AN ASYA TS !! THE TRUTH IS REVEALED updted pg 10 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Great update.
Post one more part plzzz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
That was AMAZING TS..
Loved it alot..
COntinue with ASAD's confession..
Thnx for PM..
Mariam...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
HEY EVERYONE .. LAST PART IS HERE .. NOT MY GREATEST WORK BUT HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE IT ... MY MOOD IS A BIT OFF BCOZ OF ALL THE BASHING ON THE FORUM AND I HAVENT BEEN FEELING VERY PLEASED SO MY WRITING HAS SUFFERED A BIT .. BUT ANYWAY HOPE YOU ENJOY THE LAST PART AND PLEASE COMMENT AND LIKE AND LET ME KNOW WHAT ARE YOUR THOUGHTS ON THIS LAST PART ?

... part 3

zoya was cleared to return home the nxt day by the doctor ... he told her 2 have rest as the day after was her nikaah and she needed to rest for that ...

back home everyone was getting all the preparations done for the nikaah .. zoya was in her room getting her mehendi done and asad was in his room pacing up and down thinking of a way to tell zoya he loves her ...

asad just 3 words ,, why are you taking so long to tell her ...im a man .. let me go and tell her ..

asad, dilshaad called as asad was on his way to zoyas room ..

ammi not now .. he said fixing his collor .. i have a very important thing to do..

but asad .. why do you wanna do work today .. 2morrow is your nikaah .. tell prasad do the work for you ..

ammi .. please .. this important work has to do with zoya .. and i have to do it now ..

oh zoyaaa .. dilshaad laughed and kissed her sons forehead .. it is about time you completed this .. go tell her ...

zoya was in her room waiting for her mehendi to dry ..a strand of hair was troubling her eye and she couldnt move it .. she was about to move it with her hand ,.. when asad stopped her from spoiling her mehendi ..and slowly moved it himself ..and kept his hand there caressing her face .. and he asked her .. how are you feeling zoya ?

zoya quickly moved away , turned away and said .. im fine mr khan ..

asad was taken aback with her formality .. he thought that she was ok with him now ..

zoya are you ok ? is everything fine ?

zoya turned and started ... no mr khan ..no.. everthing is not fine ..and im not ok .. tears brimming at her eyes ...

i cant lie anymore .. how long can we both lie to those peaople we love ... this fake nikaah is going to ruin everyones lives mr khan ... mr khan what are we going to do ? we cant go through with this ...

asad was shocked to his core .. zoya didnt want to marry him !! ..

so you dont want this nikaah .. this is all fake ..

yes mr khan .. you yourslf said its all fake .. but if you still want to mr khan .. she looked at him hoping he would tell her he wants to marry her .. do yo mr khan .. do you really want this nikaah to happen ..and they both took 1 step closer to each another ..

asad started .. zoya i ..

bhaijaan !! you were not allowed to see zoya anymore .. the next time you see her will be tomorrow .. go away now ... najma barged in and pushed asad out the door ..

come zoya ,, today you will stay with your aapi and jiju at the hotel .. cmon they are waiting outside for you ..

dont worry bhaijaan .. tomorrow zoya will be yous forever and she left pulling zoya who turned and met asads eyes .. he nodded to her signalling .. dont worry everything will be ok and she understood ...

that night asad asad went to sleep making a decision to tell zoya the truth before they marry !!!!

next day the time for the nikaah had come .. asad and zoya were seated and a cloth separated them ... and the moulana asked ,, asad ahmed khan .. kya aap yeh nikaah zoya farooqi qubool hai ...

and asad said ..

nothing .. he was silent ..the moulana asked again .. and again silence .. and asad stood up ...

zoya saw asad standing and she started panicking and was hurt .. how can mr khan do this .. he is the one running away .. how can he run aw.. and she was snapped out her thoughts when a hand pulled her .. she knew it hwas his hand and he pulled her through the crowd and into the garden and closed the door behind them ...

zoya was out of breath and she yelled

allah miya whats wrong with you mr khan .. you are running away .. what will people say .. and why did you bring me .. then her eyes went wide and she yelled .. very good idea .. if we both run away then neither of us will get blamed !! \then she went silent .. and she looked at him ..

but mr khan and before she could finish asad covered her mouth and said .. no one is running away .. then why all this she mumbled confused .. because i needed to tell you ..

zoya i love you ..and i want to be married to you and i needed you to know that before we got married ... i love you zoya .. i am going inside and if you think i will be a good husband for you you can come in and asad turned to leave ..uncovering her mouth which was now in an "o" shape and her eyes wide in shock ..

she ran and grabbed asads hand and slapped him and screamed allah miya whats wrong with you .. you idiot and hugged him ...

idiot asad asked hugging her back ?

how can you tell a girl you love her and walk away ? emotionally challenged man !! and she pushed him away ,,

stupid ,, really asad whats wrong with you .. of course i want you as my husband ... i love you too and a tear fell from her eye ..

zoya i .. asad started .. stay awy from me !! zoya moved away you are very mean

zoya please .. but zoya kept walking away

zoya !! and he pulled her wrist and twirled her into his arm ..

i love you zoya ...how when why ,i dont know ... i just know i love you more than anything !! so miss zoya farooqi will you accept me and become zoya ahmed khan ...

zoya looked at him aand whispered

yes jahapanah ..

and she walked into his arms and hugged him..

5 mins later ..

ahem.. if you dont mind leaving each others arms could you please come and attend your own wedding .. dilshaad ordered ..

asad and zoya let go of each other .. blushing and embarrasedand dilshaad led them inside and asad and zoya walked hand in hand smiling as the next part of their lives was about to begin ...

THANK YOU TO EVERYONE WHO READ MY TS AND ENCOURAGING ME TO CARRY ON ... YOUR COMMENTS ARE AWESOME AND I REALLY APPRECIATE THEM ... TILL I WRITE AGAIN XOXO
ZARA 😊
PLEASE COMMENT - DID EVERONE LIKE IT OR COULD HAVE BEEN BETTER ?
Edited by zara1ksg - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Read all 3 parts

It was a gr8 piece of work

Loved how Tanveer was caught

And the confession was amazing

Zoya sounded so cute when she said that they both can run away so that no one gets blamed



Thx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
brilliant update!:)
such a cute confession!:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
aww d confession was adorable... n d part was lovely...
thank u so much 4 d pm :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Amazing! The confession was so unexpected, but so Asya. Oh and Zoya saying that if they both run away - is just like her 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
nyc. A happy wala ending. Cnt soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
I totally love especially the confession beautifully done.
Classic how tanveer got caught sold herself down the river all because she is so confident in her lies.
Thank you for a wonderful read.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50

Awesome Update..👍🏼

Such a LOVELY Confession...
Loved the happy ending..❤️
Thnx for PM...
Edited by Khushi2187 - 12 years ago

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