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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really nice ss... plz continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Oishi_

great start.. update soon.. but i have a feeling its a sad one :(

yes what you feel is some what true! but do read to know... its basically not a hate story but its just to portray that sometimes our relationships need time and understanding but if we chose to ignore that then it can lead to serious results...and of course what children mean to parents.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this was awesome
plz continue soon and pm me
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Originally posted by: AnjuRish

awww no pls thats terrible ...hope they help each other thru the pain

Dont get pissed😕... i know you guys cant stand Asya in pain... so cant i but read on to know what happens and how...😉
i dont think you would be disappointed IN THE END.😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kukuzgeet

Dont get pissed😕... i know you guys cant stand Asya in pain... so cant i but read on to know what happens and how...😉
i dont think you would be disappointed IN THE END.😛

okie dokie sweetie ..we will wait and watch .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow...Awesome start

Do Continue Soon

Thanks 4 PM

Thanks 4 Buddy Request too
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kuku 🤗 thanks buddy for a new SS 😆

WEll this one is sad 😭

make me smile with your super fast update kay? 🤗
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Kuku 🤗 thanks buddy for a new SS 😆


WEll this one is sad 😭

make me smile with your super fast update kay? 🤗

sure next update tom for sure😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was wow!!!!
sad coz i guess they loss the baby...right?😔
waiting for nxt update..PM if possible!!!😳
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Chapter 2

Asad snaps out of his memories. The memories which were very beautiful but still their aroma could not perfume his present. Everything at the moment was black and white, dull, boring, lifeless and uninteresting.

Asad slumps on the floor and drops his head in his hands. He did what he had never done, no even at the death of his mother, he cried.

"Why did you do this Zoya?"

"WhY?"

A voice in his head comes to life, his mother's voice.

"Its not her fault Asad."

"then whose it it? Hun?"

"No one's'.it was only Allah's will."

"no its all her fault, she did it deliberately."

"Why will she do so?"

"I don't know 'but its her fault only."

"You don't know the pain she is suffering from."

He made a scoffing sound.

"You think it hurts her more than it hurts me?"

"yes."

"I don believe that."

"Asad she is in a much more miserable condition than you are."

"I don't care ''not after what she did to me."

"she needs you Asad."

"But I don't need her ammi' I cant stand her anymore."

"You love her Asad."

"I don't."

"you are punishing her for no sin."

"and I will never forgive her."

"its wrong Asad. Don't do this. You will lose her. You don't want that."

He keeps silent. The voice also goes.

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The first rays of the sun make their way I the sunroom. Zoya was awake, she wasnt crying but anyone could tell from her face that she had lost all her body's water to the tears. She gets up but lacks energy, black and white circles whirl in front of her eyes. She takes the support of the wall to get to the kitchen to get some water.

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She was now in another roo. The room was painted blue,, it had a baby cot set in one corner, a couch to the left and countless stuff toys everywhere. Zoya slumps on the couch and gazes at everything in the room. A strong gush of wind from the open window gives life to the wind chimes in the room. The atmosphere resonates with the sound of the wind chimes.

Flashbacks:-

"What did the doctor say?" he asks anxiously.

"It's a baby boy." She replies merrily.

"Finally, now I can decide the colour of his room." He says with glittering eyes.

"So soon? Its only the fifth month."

"the room is one of the things in my list. There is so much to be done four months are just not enough."

Zoya smiles at his excitement.

He continues after pondering for a while,

"Now that it's a boy, I think blue will be the perfect colour. But I love almost all shades of blue, so you have to decide the shade, otherwise it will be very difficult for me."

"Yes boss, anything else?"

"Yes, take very good care of yourself and my baby too."

"Excuse me, he is not only your baby he is mine too."

"Really? I didn't know." He mocks.

She punches on his chest.

"aowwhhh! That really hurts" he acts.

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Asad and Zoya walk inside a huge toy shop. Asad put's every other toy in is trolly.

"Asad'yhy don't we buy the whole shop?" Zoya offers seeing him like every other toy.

"Exactly, what I feel like doing at the moment but you know the thing is the room anit that spacious, all this stuff wont fit there."

Zoya rolls her eyes. 'his excitement has no limits.' She thought to herself.

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Zoya sits in the lawn gazing at Asad with nothing but love in her eyes. He is busy in planting some new plants. After a while he walks towards her rubbing the mud away from his hands.

He slumps on the swing beside her sighing heavily.

"How many?" she asks.

"Fifteen."

"So many."

"they aren't many'.. these cute little baby plants will grow with him. I am sure he is gonna like them."

"that is if he inherits this crazy love for plants from you."

"Of course he will."

There is a pause.

"Asad you know what'. i just cant help thinking about him all the time." Zoya expresses.

"neither can i'' neither can I. thank you so much Zoya. You don't know what it means to me. I just cant thank God enough."

He bends forward to kiss her cheek and then gently places his hand on her bun.

"can you feel him?"

"all the time."

"is he naughty?"

"a lot."

"hmmm." He says smiling.

"Lets go inside."

"Sure."

They get up to go when Zoya stumbles over the edge of the swing and almost loses her balance but Asad supports her immediately.

"Careful Zoya!"

"Ouch!" she exclaims.

"Does it hurt? We should go to the doctor."

She straightens herself.

"No! I am fine. We don't need to."

"Sure?"

"Yeah sure."

He sighs heavily.

"How many times have I told you to be careful' but you pay me no heed."

"I didn't do it on purpose Asad." She snapped back annoyed.

"I know." He looked away.

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Asad and Zoya lie in their bed. Zoya rests her head on his chest and he caresses her hair tenderly.

"It's the sixth month and we haven't even decided the name yet." Asad says a little perplexed.

"Yeah because you select a name and then due to some stupid reason reject it after a while." She says emphatically.

"Abhi tak koi naam perfect nai laga."

"aur lage ga bhi nai."

"ab aisa bhi nai hai."

"Anyways I have a name in my mind."

"Acha 'kia?"

"Its 'Salik' and it means'..'a follower of a spiritual path'."

"Saalik" he repeats.

"Salik''yeah its good. I like it. Pakka done."

"Huh! I will have to wait for atleast a week to confirm it."

"Seriously I really like it"

And so began their daily ritual, talking about baby till late night. Planning their future and sharing all their dreams and desires.

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Zoya drifts back to the reality. Her eyes are heavy with sleep. Her body lacks energy. She grabs a stuff teddy bear lying on the couch and in no time dozes off. Sleeping like a baby cuddled in a mother's lap. She tightly clutches the bear.

What a blessing sleep is, it can at least take you away from your anxiety for some time.
Edited by kukuzgeet - 12 years ago

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