Asad-Zoya FF: Somewhere in Time - Last Chapter Pg 129

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lover1998

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Posted: 12 years ago

#691

That was so sad. I hope everything is alright between them soon. I'm glad that she knows the truth now tho.

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akaswan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#692

Nice udapte please continue soon 😊

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webuser7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#693

An emotional update! Amazing! Very well written!

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madhvi4gurti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#694

gr8 job dr!!!

bt u seriously made me cry!...it was damn painful!!!😭

waiting for the next update!

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lasya13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#695

omg!!!!!

I din expect such a sad update...😭

zoya was hurt!!! poor girl!!!!😭

I think she should also know how much he loved her apart from hurtin her...😳

hmm.. hope she remembers evrythin now considerin zoya's logic (remind the person of accident n the person remember everythin)😆

but all in all that was an amazing update...i.e., the way u expressed their feelings...👏⭐️👏

(p.s: that was the longest speech mr. asad ahmed khan ever gave😆😆😆)

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Archana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#696

That was so brave of Asad... to put everything out in the open...
He was so honest n truthful to Zoe... he didn't hide anything... he told everything even if that made him a bad guy or portrayed how rude he was to her then... if anyone deserves to be forgiven then it is Asad...
I'm waiting for Zoya's reaction after a long night's sleep...

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snehasya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#697

bhgwan se jhagadkar jo mukkaddar khada kiya hamne

pyaar aur bharose ke siva kuch na chaha hamne

pyar to beinteha kiya par bharosa na kar ke mukkaddar ko hara diya tumne

he told her everything but he didn't said how he saved her each time by putting danger ti his life how he cared that the smile on her face is never faded how even in hate he showed love I wish her memorycomes back and she confronts him about how he said all bad things he did for her but not good things for which she fallen in love with him and married him

nice update thanks for pm

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Ankahee

@Ankahee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#698

Res 🤗

Edit: This was perfect. Thank you! You have done so well on this part of the plot, Asad opening up, his memory, his POV, how it happened, just the way it happened.

This is so much better than Zoe remembering. It's still how Asad views it. I hope Zoe realizes this part, I agree he got it just the way it is, yet there must be some processing on her part, which might be a tad bit different? I don't know why it is nagging me. Maybe she gave him second chances? maybe she gave him benefit of doubt just like she did when she entered her room to find him praying. At the end of it all she still married him.

Little bits, like Asad feeling disappointed when Zoe did not bring in his dinner. Him praying in her room, the bench (that bench is such a favorite spot of mine). All of it was beautiful.

Asad is something else altogether, this man is made of a different mold.

Looking forward to the next update. 🤗

Edited by notagain - 12 years ago