~{AsYa SS: Salaam-E-Ishq}~ LAST PART PG 65!!!

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Farhana

@risingsea101

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Billi 😆

Great update

Can't wait for the next part

Continue :)

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fee-fee

@fee-fee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

I absolutely loved this chapter! You wrote really well and Asad and Zoya! From what I read, I think the rest of the family might actually believe that they are engadged. Which means Asad and Zoya have just made themselves the next jumped targets. First Arnav, Khushi, Ayaan and Huimiera will jump them then the rest of the family as they were not told that Asad supposedly proposed to Zoya!

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-RM-

@-RM-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

As you are not updating it 😭

Even re-reading it is so much fun! 😆 😉

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aashiqua

@aashiqua

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Continue soon!!! Pretty please..
*batting my eyelashes*
Love you loads my darling!
You're the BEST!

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Applef

@Applef

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

OMG!!! she is here too...😡

but I really love zoya's guts over there..

and asya's moments were so romantic..😳

so the saari stuff was they other's plan?? wow!!!

update very soon..

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You can call me Afu ;)

@Asya6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Res! Just catching up...

Unres
I'M SORRY!
It just slipped out of my mind that I have resed a comment here. I made you wait sooo long.

I don't want YJHD updates anymore, you keep updating this one. I ❤️ it.
I loved the part when Zoya told Billi on her face that she's Asad Fianc.
Awww, Zoya put on henna for Asad. I just LOVE everything about this SS.
You are a great writer, so don't give up writing for ANYONE.

P.S: I'M HOME!
❤️Afu

Edited by Asya6 - 12 years ago

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

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Tanvi

@KulfiBai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

Ugh, can I just kill that BILLA?! 😡

But omg you describe their intimate moments SO WELL and I dunno it just makes me so happy I can't even

I LOVE THEM SO MUCH 😭 (of happiness)

Omg he wants to confess, yes yes yes NO OH NO SHE GOT CALLED! WHY DOES THIS ALWAYS HAPPEN?! Never mind, he'll confess soon enough, I know it 😃 And she'll confess too, hopefully!

I just love their love, I dunno what to say 😆

Edited by KulfiBai - 12 years ago

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#189

dedicated to me ❤️

wasn't expecting it

and i landed on 2nd too

yay

since you love pink... i'll comment in this colour only

I love the update

I am so much in love with your works now

So amazing

the way you write

superb

*hats off to you*

*standing applause for you*

Asad ke naam ki mehendi on Zoya's hands... wow

So love the cupid Khushi and Humeira

Tanveer ka katta... *dancing*

I loved the AsYa scene

Asad not wanting Zoya to wash her mehendi, the food feeding scene, jalebi scene, kiss and an almost confession by Asad

i know you'll get busy now but try giving an update once(or twice) a week of any of your works... An OS or TS or your updates

LUV YOU FARI

Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 12 years ago

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#190

OMG OMG OMG!!!

This was bloody brilliant! 👏

Zoya put mehendi for Asad! 😳 Asad fed Zoya! 😳

I was totally aww-ing throughout Fari!

Best Lines:

Asad leaned a bit closer, and gently feathered his lips over her soft ones, making her breath catch in her throat.

Asad moved his lips to her ear again, her face turning a darker red from the light pink it was before.

"You look gorgeous tonight," he whispered, losing all sense in his head, as his heart took control of him.

He ever-so-softly traced his lips across the side of her jaw, murmuring into her soft, flawless white skin, "You are. . .so . . .beautiful. . ."

Zoya closed her eyes again, sharply, her heart threatening to burst out of her chest. She breathed heavily.

I was grinning like an IDIOT and Blushing like a MORON! ☺️

And then, Khushi's comments!

"Wow, we barely even have to do anything! Asad and Zoya are already all lovey-dovey with each other!" Khushi squealed and fangirled to herself. "Since when is Asad so romantic? I HAVE to go tell Humie!" She made a mad dash out of there, not noticing Tanveer hiding in there, fuming to herself.