Asad-Zoya FF: Somewhere in Time - Last Chapter Pg 129 - Page 88

Originally posted by: sparikh

Excellent story...

-Sona

Originally posted by: mandarin26

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OMG! It ended!!! 😭 What am I supposed to do with my life now??? 😆

On a serious note though you're one of the best writers on this forum. And Somewhere in Time has been one of the very few FFs that I came across on the forum that had a well conceived, clear-cut story line and characters throughout. Credits to you ofcourse, your narration and portrayal of characters has been constant along the entire storyline. I've lost count of the number of times I've read this FF. I find it as captivating and interesting to read each time. 👍🏼

I am happy that everything is back to normal. Asad and Zoya back to their normal selves, fighting and loving each other unconditionally. I am happy that Zoya has accepted and faced the truth. I am happy that the Khan Khandaan is a happy family again. It was a fairytale ending altogether. They're happy and everyone's happy. It doesnt matter Zoya didn't regain her memory completely. She can always create new ones with her Mr. Khan. And awww!!! They have a daughter! I feel she must've developed her abbu's traits admiring her moms antics like that.

Special mention to Zoya's conversation with her late abbu at his grave. It was beautiful and touching. I want to say so many things about that but words just escape me. Your writing can easily strike a chord in anyone's heart.👏

Yay and I get to read Heartbeat warfare soon.😃

Originally posted by: snehalparab

awesome it was loved each and every part but I am sad though it came to an end I really didn't wanted to specially at this point when in serial there is hurricane arrived this small parts of joy keep me happy and thanks for the pm I am really gratefull to you

Originally posted by: zoyaaakhan

Amazing!! when i read the words LAST CHAPTER, i was like nooo... truely i just loved every part, every chapter.. lovely!! you write amazingly.. do start with a new story.. i would love to read your story...

Originally posted by: ap3h7u

This was so damn good👏...awsome work😊...but this is the end😭😭...loved it sooo veryyy much🤗...now quickly update "Heartbeat warfare"😃😃...I'm greedy I know😃...kya kare u write so well na🤗

Originally posted by: princeegoyal

loved it...

last chapter...oh noo

but i loved to the core...good things come to an end...

hope u write more...& pm me too

pari

Originally posted by: LyssaPie

That was amazing :D

Originally posted by: Kelly Evans

hey, I actually love this FF.

I am really sad that this is the last chapter. You have magic in your hands, that you write so well. I was in-griped.

Originally posted by: akaswan

It's was just awesome 🤗

Originally posted by: annanyaksgian

i really loved your story,sad it ends

very nice