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Chapter 1: Hatred

Islam teaches tolerance, not hatred; universal brotherhood, not enmity; peace, and not violence.- Pervez Musharraf

Tanveer. The so-called Tannu of Asad. Or in her words, Tannu of Jammy. Who would've thought a shy and calm girl would have such a heart of Satan. She really was Shaitaan. She was a woman of a past; a dirty past. She suffered alot through life and as they say your past impacts your present and future.

She owned a designer clothe company and was pregnant. Pregnant of Imran's child. Because of this pregnancy she killed her own eye, by using a easy thing; a pencil. She came back into Asad's life as his shy and cute bestfriend, who used to come to his house for Dilshad's special kheer. Asad still believed she was that innocent.

She was evil in her own little ways. She wore a hijab, just for show off, trying show that she really respected Islam; but really she disgraced Islam. But who would've thought she had reasons for her doings.

oOo

Asad was very happy. Finally he was going to marry Zoya. His Miss Farooqi. He had completely forgotten her mistakes and was ready to give this relationship a chance. A chance to change the meaning of marriage and love. Talking about love, he still hadn't confessed his feelings.

oOo

Zoya Farooqi was woman with a heart of pure gold. She was a classic beauty and had own way to present herself infront of the whole world. She was modern yet traditional, but in love. Love with her Akdu Ahmed Khan. She loved him so much. She just wanted him to confess his feelings.

oOo

The Khan family had dinner and were ready to retire to their rooms for a good night sleep.

The Nikah was in one day and still there were many preparations left.

Dilshad, Najma, Tanveer went to their rooms for prayers and then were going to hit the sack.

Asad and Zoya also went respectively to their rooms for their prayers; praying for one thing, to have the strength to confess their pure love.

"Ya Allah, please give me the strength to confess to Mr. Khan. He means the world to me. He still hasn't confessed but maybe he wants me to confess first? I just don't know, but please give us, both the happiness of the world, and please make this marriage work. Not only for me, but for both of us." Zoya whispered in her dua.

"Allah talah please give me strength to confess to Ms. Farooqi, I mean Zoya. I love her a lot and I just hope our nikaah happens without any difficulty. I just hope everything goes well and ends well," Asad whispered in his dua.

oOo

It was the day of the nikaah and everyone was happy. Except for Tanveer. She hated all the functions, all the rasms, and especially Zoya. She just wanted to get rid off Zoya. But how? By this Tanveer left the living room and went to her room.

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"Najma, please check if everything is in its place.." Dilshad said while arranging for the nikaah.

" Yes, Ammi and I just checked on Zoya and she came back from the parlor about 20 minutes ago..." Najma informed.

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Flashback

" Yes Rabbert...okay so you got the bank statements and everything?" Zoya asked.

" Yes Mona, I got everything and I still can't believe Imran miya would do this!" Ayaan said angrily.

"Ayaan, please control your angry, your bhaijaan will sort out everything, when he will get to know Tannu's real identity and he won't leave Imran for being a jerk to Tannu, you don't worry," Zoya assured Ayaan.

Ayaan hung up and Zoya went back to thinking. She was quite shocked on how Tanveer was carrying Nikhat's ex-fiance's baby. What a small world! But she still needed to show Tanveer's real identity. But how? Will Mr. Khan believe her? Or will he take Tanveer's side? She realized that she would find out after she dropped the bomb on Mr. Khan and her in-laws.

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Present:

"Open the door! Please open the door! Asad! Phuphi! Najma! Tan-veer! Anyone?!" Zoya yelled on top of her lungs.

Yes. Zoya was locked into the storage room of the Khan house. The Nikaah was taking place in the Bhopal Masjid and she was locked. Probably everyone left by now. Even Asad.

Maybe this was the end for her. As they say history repeats itself.

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Flashback:

"Baklow math Raziya Bi. Zoya will leave this world forever. You don't worry, its time for her to pay for her sins. You don't worry, they won't even find her in one piece! She'll be burnt toast head to toe! Allah hafiz!" Tanveer hung up.

"Zoya, who do you think you are? You have no right to take away my right! Jammy sirf mera hai! Sirf mera!Zoya tum to gaye!" Tanveer said her so-called horrific monologue.

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"Najma, where is Zoya? And Zeenat?" Dilshad asked worriedly.

"I don't know Ammi Aapi and Zoya are going to come together you don't worry they might be on their way but Aapi had said she needed to take out money from the bank to give naiks." Najma said at the last minute.

"Okay, try calling her..I'll try calling Zoya.." Asad cut in between.


Read my post on Page 7 on PMs and more information. Thank You.

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