AsYa OS: Desires in the Hurricane| updt pt 2/pg.13

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IPKKND_Pyaar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Wow that was perfect...

They had their first kiss in the rain.. It was so romantic

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Jassieg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

AWESOME!!!!!!!

Loved it very much..wat an romantic ending..wish there was more..until they actually got married...I would have loved to see everyone's reaction..when asad would confess his love in front of everyone..

But still up until confession...was so amazing..

Gud job! ⭐️👏

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Bablylovely20

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Wow superb update :-) love their caringnes abt each other :-). Asad kissed zoya :-* wow <3. Finally the happy ending in a happy way :-)

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jeenia123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

It was just WOWWW. loved it. loved it to the core...

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webuser7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Very nice ending! These two are meant to be together.

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Nivriti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

O .. M .. G .. !

This, particular, OS, is, simply, fabulous, dude.

I actually liked the sound of it. Part two, and with a blast. But of course, Asad Miya, and his principles. Never manage to go inside the gutter!

But, my dear, the confession, of both the parties here, was freaking adorable. I really liked the way you handled it. And when Zoya realizes she did a mistake of not replying back and letting him go, the story turned all the more fabulous, if that is even possible.

Pink Umbrella, how Zoya Farooqi! 😆 But, Asad found her, she confessed, and the deadly kiss! Things would have gone further, but I said before, principles never manage to go inside the damn gutter! @#&

Awesome ending you gave it, and perhaps, I would rather request you, do think about an epilogue. 😉

Thanks a ton for dropping by the PM.

Love.