ASYA OS: Mujhe Haq Hai

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Seeing Zoya's scars and all I came up with an OS
Here goes nothing ...

OS: Mujhe Haq Hai

Asad was furious at Zoya for not wearing the sleeveless clothes he gifted her to wear. Instead she came wearing one of her other suits. She still looked beautiful but it hurt Asad that she didn't wear it.

Zoya on the other hand, how can she tell Mr Khan that she doesn't like wearing sleeveless clothes for a reason close to her. She has to go speak to him.

Zoya knocked on the door to his room. Yet he didn't answer.
'Mr Khan, Mr Khan darwaza khol please'
Asad could hear Zoya calling him but he couldn't see her now. He always wanted to see her in his gift yet his dream was broken.

Zoya decided to barge in and when she did she locked the door behind her.

'Miss Farooqui, ab yahan kya kar rahi hai?' Asad didn't even look at her. He just stopd there with his back turned to her.

'Mr Khan, I know ke tujhe bahot bura lag raha hai ke main kyon nahi pehna aapki gift par iss liye ek reason hai jo...'

Asad was getting angry at this point
'Miss Farooqui you have a reason for everything! Pehle jo maine sari di tune suit banaya usko, aur phir jab uss skirt lakar aayi thi woh bhi tera fault nahin tha! When is it your fault Miss Farooqui?!'

With that he turned away and saw Zoya had tears in her eyes. Zoya was shocked! He didn't even give her a chance to speak. He kept looking at her. His eyes changed from anger to teary.

Zoya unlocked the door and walked out. She ran to her room and locked the door crying. If only he knew why then he wouldn't even be so mean. He won't listen to her so how will she tell him? There was only one way for him to listen ...

Asad just lied back on his chair and closed his eyes. He shouldn't have said that to her. Those weren't her fault. He knew that but in anger he spoke too much.

Just then Zoya barged back in the room in anger and still was crying.
She was wearing his gifted suit. But what he saw shocked him.

'Yeh lo, you finally saw me in it. Happy? Aap nahi suna chahte the mujhko so I had show you... Maine iss liye nahi pehna'
Guilt ran through Asad's body. Those scars how did they happen? Her right arm was burnt and the scars were still there.

Asad wanted to just rewind the time so he had listened to her. Asad walked slowly towards Zoya.
'Please Mr Khan, aage mat aana! Reason yeh hai jo maine suit nahi pehna ... Kya meri bhi yeh galti thi?
Zoya couldn't stop crying. She had never spoken to anyone or shown anyone except for Aapi and Jiju her scars. Yet here she was showing it to her pyaar.

Asad was shocked to hear those words. How can that be her fault? She is not to blame in any of this.

'Kya meri galti thi ke yeh aag ki wajeh se yeh nishaan hai? Kya meri galti thi ke main baar baar tumse koshish ki baat karne ki about this par tum tum nahi suna chahthe the? Tum pehle itne bol rahe the ab khamosh kyon? Kaho na? KAHO KE YEH MERI GALTI THI! KAHO KAHO MR KHAN!

Zoya broke down while Asad stood there speechless with tears in his eyes. Asad stared at her scar and finally it dawned him ... She thinks this all happened for a reason to her. He didn't realise that he was staring for long when Zoya covered it up with her dupatta.

Zoya was about to leave when Asad came from behind and grabbed her arm. He turned her around and looked into her eyes. Tears couldn't stop coming down from her eyes. Asad wiped away her tears.

'I'm really sorry Zoya I never think before I speak. Maine jo kuch kaha tha I didn't mean it. Aur jo tumne kaha aise mat sochna. Tum bachi thi yeh sab teri galti nahi hai. I can't imagine what you must've went through. I am soo sorry. Maaf karde please. Kash jo tere dil mein sara gham hai woh mujhe hote hai. I have made you cry soo much. Iss baar ke main teri aankhon mein paani nahi dedungi'

Zoya just hugged Asad and cried her eyes out. Both stood there crying for ages in each others arms.
'I love you Asad... Iss liye I wanted to tell you all...
'Ssh Zoya chup meri galti thi I love you too Zoya... I'm soo sorry.

Both didn't realise they had confessed their love for one another.
Both wiped away their tears and Asad grabbed Zoya's dupatta. He started to slowly move it so he could see her scar fully when Zoya stopped him.

BG- Mujhe Haq Hai

'Please Mr Khan...'
Zoya closed her eyes as she didn't want him to see it closely.
Asad had to see it. He had to see the reason of all her pain and the extent of what that has done to her
'Zoya... Haath neeche kardo... Main dekhna chahta hoon'

Mujhe Haq Hai
Tujhko jee bhar ke main dekhoon
Mujhe Haq Hai
Bas yuhi dekh tha jaye
Mujhe Haq Hai

Asad slowly pulled the dupatta down and saw the scar fully. How does she be so happy and lively when deep down she feels pain? Asad lifted her arm and slowly kissed the scar. Tears fell from Zoya's eyes once more.

Piya o piyaaa
Piya piya bole mera jiyaa
Tumhe Haq Hai
Tumhe Haq Hai
Tumhe Haq hai

Asad lifted Zoya in his arms and took her to her room. While putting her in bed he realised Zoya had fell asleep and her face had tear stains and was red.
He was about to leave when Zoya spoke from her sleep
'Please Mr Khan... Mat jao'
Zoya grabbed Asad hand and he held her and laid with her till she was asleep. While Zoya was asleep Asad kept looking at her. He held her arm ... The one with all the scars on. He held it and before he knew it he fell asleep and both for the first time in ages fell asleep not feeling pain but happiness that from this day forward both will live their lives together in happiness and make new memories rather than reminisce old ones.


Hope you all Liked it :)
Havent proofread yet as no time but hope You loved it all

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CrazyForAshish thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice OS dear.. 😳
even after watching the segments i wanted to read this type of OS.. well done dear... it really touched me... 👏
Edited by zan101 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh my wow Hally
Tune perfect se bhi zyada perfect likha
Its absolutely awesome!! 👏 👏
I loved the way you put the song in the background!
Only one problem now I want this in episode agar yeh nehi mila toh... 😭 😆
Really Hally its outstanding 👏
Do continue 😳
Edited by Nisbahx - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow yaar amazing!!! loved it!!
Awesome Work 👏 👏
Edited by delena_lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wonderfully Written.. Loved It 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hally, this is Amazing!
Beautiful work!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was really heart touching😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was so sweet
the song went really well with it
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It touched my heart ...u wrote so beautifully ...amazing dear ...the same song I want to play inserial ...
Love you for this os dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice OS Hally
It was awesome
I loved it
Great job :)

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