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Archana

@mysticlover

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#571

We miss you n your story too!! :)

Now to the update... I loved the scene where Asad n Zoya yelled at each other n then Asad hugged her followed by his family... I'm a firm believer of the fact that intense situations bring about such intense emotions!!! It was so beautifully portrayed...

Zoya should tell Asad but on the right time... she shouldn't be late...

Zoya's slight indifference affects Asad so much... he can't stand her cold behaviour... n Zoya is worried that Asad would hate her if he knows about her father...

Diary?? Whose is it? Can't be Zoya's? May be her Aapi's?

Will wait for you to come back n update... :)

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Prazeena Bhattarai

@Aneezarp27

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#572

that was a lovely update,,,,txxx a tons...hope all the mystery gets solved and asya come closer...soon...very soon ...

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#573

awesome update!

hope all misunderstandings clear out soon...

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Siniya

@Azya

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#574

Awesome update dear... :-) was missing ur updates..

Anywayz soo happiee to see the pm...

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#575

I loved it...
well its okkk if u update a bit late...enjoy ramzan...ramzan mubarak...but will b waitin 4 ur update!!! 😊

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Mishti

@MayurnASYA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#576

you updated...😃

great update..

loved it...

bickering like a married couple ready to get divorced...😆

who is that special girl...?

will wait for the next part...

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#577

Res!

Yay! You're back! Ahh I loved this! Aww poor Zoya. I felt so bad for both of them. Zoya for her guilt and her humiliation, Asad for his rash shouting and guilt. And how he made sure she was ok. His apology was sweet.

I can't believe that was her father. I'm sure you must have mentioned this before, but I haven't read in a while haha so it probably slipped my mind. But did he do something to Asad too? (Again I apologize if this was already addressed. School is slowly burning off my grey matter 😆). But I really want Zoya to trust him, to tell him. They're hug after he yelled at her was so sweet. I wanted to cry.

Your story is so unique. Even though it's boiling down to a smiliar plot as the show (with Asad and Zoya falling in love, and her father doing something to harm Asad and his family, and his mother suffering) It's in it's own unique way. So happy you're back 😃

Aww and no worries hun. I could never forget this. Like I said, very unique and intriguing story. I'll always be curious as to what'll happen next 😳

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#578

where were you farah di ??
i'm really glad you updated !
lovely chapter !

asad is really getting frustrated with zoya's behaviour !
who's diary is that asad read ?
i have a lot of questions in my mind
i'll leave it to you to clear it up in the coming chapters !
totally loved the update !

update soon !
and ramadan mubarak dear !

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#579

Wow

An update after long

Missed it a lot

Awesome work

Glad Asad apologized

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

@Meself

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#580

Oh my lovely Farah...its so nice t finally hear from you! I really liked the update for it myriad of emotions. How do you get both Asad and Zoya to emote in ranges? Fantastic update and loving the story as usual! and Ramdaan Kareem! I know you you must be busy as a bee but take your sweet time and await the beautiful Eid! See you soon!