Shooting Stars: Zoya's day out Pg:25 OS:4 (1/1) - Page 15

Originally posted by: Sanaa629

Hahaha.. Fr a moment you actually had me a bit worried.. Was something missing in my last OS that I never noticed?? Or was the idea too artificial and used many times before??

Thank you for making me smile after this brilliant comment. And regarding the twist.. I knew people would be expecting one.. So I purposely didn't put it. My OSs would become too predictable.. Lol.. So see..this is a twist in itself ;)

Originally posted by: salmeh.

Hey Sanaa:-)i m inactive for a while so couldnt read it. Will read em wem i m free😊

Originally posted by: -Devanshi-

IMPOTENT?!!!

Bahahahahahahahaha...🤣

Oh Zoya, how I wish I could just go there and tell her that Asad is not impotent. And I don't even need him to prove it😆. Months of fangirling cannot go waste. Bas. The spirit of fangirl in me has never been so confident. 😉

I so love this theme of the two parties talking about something completely different till one of them finally confesses what they are talking about, leaving the other party stumped. And then later, laughing like Dilshad and Najma. I could very well be on the scene. It was so easy to imagine it all. The best was how you worked with the expressions. Everytime, you have used a different way of expressing how Zoya blushed and I loved it!

Another thing that I loved was how they get so easily lost in each other. Asad being romantic in the presence of his mother and sister seems so impossible but I could totally imagine the him having that conflict before returning that hug😳. I even played Mitwa in my head for them😆

Oh and Najma can be naughty with innuendoes when she wants to! I really wish they would show more of her.

All in all, as you can judge by my comment, I LOVED your OS!

Originally posted by: love_kash

missing your stories.can i expect an os anytime soon??