An AsYa OS : DON'T Wake Me

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Hey all you lovely people
I know I m back to bug again, but guys its Sunday and its my day to post an OS.
Well it's after a long long time that I have written an OS. So do read it. It's utterly backwas😳



OS : DON'T WAKE ME

His hand reached out to close the buzzing alarm but it wasn't in its usual place,with closed eyes he continued the search and found it near his pillow, he opened his eyes and saw the time it was 8 am already. He sat up with a jolt "oh shit late again", he turned to his side screaming zoyaa. And found her sleeping peacefully, he nudged and shook her but she just smiled and held his hand closer to her chest and murmured "bs 5 min aur"

"Zoya we are late for the 4th time in two weeks,please uth jao"
"Allah Miyaah !! What's wrong??" Zoya asked groggily while sitting up.
"Your sleepy hands are wrong" he said.
"Oh really", she said holding up her hands to examine "I have one two three all five fingers perfectly", she trailed off sleepily.
" you keep hitting the snooze button repeatedly, and see from 6 am its 8 now" he said holding her hands n showed her the alarm clock besides their pillows.
"Oh did I ?? M still sleepy" she said putting her head in his lap, and laid down again.
She was the flame that could melt him like wax, "What's wrong with you zoya? Raat ko app soti nahi, aur subha mey uthti nahi" he said brushing her hair from her face and tucking it behind her ears.
"Raat ko app sone kb dete hain" she said innocently looking in his eyes and saw color creeping in his cheeks.
"Ye ilzaam hai,zoya. Mey ne Kya Kia?" Asad asked in his defence.
""App ko pata hai na mey app k bagairr nahi soti, phir kyun ate hain itna late?" Zoya said, facepalming herself"

" Ye tou mujhe pata hi nahi tha, waise bhi mey koi teddy bear nahi hoon jiss k bina princess ko neend nahi aye gi" said Asad pretending to be ignorant.
"Yeah exactly now we are married, what is the need for you to know anything,ye payaaar wayaar Ishq muhabbat sab shadi se pehle hote hain, aur shadi k bad bs subha uthaya nahi, raat ko soye nahi, subha subha couples payaaar ki baatein karte hain, and yahaan app sher ki tarha gurraa rahe hain" she ranted a typical wifey dialogue.

Asad felt bad about his behaviour, maybe he was getting too caught up in work that he was unable to give proper time n attention to her, and his lame pretence made her pour her heart like sparkling water, he couldn't ruin her morning anymore, but an instant idea got the better of him. It's all zoya ki sohbat ka asar that he could joke around with her. " zoya begum, app ki nazaar kamzoor hogai hai, chalein doctor k chalte hain"
"What's wrong with you Asad? App mera Mazak bana rahe hain, jayein mey app se baat nahi karti" zoya said making an adorable pouty face and folded her arms on her stomach.

"Meri Ankhon mey dekhein zoya, Kya app ko in mey pyaar nazar nahi ata" he said cupping her face his hands.

"Your eyes speak volumes, love hatred, passion, intensity and anger I can see everything, it's so complicated that I cannot see myself clearly in them" zoya answered straight forward.
The line intended for fun turned intense, zoya could be the sharpest n the dumbest person at the same time, Asad was caught in his own trap." I agree it might be complicated, but my passion is zoya, my anger and hatred is zoya that I cannot be with her all the time, my Love is zoya that is my life" Asad decoded the mystery of his eyes in front of his soul mate.
"I love you Asad" zoya said dumbstruck, they were man and wife of a few months, they weren't on physical level yet, but they were going strong. understanding and gelling with each other. yet Asad could surprise her in a blink of eye. He was her superman, but he didn't wear his underwear on his pants.she sighed mentally.
" I love you too" Asad reciprocated in the way zoya wanted, he rubbed his nose with her and added " but I don't like to be late"

This man was total OCD, romance mey bhi punctuality ghus gai, "I cannot sleep when you are not around" zoya confessed closing her eyes.
"And I cannot wake up when you around, with you by my side I have no worries of tomorrow, of a new morning. I love the feeling of being together in our own world" said Asad.
Zoya pounced on him and hugged him and brought the covers on them, and said "it's our world today, don't wake us UP" .


The end

So guys should I hide ??? It's after a long time I wrote something.
Rocks to criticism 🤗

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Edited by blueflames - 12 years ago


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WaqtZaya thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res

why are they soo ro-man-sick 😳

p.s. : Whahahahahhaa! 😆 😆 🤣 Read : US US] 🤣 🤣
Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 12 years ago
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think you ... great 👏
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awwiee!!!dis ws really cute😳...bt itna chotu sa os *pouting lyk zo*😆...bdw luvd their saat-savere ishq wala luv bickering session😛...do write more on dem😃
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this is so totally Awesome!! So sweet, cute and so so romantic!
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This was soo freaking awwweee😳
I mean awefully mindblowing 👏
hayyee how i larveed it appi😳
hugs to you 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww this was so cute 😃 Short and sweet.

You should write more often Saba
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This was seriously goood!👏👏👏

Lovely!😊
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RES!
unres..~! 😛

awww...its sooo sweett..! suchha cute OS man..!
Zoe checking her fingers 😆 😆
best part was Zoe sleeping again in Asad's lap.and he caressing her hair..aww..wow!
keep writing and Pm-ing..! 😛 😆

Edited by nits_viratholic - 12 years ago
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i love it awsome os 😊

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