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Posted: 12 years ago
LOL the prince/princess and dragon story...d bst part of the chapter..

And Asad Zoya confession was so sso sos so guddd...

So Asad isx resigning aas well...

that's jus superrrbbb...

Now update soon..plezzz

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Posted: 12 years ago
I loved it.. That was the best confession. I always wanted mangalpuri confession and you gave me that .. A-M-A-Z-I-N-G.

Dee
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved it...
little zoya is so adorable
asya moments are cute and romantic...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey tis is superb...amazing...luv it...
beautifully written...
luv the way arnav care for khushi is soo cute...
totally luv the princess, prince n dragon play between khushi zoya n rehan it is totally superb n soo cute...
asad bash up akram n save zoya...
yippie asad n zoya confused their love to each other...
totally addicted to tis ff...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
Posted: 12 years ago

Omg, I loved the little stories of Khushi, Zoe, and Rehaan! 😛 How cute! ❤️ Zoe pretending to be a boy. Of course. 😆

Anyways, omg yayyy! 😃 Asad and Zoe FINALLY confessed their feelings! 🥳 God, it took foreverrr! 😆
Khushi and Arnav were so sweet, how Arnav was comforting her. 😳
I loved the Asad-saving-Zoe part! 😳 I could just picture him coming in, with his shades and everything...
Anyways, can't wait for next update, so continue soon! 😉
-Fari 😳 ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: astonm

Anwar made a choking sound, his hands tried to move Asad's hand from his neck.


You might want to change that to Akram, otherwise Zeenat aapi will come chasing you 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsm update.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!!!! Thatw as sooo perfect!!!👏
The last line by Asad...hayeee...i fainted!☺️❤️
That was lovely dr...
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Posted: 12 years ago
It took me a lot of time to catch up with the pending updates...
N they're all fantastic!!
Thankfully, I got to read everything together n that means less heart break n pain!!
Khushi confessed her love to Arnav... n Asad-Zoya confessed to each other!! I mean they're simply the best!!
I was cracking up completely while reading the drunken Zoya scenes!! Since now I'm in a hostel my wing mates are probably thinking I'd gone mad as I was laughing like a maniac n I haven't got a roommate yet!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Anjali
first of all i'm extremely sorry for replying so late on your updates
but a lot has been happening lately,
and i just honestly didn't have the time to read any of this until today
i'd bore you to death with all the stuff that's been happening so i'll not give excuses and just say sorry,,,... sorry...lol

right so now that i've apologized, i'll have you know that i just caught up on the last four chapters
and i think you're an absolute genius ,amazing writer
like seriously, where does all that talent come from??????????????

so chapter 21,
you totally cracked me up
i laughed so hard, my stomach hurt
loved the planning done by the girls
they're absolute geniuses
loved the idea and messing up their faces and the sleeping pills in the milkshakes helped execute their plan perfectly i must say
great job

loved Khushi's concern for Arnav even when she was playing a prank on him
and she saved the situation nicely when Aarav appeared

and i felt really bad about Zoya crying over a sleeping Asad about having to leave😭
and her i love you went unheard too
she really didn't deserve so much pain😭😭

and the reactions from the boys????????
totally priceless
reminded me of when my cousin and i did that to our brothers', dads and uncles
was totally worth it
i'd have so loved to see those pictures
if they existed of course...😆
and the adults were clearly entertained as well
even Aarti aunty cracked a smile😊

and Asad and Arnav do know their lady loves well to figure out their hands in the prank
i'm impressed😊

all the teasing was nice
but the arrival of Aapi and jiju sure put a damper on things

loved Aapi's enthusiasm at seeing the girls
but man did i feel bad for them when i read their reactions to the news of them leaving early
and for Zoya more then Khushi
Zoya seemed completely broken😭😭😭

her insistence on telling Asad about her departure was nice
loved that she cares so much
and a teary goodbye from families like the Raizadas' and the Khans' was expected

and Arshi's determination to get their friends together was commendable
loved how concerned they are

and i swear i felt like kicking Asad when he let Zoya leave😡😡
he made her go through so much pain, not that he didn't go through it himself but he knew how insecure Zoya was about their relationship😡😡
and i may or may not have been hurling abuses at my computer while reading that part
the man infuriated me sooo much😡😡😡

Arshi's separation didn't feel like one at all though
Arnav promising to be with Khushi again so soon was sweet😳
and adding him dragging Asad along to meet Zoya was even better😉😆

and you know i thought chapter 23 would be full of sadness
but man was it entertaining😃😃

loved that Khushi thought to call Asad and that he reassured her and then jumped straight into action
he was clearly a man on a mission
Arnav's understanding Asad's insecurities just by the look on this face just reiterated the strong bond they share

and what;s this inner Khushi's back??????????😲
i sure missed her
where was she with all her great advice when Zoya was leaving?????😡

and wwwaaawww
Zoya's quite feisty when she wants to be
like seriously
that's some tongue she's got
great for throwing abuses i say😆😆

loved that Zoya never lost hope of Asad coming to her rescue
but by far the thing that stole the update of chapter 23 was the last line
you're a genius
my first reaction when i read that line????
complete and utter euphoria😃

i was like ooohhh that Akram dude is so dead
he should have known better than to lay a hand on Asad's Zoya
yep the thought crossed my mind

and on to chapter 24
before i get into how awesome Asad beating the crap out of Akram was

i'd like to tell you that Asad's last statement was just too cute
i can't even describe how cute i thought it was
i was awwwing away for like ten minutes after i read that

ok so everything else in the update,
no offence but it was kinda mediocre after that last line
but Asad almost killing Akram, while expected, was also a shocker
he'll hurt for a long time, that's for sure...😆

Arnav comforting Khushi was cute
him cheering her up was nice
and wow the guy sure needs some training in praying
i'm sure Khushi'll take care of that nicely though😆😆

and they actually kidnapped...sorry dog napped their neighbor's dog??????????????🤣
these girls i tell you😆😆

and Asya's confession was weird...but highly loved
i was like YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
where's the celebration??????? they finally confessed🤣

a very tender exchange that i read multiple times
and i see Mr.Khan is as emotionally challenged as ever, even when she's a secret agent😆😆

and then we get back to the cuteness that is Asad Ahmed Khan's words

loved that, my favorite part of the update
totally dream worthy

you should become a professional author,
i'd buy your books any day

ok so i think that's all
sorry for taking so much of your time with this
continue soon and thanks for the PM's😊😊
















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