Part 3- pg 15 UPDATED!!!!:FF||The Dark Night||

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Hello Qhians!
I am here with a new FF...hope u guys will like it!
It is a dark love story.

Prologue:-

It was dark, so dark.Black clouds loomed over the horizon. Lightning flashed, followed by thunderous roars.
A cold shudder trickled her spine. She glanced around nervously, not sure for what she was looking. Cold and hesitant, she entered, closing the door behind. She could feel his presence, the eerie shadows on the walls developed panic.She fumbled for a light switch, flipped it up and down but the surrounding remained immersed in darkness. Fear settled in and deep down she knew she was not alone.
She wanted to run away. She took a step towards the door and reached the bolt to unlock it.
Alas, something held her,captivated her,made her stiff.
It was HIS TOUCH...
She knew she will be drawn in, drowned in slumbering evil.

Lacking the courage to look into his eyes, she remained still waiting for his moves. A lone tear escaped her eyes as he displaced the little volume of air between them. Her entire body was engulfed between his arms. Her back touched his front and his breath warmed her skin.He left no place for her to escape making it clear that any move she takes will only turn things from bad to worst.
He played with her hair, sweeping them to the other side of her shoulder, revealing her milky white,flawless back.
He went close to her ears and spoke.
"There is no escape, baby."

So, guys how is it???
All your chappals are welcomed😆
Do you want me to continue?😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow! M excited. Cnt soon plz
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Prologue seems interesting...
Continue soon...
Thnx for PM...
Mariam...
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Character Sketch:-

Asad Ahmed Khan-



A ruthless and mean businessman. A confident man, never believes in love. He has gone through a lot of hardships and loves his work. He can tolerate everything except a lie.


Zoya Farooqui-




Zoya is a happy, fun loving girl. She is a traditional, and always stands for what is right. She is beautiful and loves her brother. She is a software engineer and works at Ayaan's construction company.







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Posted: 12 years ago
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The prologue appears quite convincing!
I would love to read your ff as I have a particular liking for dark ffs.
Looking forward to reading this, please continue soon..
Cant wait..!!
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Plz send me a buddy request if u want me to pm u...
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interesting ..wow passionate ..cute ...pls pls continue soon
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Originally posted by: AnjuRish

interesting ..wow passionate ..cute ...pls pls continue soon



thnku😆
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