Asad-Zoya FF: Somewhere in Time - Last Chapter Pg 129 - Page 87

Great story. Amazing ending :D

beautiful story nd loved d moments btween asad nd zoya... looking forward to heartbeat warfare

the end was really really beautiful.

Originally posted by: notagain

Res🤗

It is sad when a story or a book ends, and even more when it is one of your favorite. 😳

Such a beautiful journey, such lovely memories, old and new. And so it ends.

A new dawn, a new morning, and them together in a frame. Beautiful. I loved how you wrote the whole sequence, the tie, the almost kiss. 😳

The move into his room, that's AsYa for you. 😆

The phone call, I got the hint from previous note of yours, however I did not guess it would be this. Perfect. It, ties up this part completely. And he was preparing himself to go through another round of pain. Zoe's acceptance and that visit to her abbu is so heart felt.

And finally the broken pieces of her memory all come together, and the blanks will be filled by new ones and Asad will keep them glued and bonded together.

I enjoyed every word of this story, it is one of the best on QH. The simplicity, the genuine emotions, the extra in the ordinariness of it all, makes it so perfect Noe.👏👏👏

It was a pleasure to read this. In this world of high speed internet, fleeting emotions, faster is better, instant noodles (which I do enjoy sometimes) a constant and steady story is such a grounding read. Like a perfect cup of coffee on a lazy Sunday morning with blue skies. Your story is like that. One that wants to be read again and again. A comfort story one wants to come back to and knows it will be alright. 🤗

Now looking forward to your next one.

Originally posted by: Noe123

I am late with replying all the comments 😳.

A bigwala thank you 🤗 Always looked forward to read your feedback. Your words make things sound more beautiful. I am glad I have met people like you because of these stories.

p.s. instant noodles - I also enjoy them 😆

I am glad I found your stories on this forum, they are beautiful. 🤗

This one always reminds me of, Woh jo thodi si adhoori yaad baki hai, woh jo ruki si chah baki hai.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OHqJRf94xrc

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani

oh story khatam hogayi? AWww😆 hame pata b ni chala😉

Originally posted by: aashiqua

d end? I am sad..i lovd ur writng style and followd regularly..already started n d other story..

Originally posted by: Suppi_4_u

'Somewhere in time' One of the best stories on asya.
Keep writing many more such stories for ur readers

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Wow gr8 story going to miss this

Originally posted by: mysticlover

N it ended...
Whenever I read the end I feel an emptiness inside me... especially if it's my favorite story ending... knowing that I won't read about the life of the characters... it's like an estranged relationship for me... n it doesn't matter if it's a happy ending or not...
I'll miss this story...