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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ilovebieber

lovely!!! plz pm me when u get the new part!!!!

n i want alil asya atleast in the nxt pt!


i will make sure that u get a nice ASYA part in the next update...
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this story is awesome

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amezing. Cn u plz PM me. Plz plz
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Very well written.Interesting plot as well. Keep it up and please update soon 👏
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love the concept and i enjoyed reading the first 2 chapters
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NICE update...
Loved AsYa'sfirst encounterat his office...
Waiting for next part...Continue soon...
Thnx for PM...
Mariam...
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Thanku all for ur appreciation as well as suggestions...I will be trying to improve myself with every write up!! Next part is in the next post
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superb story. loved it. do update soon.
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Hello Qhians! This is my 200th post...I m super duper happy...Hope my happiness develops a nice part 3!!!

Part 3: Kabhi socha na tha, aisa bhi hoga...

The click of the door knob announced her arrival.He turned around to check if his assumptions were right. And, he was awed, by her mysterious beauty, as she carried herself, pale and slender, gracefully and elegantly towards him, he checked her out.
She had dark hair, with these strikingly pale brown eyes, blood-red plump lips.Although her eyes were set too apart, and the nose was a bit big, she , was even with the flaws, one of the most beautiful woman he had ever seen.
His failed to get his eyes off her. Her slender neck, thin waist, irresistible curves, falling boobs and sexy butt drove him crazy. He so damn wanted to make her his own, possess her.
"Sir, I need your signatures on these papers", said Zoya, a little nervous as she could feel His intense gaze on her which made her blush and wonder as to what must be going on in His mind. Was he checking her out? She pushed aside these thoughts and left His cabin after taking his signatures.

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Though there was a lot of work to be completed on the desk and the situation demanded her to be on toes, she could not ignore the feelings cropping in her heart. She failed to help herself and continued thinking about him. His slender yet muscular body, a face which oozed hotness and showed how capable was "He" of taking care of his woman. His soft eyes, deep voice and dark hair with highlights made her heart flutter. He had the ultimate Greek-God looks which made him so damn desirable. Undoubtedly, he was the man she was attracted to. She wondered if he too felt the same about her. Was she on his mind all the time? Was she in love with him? Was he in love with her? Is it possible for a man-woman to fall in love in such a short span?
These questions disturbed her mind when she finally decided to push them aside and concentrate on work.

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"Bhaijaan, Can I please to go the prom night. I promise I will be back by 8:00. " pleaded Najma. She so damn wanted to go there and enjoy with her friends. She wanted to be there for Ayaan who was also her friend but her heart knew that she was slowly falling for him.
"Ok, I don't have any problem with you going over there but you have to keep your promise and take care of yourself", said Asad after thinking over for what seemed like ages.
And, he wanted to say more but he could already see Najma going wild. She thanked him till one her nerves burst, gave a hug and ran to Dilshaad's for suggestions for her dress.
Asad was happy to see her sister like this and continued to work.

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"Didi, lag raha huin na main bilkul Salman! Na jane kitni ladkiyan apne dil se haath dho baithengi", announced Ayaan while trying out his suit.
Zoya saw him and smiled. She herself was shocked to see her little brother looking strikingly handsome in this classic formal attire.
"Ayaan, tumhe kitni baar kaha hai ki ladkiyon ke bare mein tumhari yeh soch mujhe bilkul pasand nahin."
"Maaf kardo didi, aur yeh to batao ki kaisa lag raha huin?", said ayaan holding both his ears in a I-m-sorry gesture.
"Bahut ache lag rahe ho tum. Salman se bhi jyada!''
Ayaan kissed her sister and hugged her thanking for everything she had done for him.
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She stood on top of the desk to grab the files she had to work on. She wanted to find them before Asad comes to his cabin and return to work in her own. As she tried to pull out the file from the mess, she moved back and lost her balance. Waiting for the ground to hit her, she closed her eyes tight but could not feel the pain for a long time instead she strong arms, one around her back and the other below her knees, as if she was hanging loosely mid-air. Wondering as to why things were not natural, she opened her eyes slowly to see soft ones staring back at her with love and care.

She involuntarily put her hands around his neck, collapsing in his manly scent, not wanting to separate him from her.
He gently placed her on the ground sensing how close they were, though he knew she wouldn't mind clinging onto him forever.
"Are you fine, Zoya?"
She nodded slightly, looked into his eyes assuring him that she was fine.
Asad understood that they have started understanding each other through their eyes.
He helped her with the files and she took them from him sharing another Mitwa moment in slow-motion.

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It was 8:00 and Najma had not returned home yet. A tensed Dilshaad called up Asad. Asad rushed to her college and enquired all her friends about her but nobody knew where she was.
He ran through the corridors towards the empty rooms, every corner of that building screaming his little sister's name, expecting a response but to his disappointment there was none.
He was about to call the police when he noticed a shiny, silvery thing fallen on the ground. He recognized it instantly and looked in the direction from where it came. He opened the door and what he saw in front of him was enough to boil his blood. His eyes turned red and he picked him up with all the power he had and thrashed him back to the ground.
He decided he would make sure that this man has one of the worst deaths this world has ever witnessed.

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No precap!



Edited by cutysmiley - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thnku...i have sent u a buddy request, plz accept it

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