AsYa OS: Desires in the Hurricane| updt pt 2/pg.13

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

sadia

@Cup-Of-Chai

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Thank you all! I really really appreciate your comments seriously! 🤗 i will try to reply in a while. 😳

Quote

A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#102

WAH...wah...wah...kia baat hai...👏 that was beautifully written...Asad confessing...woh bhi with so many words...Zoya first saying No...and then realizing "Allah miya Did I just said NOto the man of my dreams?" and running after him in the rain...and all that was beautiful... hope now you won't stop writing after this...we need some more good writers...yaar I cant sleep at night if I dont read some of Asya Fiction...so thats why I am going to do whatever need to be done to make sure that there are some writers who continue showing us that Asya Magic through their imagination...how they see and feel Asya...and as you know now you are one of them...so we are waiting some Os,SS, FF from you too...😃 lol btw,Thanks for PM...😊

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Lavalina only yaarrrrrrrr

@lavalina

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

I really hope I get such a rain sequence like this in my real life one day when get my prince charming hehe

Awesome just loved it thKs for such a loving update 😊

muahhh <3

Edited by lavalina - 12 years ago

Quote

Enlightment

@Enlightment

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Sadia just read the update and you did a wonderful job. 👏.I am so touched by your thought towards the young readers.Really hats off to you. As I read through it the picture was coming into my mind through out and was very gripping. I wish it never ended. May be you should try to write a novel and print it. you should try doing it. Proud to have you as a buddy and member of this forum who can write so well .Now it's singing turn.I got to hear it 😛

Edited by damar - 12 years ago

Quote

Farhana

@risingsea101

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Aweee

How cute

That was the best part in the world

Just loved Asad

Adorable part

Quote

sadia

@Cup-Of-Chai

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: nupsie

I Lub You More Now...!!!❤️🤗

</strong>

I am soo happy that u kept it simple...!!😊

It was passionate...romantic...beautiful...all that I actually wanted to read

n finally Asad confessed...n Zoya too

I am so happy, coz this all wat I wanted to read...

I loved each n every bot of the update n u are a brilliant writer Sadia...continue writing n giving us more of such beautiful stories!!👏

Its an AWESOME OS!! n I will read it once again after going home...!!

Thank you so much Sadia 🤗🤗

<strong>

Thank You Nooputtar 🤗 seriously all that you said means a lot. And i had to update because you guys were threatening me if i didn't update it. 😆 i am glad that you liked it. 😳 i tried to make it more hot but then i thought maybe next OS if i write i might. And seriously thank you.

Originally posted by: risingsea101
Aweee
How cute
That was the best part in the world
Just loved Asad
Adorable part

Thank you! Glad you liked it. 😳

Edited by Cup-Of-Chai - 12 years ago

Quote

sadia

@Cup-Of-Chai

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: damar
OMG Sadia love it love it love it.I can't believe you are writing for the first time.you are a born writer see?. love the way you have narrated the story and linked one situation to another.Sorry couldn't come to Jaanu thread since I am busy today.But Sadia you have great talent.👏👏.Please keep writing.waiting for the next part.
<div></div>Awww thank you for dedicating for all ofus.you are a sweet heart 🤗.Hugs

Thank you Devika. 🤗 hahaha! Don't compliment so much. ☺️
Mujhe sharam ajatee hai. ☺️ 😆 and thank you!

Originally posted by: risingsea101
OOO🤗
Awesome OS
I just wanna hug you now
I love love loved it
Are you sure it's your first?
Continue it :)

Thank you! 🤗 and yes it's my first. 😳 😆

Originally posted by: pieryrose
OMG!!! That was so beautiful...i loved the OS❤️👏... hope you write another one soon.

you're awesome babe.. 😳

<img src="http://i.minus.com/itIwsVujvyNqb.gif" alt="" />

though you would write a very guttery one... atleas a kiss was there 😆

Hahahaha! Hummy Puttar you have to be 21+ to read the 50 shades version. 😆 btw thank you seriously! And snape is clapping for me? Wow! 😆 🤗

Originally posted by: ABBY92
That was such a movie like situation with Zoya going out in the hurricane to get Asad back and the end was beautiful !!

