AsYa fun-fic:From slap to kiss || Part-6 pg-40 || - Page 8

Originally posted by: QWEERRTTYYUUIIO

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When so many girls suddenly turn their gaze in a particular direction and each one of them goes a shade redder in their face, you know it's either SRK or AAK."
haaaha😆😆 right


i love this story saying this wuld be understatement😳

i loveee to the most😃
frm characterization to choice😊
of character. the convo
everything seems so fit in the place
i also liked ur previous dil i toh
but this something i adore to heights
just faboulas👏

Originally posted by: janestone6

OMG I'm already in love with Immy.
This story is going to be very interesting. I love the update though we got Zoya in the end. But what an entry <3

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

wat a first meeting ...

immy got poor AAK slapped...

shaheen i hope becomes a catalyst in the story ...

pls dnt make her negative ...grey is ok

Originally posted by: yashasvi_88

awesome update... continue soon

Originally posted by: ilovebieber

dude!!! 😲

ur story is Epic!!!!!! 👏i loved it!! im a big fan of urz now!!😳 plz pm me when u do the nxt part!!! ugh the dialogues were amaizin n i love immy! ⭐️ the story is really different!! n i really want the nxt part! plz continue soon!

Originally posted by: princessradhika

interesting dear👍🏼..nice start..loved asad & immy's phone conversation, it was so funny, immy calling herself as mohini😆..something definately embarassing from asad's past for sure😆..do mention it in the upcoming updates..it was so much fun reding the whole part...friends bickering, leg- pulling are the the best memories one can have in whole life..😃..BUT WHAT WAS THAT AT THE END????😲..haww, omg..i am literally screaming..why did zoya slapped asad though thinking of him as imtiaaz rehmaan..poor asad..but the main question is still the same, immy doesn't look like a person who would hurt someone deliberately, then why??..😕.but oh my!!! he pointed towards asad and phatak!!..badi zor ki padi humare asad miya ko...now it would be more exciting to see how thw story progress, my mind is still stuck at the end.."Dobara aisi harkat karne se pehle ye naam yaad kar lena, Zoya, Zoya Farooqie"..WAH!👏👏 WHAT A STARTING..dil khush kar ditta...😛

enough of my nonsence..do update soon..will wait and thax for the pm and not to forget gifting us this dhamakedar piece of writing...