Asad-Zoya FF: Somewhere in Time - Last Chapter Pg 129

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CrazyBilli

@CrazyBilli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#671

Poor AsYa.. But Zoya deserved to know the truth!!!

continue soon!!! Thanx a lot for the PM.. :)

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Shruti

@akap

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Posted: 12 years ago

#672

Very nice update..very emotional..dont make them cry.

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Nim

@Rarepearl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#673

OmG, I never expected this to turn this way. I know Zoe's hurt & broken to hear the truth but what really hurt me was Asad's condition. poor thing is dying every moment in guilt & despair of not having trusted Zoe over dat good for nothing friend. I could feel his pain so well, u've done a wonderful job at showing his emotions.

Zoe's anger, hurt is all justified. she will with time that his bad side is nothing in compared to his good & soft side with which she has fallen in love with, not once but twice.

I hope Zoe doesn't shut everyone away.

plz cont soon.

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#674

emotional part amazing

plzzz continue soon

thanx for pm

do pm me for next part...

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Gudduluvs

@Gudduluvs

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#675

awesum wk...bt sad prt.i gues..zoya needs tym to accpt...bt she wil come to asad only...thnks...

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#676

Loved it... I hope she comes in terms with the truth soon and except it. Asad is a changed man. He regrets his actions and I guess if he is given a chance to rectify his mistakes he will do whatever it takes to make things right. And, he has been punished already. His love forgot him and that is somehow the biggest punishment for him to not be recognized by the girl he loved more then his life. He values her now, yeah he din't trust her judgement back then but now he know she has the maturity to take correct decision and she'll never take wrong paths and judgement. So, he should be forgiven and their should be a new beginning for them.

Zoya has gone through a lot and then all of a sudden she is subjected to the memories of her past life which she doesn't even remember has taken her to a shock and its quite difficult to tackle and except everything in once. I just hope she come around soon.

Continue soon.

Dee

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Nitya Suresh

@TheAutumnFizz

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#677

Poor asad and zoya... But I was hoping he himself would tell her everything... She deserved that... Loved the way he cried into her lap... You've written it sooo nicely I could actually imagine it happening...:-):-):-)
Update the next part soon... :-):-):-)

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Zaina

@CrazyForAshish

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#678

feel sorry for both. N emotional update.
Waiting for next part

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aashiqua

@aashiqua

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#679

plz update soon...i cant handle it ...am very upset aftr readng dis part...plz dnt make asya cry a lot again...

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-AppleOfMaEye-

@-AppleOfMaEye-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#680

ufff,,,
amazing amazing,...

loved th whole update...
i saw it coming,, if he hadnt told her,, then she may hav remembrd hrself,,, n that could lead to more pathetic crcumstances...
keeep it up...
thanx fah updating,,,

w8ing fah more stuff... update asap!!! :)

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