Glad you liked it, and thanks. 😳

Originally posted by: viya.mallik4eva
It was beautiful. Full of feelings and emotions. 😃 I love it
But its not xxx rated as i expected 😭 isme bhi Asad ko tehzeeb banana jaroori tha kya?? 😭

Hahahah! Thank you and Xxx version? Viya are you 18+? 😆 btw okay next time i would write a sizzling one if i wrote just for you. 😆 gutter mind VDC. 🤣

Originally posted by: s120
Sadia, what an awesome update🤗

Loved it. The way he apologised, the confession and the kiss was lovely.😳

God knows when we'll get a kiss in the serial,😆

But this was quite hot!😳Thank you! Keep writing! You write well👍🏼

Next write an 18 + story.😆

Thank You Shreya! 🤗 it means a lot. 😆 glad you liked it and in the serial we might get an almost kiss but not a proper kiss. 😆 and haan theek hai next time 18+ 😆 btw today we wrote an 18+ story on JaNu in JaaNu AT. 😆

Originally posted by: tnusredey
U shud write more BAS!!😆
</div><div>I jst loved da OS!!
I loved da confession! I cud jst imagine Asad-Zoya drenched kissing aww☺️.
Please I want more from u!

theek hai i will write more. 😆 i am glad you liked it Tanu. 🤗

Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan
So beautiful and romantic! I loved that Asad wanted to wait! What a gentleman!

Thank You, and yes thats how Asad's
Character is i think. 😆

Originally posted by: ilovebieber

ahmaizing!!! 👏<div></div>i loved it!!!!!👍🏼 it was soo nice yet simple!!! love it !!! i want more of ur oss!! they r soo nice!! keep up the good work sweetie!🤗

thank you so much glad you liked it.
😆

Originally posted by: Jassieg
AWESOME!!!!!!!

Loved it very much..wat an romantic ending..wish there was more..until they actually got married...I would have loved to see everyone's reaction..when asad would confess his love in front of everyone..

But still up until confession...was so amazing..

Gud job!⭐️👏

Do you think there should be a third chapter? 😆 i ended it because it was a one shot and i just wanted to write till the confession. And thank you glad you liked it. It means A lot.

Originally posted by: Bablylovely20
Wow superb update :-) love their caringnes abt each other :-). Asad kissed zoya :-* wow <3. Finally the happy ending in a happy way :-)

Yeah Filmy style first kiss in the rain. 😆 thank you.

Edited by Cup-Of-Chai - 12 years ago

Quote

sadia

@Cup-Of-Chai

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: Zara_92
I just have one word for this 'Beautiful' !! 👏

This was one of the best OS's I've ever read Sadia and the best part was it was actually 'Desires in the hurricane' ...

Zoya and Asad's mixed emotions and dilemma was so perfectly described by u ... That I just didn't want it to end ...I went in a complete mode of the OS and then I read 'The end' and I was like Sadia ki bacchi 😡 😆

And now my dear there is no way I'm lettin u get away from writing !!! 😛 now ul have to provide us wid OSs😃

This was really very beautiful and what I loved the most was I could actually imagine it happening right before my eyes

Super Amazing work Sadia <333

Thank you Zaraaa! 🤗 seriously it means a lot.
Hahaha! Acha if i write next time i will write a longer version. 😆 i didn't want it to be vulgar. I hope it wasn't? 😆 theek hai! I will write another OS very soon. Tum logo ne mujhe
Lat laga dee hai waise bhi. 😆 <3

Originally posted by: giee
For the 1st part

This was like WOWWW 😃

I mean I just loved it
she left his place 👏
And he came back to giver her back her earring and apologise
I loved how he hugged her before leaving 😳
She asked him to stay
Rainy romantic weather outside and two passionate and intense lovers inside *ahem ahem* ☺️
Okay so I am desperately waiting for the next part

For the 2nd part :

He kissed her..he kissed her..he kissed her
they confessed 😳

I love it whenever he pulls her
love lust worry passion everything in one update

I simply loved it

Thank you! I am glad you liked it. 😳 it means a lot. 😆 😆

Originally posted by: Naughtynatty
💔Res

*Edited*

I couldnt reserve on the same page🥱
But that doesnt take away the fact that you write awesomely well and its not just us do u see you had so many readers !! SO please you have write more now😆

