT PRESENT
Zoya looked at asad, for an explanation, hoping he would deny all these, he would convince her that nothing happened
Asad knew the questions in zoya s eyes, but how can he answer them when he himself have no clue how this happened
Zoya can't take all this anymore she got hold of asad's biceps , she shook him and screamed
Zoya "is this all true? Why? Asad? Why?"
Asad stood like a child in silence, his eyes collected tears
Zoya : U didn't do any thing right? This is all a conspiracy right?
Zoya cupped his face made him look into her teary eyes
Answer me DAMN IT!! Zoya cried
Asad bend his head down in guilt
Zoya can't believe it! She saw guilt in his eyes.
She felt her whole world collapsing all around her , all her memories with him came flooding back to her in a flash. She felt helpless, her knees gave up on her, she melted on the ground.
She cried, screamed loudly, her asad, her only love, had betrayed her trust, he had failed her and let her down.

Asad couldn't bear to see zoya in this condition, he felt as if he is dead but for some reason he was still breathing,
He stepped forward, placed his shaking hand over her shoulders .
Zoya felt a warm hand on her shoulder, she turned her head.
A:zoya... I ' ...don't ... I'm ...I. ..
Z: bas, I don't want to listen to anything, you couldn't say anything before also so I will not listen to you
Zoya stood up and grabbed asad's hand.
Z: come with me,
She went to tanveer, tanveer can see a new women in zoya, her eyes were filled with rigid strength and the strong willpower of not giving up
Tanveer giving evil look
Z: tanveer, whatever has happened I can't change it, but I will not let my phuphi loose her bet, it's a question of her honour. This marriage will happen. And it will happen today and now,
Asad shocked but relieved and proud of zoya
Tanveer shocked and giving evil stares
Z: with this marriage emotions and hopes of many of our loved ones is attached , I will not disappoint them, as for what has happened, we will sort this out after the Nikaah
T: but... U will still marry him? After all this? First ask him if he will marry you?
A: yes I can't hurt ammi,
Zoya gave a weak smile
Z:we don't have much time, I think we should get going,

In the car
Tanveer has gone in another car as she was fuming with her failed plans and can't stand asad and zoya together,
Zoya can't help it but tears kept escaping from her eyes, seeing this asad held her hand
A:thank you zoya, for loving my family so much ... And most of all trusting me
Zoya slipped her hand from him
Z: Mr.Khan don't think that I have forgiven you, I will never forgive you for this
Asad was shocked, he knew he don't deserve her but..

Please please comment and like
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Edited by ...Hannu... - 12 years ago
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very scary ...pls pls make it ok soon in the ss
will snd u a buddy request ..so pls send me a PM ven u update
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Originally posted by: AnjuRish

very scary ...pls pls make it ok soon in the ss

will snd u a buddy request ..so pls send me a PM ven u update


Don't worry it will have a happy ending I promise

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u have to really cntinue soon

or else i am gonna colapse

awesome update

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Originally posted by: malini1996

u have to really cntinue soon

or else i am gonna colapse

awesome update


Thanks
Hahaah don't collapse 😊
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nice story plzzz continue soon and plzzz pm me for the next part
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it ws wonderful. Plz cnt soon
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Edited by Surish - 12 years ago

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