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Black.Jack

@Black.Jack

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

Agree...Its Humen's nature...When we are hurt and angry we hurt the next person where we Know it hurt the MOST...guess that is what he is going...

Can't wait for the next chapter...whenever I read you SS I cry...so I am going to do that till Asad and Zoya both are going to be okey...I am sure you have something interesting in mind...😊

Btw, Thanks for the Pm...😊

Dont know if you will call it interesting or not you have to tell that, but he aint the villain🤢

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braich_gal

@braich_gal

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

ooo...you're really good...please update soon and send me a pm when you update 😊

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Yes Asad is capable of doing so! He is an animal 😆 this was BRILLIANT. the pain could be so easily felt. Great work Kuku

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Wow very emotional story... i cant take it... you make me cry 😭

update soon!!

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-.-Mariam-.-

@-.-Mariam-.-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Very SAD but Superb Update...😭U wrote their emotions very well...👏How could he blame ZOYA for the loss of child...😕She is also at loss...😔Hope that their missunderstandings will sort out soon...😕COntinue soon...Thnx for PM...

Mariam...

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rajnid68

@rajnid68

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

hey its your imagination so why change the storyline..

sad but well conceived...

waiting when they be there for each other...

Edited by rajnid68 - 12 years ago

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Loved the update so heart touching !!

Feel so bad for Zoya how can Asad behave like this ? she needs love & support of his most & at that time he left her alone I can understand he is in pain but her pain is more than that

U portrayed the flashback specially hospital scene so nicely, his pain, anger i feel that

hope he will understand his fault soon

nice piece of work

Thank u so much for pm 😊

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Applef

@Applef

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

It is so beautiful and very touching...😊

U have written the emotions very beautifully.

I love it so much.

continue soon...

thanks for pm.

Edited by Applef - 12 years ago

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Asad is being a jerk... Does he think the a mother could kill her own child... Can she stoop so low.. God.Its the mother who goes through the entire pain to give life to a baby... Its is not an easy task to carry a baby within your womb and then take the worlds biggest pain and give birth to a new life... she is a creator... And, he accuses her of a mistake she'll never ever think of committing... I really love the plot of this story... I know asad will come around soon.. and except his mistake but I don't want zoya to actually forgive him that easily.. The loss about which he is growling , she had the same loss.. In spite of being their and giving her the support he actually worsened the entire situation... I don't want him to be forgiven that easily .. That is what is in my mind after this...

Do continue soon, you are gem of a writer.. You write really well.

Dee