Okay coming the OS❤️Wasnt that tooheart-warming!!
Pasta dinner😳( Just woke up Ia m hungry😆)
She asked about the eaaring and OMG he confessed (kamina is not confessing in the program😡)
Honestly I understand Zoya rejecting himbecause she has been through a lot because of him and she is seen him not trusting her so her behaviour is very acceptable.
But then Pyaar ke liye hum har haad se gujarjaayenge wali baat aa jaati hai 😳
She realises her love can overcome all this and she loves him too much to let go so she goes back to rectify her mistake (which isnt her mistake according to me)
Anyway stupid moron pagal Asad think oh lets for a walk in the hurricane agar Zoya ke flats gir jaate toh atleast saath mein to rehna tha lol
Well Then they did abh tumhi ho between the hurrican😆❤️(lol we wereexpecting18+ )
Just one suggestion i would have liked ZOya to say No and say we are not married because she is the one who has always been regarded the open minded one.
I am not in favour of it beforemarriage but I know a lot of western Indian girls who arent either!
SO I am really glad they didnt do it😆you kept it pak saaf😳

WIthout coffee and khana itna lik daala hope you dont mind my feedback Jaaneman🤗
Tali to banti hai boss😆

Nattu Jaaneman your comment cracked me up. 😆 seems like you really enjoyed it.
😆 you gave a whole analysis of the update. 😆 LMAO! Btw yeah even i agree that maybe Zoya should have said no too but she did agree. 😆

Me minding your feedback? 😆 i freakin loved it. 😆 itna lamba sa reply.
🤗

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
Wow

This is beautiful

Amazing

<img src="http://dl6.glitter-graphics.net/pub/2684/2684556p4pesmn1tp.gif" alt="" />

Thx for the pm

Is that Elmo? 😆 and thank you. Means a lot.

Edited by Cup-Of-Chai - 12 years ago

Quote

sadia

@Cup-Of-Chai

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing
O .. M .. G.. !

This, particular, OS, is, simply, fabulous, dude.

:)

I actually liked the sound of it. Part two, and with a blast. But of course, Asad Miya, and his principles. Never manage to go inside the gutter!</font>

</font>
But, my dear, the confession, of both the parties here, was freaking adorable. I really liked the way you handled it. And when Zoya realizesshe did a mistake of not replying back and letting him go, the story turned all the more fabulous, if that is even possible.</font>

PinkUmbrella, how Zoya Farooqi!😆But, Asad found her, she confessed, and the deadly kiss! Things would have gone further, but I said before, principles never manage to go inside the damn gutter! @#&</font>

Awesome ending you gave it, and perhaps, I would rather request you, do think about an epilogue.😉</font>

</font>
Thanks a ton for dropping by the PM.</font>
Love.</font>

Honestly, i really really loved your comment. 😳

And epilogue? I haven't thought about it but now that i think about it who knows i might try writing it. 😆 i am glad you liked it. It means a lot. And you're welcome! 😃

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal
WAH...wah...wah...kia baat hai...👏that was beautifully written...Asadconfessing...woh bhi with so many words...Zoya first saying No...and then realizing "Allah miya Did I just said NOto the man of my dreams?" and running after him in the rain...and all that was beautiful...hope now you won't stop writing after this...we need some more good writers...yaar I cant sleep at night if I dont read some of Asya Fiction...so thats why I am going to do whatever need to be done to make sure that there are some writers who continue showing us that Asya Magic through their imagination...how they see and feel Asya...and as you know now you are one of them...so we are waiting some Os,SS, FF from you too...😃lol btw,Thanks for PM...😊

Thank you for the lovely words! And yes yes i will try to write more. 😆 thank you seriously it means A Lot. 😳

Originally posted by: lavalina
I really hope I get such a rain sequence like this in my real life one day when get my prince charming hehe

Awesome just loved it thKs for such a loving update 😊

muahhh <3

Thank you so much and i hope you do. 😆 <3that would be just like movies.

Edited by Cup-Of-Chai - 12 years ago