AN ASYA TS !! THE TRUTH IS REVEALED updted pg 10

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HEY GUYS HOPE YOU LIKE IT .. SHOULD I CARRY ON .. THIS IS JUST THE FIRST PART LET ME KNOW IF YOU GUYS LIKE !!

tanu .. what are you doing ? you should be resting .. the doctor advised you to take bed rest for a week ..

i know jammy .. but look how sweet zoya is .. she brought this cake for me so i thought i will taste it .. and then go and rest ..

no tannu .. dont eat it now .. you rest and eat it later in the afternoon ok ..

no jammy .. its ok . i want to try it ..

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tanveer .. not a word plz .. come i will take you to your room .. please go and rest ..

but jammy .. before she could finish asad was pulling her upstairs to her room ..

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5 mins later asad coming down the stairs

yes prasad i am leaving for the office in 10 mins .. make sure all the files are in order for the meeting .. i need to get the deal done by tomorrow because my .. nikaah is in 2 days ..

ok prasad ill c u later ..

wow mr khan .. you all dressed up for the office zoya jokingly said as she came from her room .. you look very handsome in black ..

whatever miss farooqi.. and he went to get his bag from his room

zoya laughed and the cake box caught her attention with tanveer written on it ..

hmph .. jammy must have bought for his tannu this cake she thought sarcastically ..

miss farooqi please tell phupi i have left for the office and he got no reply ..

he turned around and saw her eating the cake ..

miss farooqi whats wrong with you ? you are eating the cake !!!

ha mr khan and its very yummy !!

stupid girl he muttered .. you buy the cake for tanu and now you are eating it yourself ..whatever im leaving ..

wait mr khan .. zoya ate another peice .. i never bought the cake i thought you bought it .. and before asad could say anything .. zoya carried on and by the way mr khan why would i buy tannu the cake .. and my fave blueberry cake ?

miss farooqi plz i dont have time to listen to you im going .. im getting late ..

fine go .. you never ever listen to what ... and silence

asad turned to see what made her stop talking and his world stopped ...

zoya!!!! and he ran to her body which was slumped on the floor ..

zoya!! wake up !! zoya !!! whats wrong ?? talk to me

zoyaaa!!!

asad rushed zoya to the hospital and the whole time her eyes were closed .. asads heart was racing and his all different thought were going through his mind ..

no .. he said .. no zoya you cant leave me !! he screamed to her lifeless body ..

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at the hospital ..

zoya was in the theatre with the doctors .. asad sat silent ,tears running down his face ..

asad . wheres my zoya .. what happend .. tell me .. asad speak up !! aapi screamed ..

asad sat there .. he was numb .. aapi i dont know he moaned ..

dilshaad took zeenath and consoled her , tanveer and najma sat next to them as they waited for the doctors ..

asad was pacing up and down .. dammit zoya he thought .. you cant leave me and he punched his fist in the wall ..

tanveer came and touched him but he shrugged her of with such force .. please leave me alone tannu and he went to stand near the theatr door ...

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2 hours later the doctor came out ..

doctor how is zoya .. asad and aapi screamed ,,

please everyone calm down the doctor warned

zoya is stable .. she is allowed only 2 family member for 2 days to seeher no1 else ..

zeenath you and asad go .. we can wait .. shukr to my zoya is ok dilshaad said ..

asad and aaapi were going in when the dr called

mr khan can i speak to you alone please ..

asad sat in the doctors office ..

whats wrong dr .. is zoya going to be ok ? asad asked nervously ?

look mr khan i dint want to discuss this in fot of th ladies as it is very disturbing ..zoya is stable but she is critical ... and we need to cure her within the next 12 hours or we could lose her !!!

lose her !!! asad stood up .. no doctor and cure her from what !!

mr khan ... zoya has ingested poison .. we pumped her stomach but im afraid the poison is in her blood now and we need to know what she took so that we can prescribe her an antidote ..

asad was shocked .. no doctor you must be wrong !!! how could she be poisened .. no one would want to hurt zoya !! no doctor ..

im afraid its true mr khan and from what i can see this is a fast acting poison so zoya would definitely ingested the poison minutes before she passed out .. mr khan please find out who zoya was around last and maybe they can help you figure out what she took .. otherwise im afraid we will lose her forever !!!

the doctor left and asad was in shock !! he fell to the ground !! zoya !! poison .. her lifeless body .12 hours all running through his mind and he screamed.. leting all he pain out .. dilshaad ran to him and held him ..

asad beta please ... you need to be strong .. if not for anyone then for zoya .. i heard what the doctor said .. its upto you if you really love zoya then you will fight for her asad !! find out who did this to her !!

i will ammi .. i will find out who did this and i swear i will kill them !! no1 hurts my zoya !!!

ammi im going home .. the poison has to be at home .. i will bring the cure for zoya .. i promise !!

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back at the khan house tanveer came back with asad as she was feeling sick ..

jammy i am going upto rest .. dont worry jammy zoya will be ok ..

asad was in his own world .. focused on finding out what zoya ingested that he ignored tanveer ..and he walked to where zoya fell down and looked for clues and he saw the cake box with a fork in it and he remembered zoya eating that !! he ran to the box and saw there was very little of the cake left and he was sure that had the poison in it !! but who did this ?

but this has tannus name on it he thought .. what if this is was meant for tannu .. im sure tannus ex husband , that stone eyed man did this !! i have to find him !!only he knows the poison .. tannu can only help she has to find him for me and he ran upstairs with the cak box and stopped right outside tanveers room and then he remembered !!!!

tannu told him

but look how sweet zoya is .. she brought this cake for me

zoya brought it with so much love

asad rubbed his head .. tannu said zoya brought it for her .. then y would zoya eat the cake ?

by the way mr khan why would i buy tannu the cake .!!.. he remembered zoya saying

and everything came to light .. zoya accusing tanveer !! tanveer covering her eye ..

zoya was right !! tanveer was not hu she sed she was ,, tanveer was the girl with the stone eye .. everthing she said was lies ..and zoya was in hospital because of her !!!

and he banged open the door ..

jammy aap ?

my name is asad !! and he stepped closer to her and grabbed her and pushed her on the wall holding her arms !!

SO IS IT GOOD SHOULD I CARRY ON ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Caarrry on! This was too good. I wish Tanveer would get caught like this or just caught at all. Gah. These episodes have been so frustrating!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Please continue soonn!! I loved it!!! And pm me when you update! (:
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Posted: 12 years ago
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y u left us in a cliffhanger? d part is awsum dear pls continue soon n dont forget to pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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definitely...its good...asad jst slap billi..wanna c tht...thnks 4 d pm..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woow!
Pls pls pls carry on! And pls pls pls PM me cor next updates! :))
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well u know what in next even if u update a long part with tanveer being beaten and beaten I'll be DAMN happy 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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U have to continue this...a very very interesting plot!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Continue continue! 😊 It's very good. Yupy Tanveer is caught. Hope Asad gives Tanveer a taste of her own medicine 😃
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u should continue and pm me when u do

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