AsYa OS: An Ocean Of Regret

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Aparichit

@Phenyl

Sparkler

+ 15

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Oh m gee ur on a writing spree today Farii..So many updates on one day..This one was sad with a beautiful ending.I really want to see this in the show.I dont want Zoya to suffer but seriously he has to realise that his best friend is a wicked cat.That Tanveer part cracked me up especially where she says that Zoya has more lives than a cat 🤣 .The part 2 where Asad was feeling guilty was beautifully written.You need to give this idea to the cv's.Keep the os's coming.The more,the better.🤗

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

that tanveer😡 but she's intelligent- she knew it would kill zoya if asad is hurt

the pain of asad- so well written👏

i think show will be going down this path too😕

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rithika2012

@rithika2012

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

that was an awesome os.. and i loved that u posted all of them at a time..

it was a real treat to read this os..

and finally aksu ahmed khan said those three magical words to his love zoya and that too without stammering or stopping at woh actually...

i think we will be able to see such a scene in the show and i think asad will confess to zoya on the hospital bed just like in the os..

pls keep writing such os and i loved it simply...

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ritu

@janu1610

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

I really want this to happen. I want his regret his remorse his apology
Very well written.

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aashiqua

@aashiqua

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

its great...realy thnkful for ur treat with wonderfl os...dey helped to reduce d boredom of weekend

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Ani

@DesiiiiGirllll

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

OMG😳
This was jst so perfect👏
U took us all on an emotional ride 😊
N yea the thing that matters the most it has a happyy ending❤️

hpe smethin lyk dis hppns in the shw😆
1 word: it was jst out of the world🤗

Edited by aniiee - 12 years ago

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

This should happen in the show!

Realizing your love for somebody and to find that they love you back makes you the happiest person alive, but it also makes you the most weakest as you can't survive without that person. Asad Ahmed Khan had learnt this the hard way and he promised to not let any harm come Zoya's way for as long as he lived...

BRILLIANT