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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

This heart wrenchingly beautiful. Gosh you're so talented. You have a way with words thats unparalleled. I teared up. I didn't expect it to be so sad. But i knew when she said that she would die too that she was probably sick. I feel so sad for her. But i loved the ending. Very redeeming. Too good man. Why do you insist on making us cry?

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Miss Sara

@Samaira32

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

ahhh babes, this was emotional..

It made me cry...

Very nice... Feel so sad for Asad and Zoya...

Amazing honey... 🤗🤗🤗 Jaado ki jhaapii for you...

And lovely story dear...

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CupofCoffeee

@CupofCoffeee

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Faiza I Love you...n I loved this piece of writing...!!

nothing more to say...just loved it from the bottom of my heart n it made me cry!

U r a brilliant writer🤗

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

i..i..i'm speechless that has to be one of the most ...oh can't even find the right words but 👏

if there was a standing ovation emoticon i would use that for this os

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paagal_

@paagal_

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

That was soo goood, made my heart melt. Very nicely written :)

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hillykhan

@hillykhan

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Ohmygoah, this was such a stunning piece... took me through such an emotional ride... love the way it started and ended :') sigh*
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My heart goes out right to the both of them.. gaaah, loved it dammit <33333

PS; had to re-type after a pretty long message..

Edited by hillykhan - 12 years ago

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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

That was beautifully written, such an emotional piece. Best Wishes

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Natasha

@Naughtynatty

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Faiza I am in tears girl honestly its ur best work till now wont even lie !

I mean I dont know where you get so much dept from in ur work and especially use words so well to express all those emotions. God gift to you sweets :)

I am short of words I could write an essay and I would be just saying amazing things but some things are better left unsaid.

I just loved it girl and you made my heart cry here.

We all can connect as most of us have lost some in our families because of cancer.

Kuddos again girl so proud of you and so happy to have a friend in a girl like you 😊

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LoveAsYa222

@LoveAsYa222

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Omg I'm speechless right now 😳 How can u write anything this AMAZING??????!!!! 😲 It was just BEAUTIFUL and I mean it from the bottom of my heart right now 😳 How I wish u could write a book on this 😭😆😳 But back to my orignal point 😆 It was just wowww 👏